Well, I liked this scenario, but the victory points...after selectively beating down the Russians and killing enough British ships, I won on TURN 8...
My suggestion? Victory Points by City Location only, or get rid of them entirely...the point of the scenario is who could end the war diplomatically or who can take over the most territory; you can win in a stalemate by simply exploiting AI weaknesses in poorly placed troops, especially on the eastern front.
Also Primie Minister got mad at me for planting a spy. You might want to check that spelling; of course, I played on past victory, and its very good; but it needs the victory point win taken out, or placed at like 1,500,000 or something...it looks like it should be long and drawn out...
It looks like the Germans can not build new submarines in this scenario...I can't figure out the reasoning for this though...also, German tanks are completely useless compared to the cheaper and more powerful Kaiserjager...a way of balancing this would be advanced tanks as a prerequesette for kaiserschlacht. The Kaiserjager definition is also gramattically incorrect (Equipped with is an incomplete sentence).
Also, I'd make Advanced Tactics dependant on Biplane or Zepplins, because you need some planes sufficient to air transport for significant numbers...though paratroopers aren't really historically accurate to this scenario, since I do not believe they were used in this war...I might be wrong about that though.