The pre-AFSNES I.

Nothing compared to what we have seen (particularly that monster Dachs just posted) but here it is....

On Governing the Jews


If Jews are one thing, they are hard to govern. Even in their own land under their own king they will not bow and scrape to anyone but their g-d, HaShem. Whenever a king gets too haughty, they rise up in rebellion; whenever the rich get too rich, they rise up in rebellion; whenever the poor get too poor, they rise up in rebellion; whenever the interpretation of the Law becomes veers too far off centre, they rise up in rebellion. Because of this, the government of Israel has evolved to be complex, large, and unstable. Kings, prophets, kohanim, Nasis, poskim, rabbis, shoftim, Av Beit Dins, and numerous other all compete for the power of government in Israel, which while leading to instability, also leads to capability and accountability. One good thing about governing the Jews is that no matter what, a bad king can not rule for long.

On the King of the Jews


Ever since the days when Yeshai ben Oved, the grandson of the beloved Rut the convert from Moab, was anointed by the last judge and first prophet Shmu’el as king of the united Twelve Tribes bringing an end to the Age of Judges, Israel has been a monarchy. The kings of the Jews are said to rule explicitly through divine appointment; should they commit sin grave enough to loose HaShem’s favour, then they are meant to loose the crown. Thus, even though the king reigns as the supreme earthly power over the Jews, he must still submit to the much higher temporal power of the one true king, HaShem, and those who represent His will on earth.

On the Prophets of HaShem


Though the prophets hold no official role within the governing halls of Jerusalem, they are essential in understanding how one governs the Jews. The prophets are, in fact, the complementary partners to the kings. Where the kings hold within their hands supreme temporal power, drawing from the secular and the mundane, the prophets hold with them the power of HaShem himself. For this reason the prophets throughout the Kingdom of Israel’s history have been successful in gathering large crowds of the dispossessed to them and leading their followers to the toppling of an apparently unworthy king and the establishment of a new dynasty with the anointing of a new king. Though the prophets are thus responsible for the instability that Israel suffers, they are also responsible for maintaining accountability of government to HaShem and His people and thus for maintaining the prosperity of the Golden Age.

On the Rabbis and the Kohanim


More than anything, even more than they are hard to govern, the Jews are a people of faith, even in how they are governed. This has led to two classes of religious leaders, the rabbis and the kohanim, gaining great power in Jerusalem. On the one hand, the kohanim, the priests of the Temple, represent the established order, clinging to the old interpretations of their traditions and the old hierarchy of power. Meanwhile, the rabbis, literally “teachers” and leaders of both the great schools of learning and interpretation and the local congregations, represent the poor and the oppressed, and stand for change and progress. It is in their schools that new interpretations of the old traditions and scriptures are developed and it is from their ranks more often than not that the prophets emerge. Thus, the kohanim and rabbis form a polarity to one another, expressed not only in the sides they support in disputes but in the powers they are delegated, with the kohanim forming a large portion of the central government and the rabbis the vast majority of local government. However, both the kohanim and the rabbis remain dedicated in their support of HaShem and ever willing to remove a corrupt king.

On the Shoftim


Though the Age of Judges is long past, the shoftim (literally “judges” or “divine judges”) remain a strong force in governing the Jews. Over time they have evolved from the charismatic and prophetic leaders and preachers that defended the Israelites from Egyptians, Aramaeans, Karung, Phoenicians, Mittanians, Sea Peoples, and numerous others into effective legislatures and temporal rulers. Despite this transition, the definition of who is a shofet and who isn’t remains as lax as ever. Their numbers swell and shrink over the years ranging from a few dozen to a few hundred at any one time. It is this flexibility that has allowed the shoftim to produce from among their ranks some of the most effective and charismatic leaders the world has seen, with nearly all new dynasties coming from among their ranks.

On the Sanhedrin


While the king may rule supreme, he must always be wary of the Sanhedrin. The Sanhedrin represents the religious authority (kohanim and rabbis) of the kingdom, advising the king, making rulings on cases based on halakha, and generally reminding the rest of the government of Israel’s theocratic nature. Led by the Nasi (usually the Kohen Gadol, the high priest of the Temple), the Sanhedrin and its members the poskim (and indeed most of Israel) take great pride in the level of autonomy from the king they maintain. Often enough, with the rising of a prophet, the Sanhedrin turns against the king and forms the central power in revolt. In this way the Sanhedrin maintains itself as being nearly on par to the power of the king himself.

On the Knesset


Whereas the Sanhedrin represents the religious authority, the Knesset represents the secular authority. Often enough, the Sanhedrin and Knesset come into direct conflict with legislation passed by the Knesset being stuck down as halakhically illegal. However, the Sanhedrin and Knesset are fully capable of working together, the Knesset often falling quickly behind the Sanhedrin in following a prophet to the dethroning of an inappropriate king. Indeed, the Knesset almost always takes centre stage in rebuilding the government, with one of the more charismatic and effective shoftim emerging from among its ranks to establish a new dynasty. Thus, while all the other branches (excepting the king) contribute to the instability of Israel, the Knesset and its leader the Av Beit Din act as stabilising forces, replacing old dynasties with knew ones and maintaining the delicate clockwork of the kingdom.

- Yosef ben Malachi of Eilat
 
Nothing compared to what we have seen (particularly that monster Dachs just posted) but here it is
I'm a monster? Oh, how sweet...I love you, too, Isry. ;) Mine was easier to write, since it's mostly dialogue and is a little formulaic. There are some changes, tho...anyone figure out the ref yet?

This NES has got an entirely sick amount of stories. It's so awesome.

I forget, when exactly are orders due, das?
 
This NES has got an entirely sick amount of stories. It's so awesome.

Good point, better get on and do this story I have running around the back of my head :p

Of the Nubians and their Kings​

Thus In the year 986BC [1] King Arrakkamani of the Nubites, founded a new City far to the South. Called Moreic, the distance that it put between the heart of power and the Egyptions proved to releive some of the pressure that they were otherwise under. And the vast amounts of easily accessable Iron and the forests with which to fuel the blast furnaces came to be an added boon to their prize....[2]

In the year 955BC King Thurmani completed the trasnfer of power to the new capital. The priests demanded that he sacrafice himself to appease God(s) [3]. This was the customary practice, and was due to the Nile failing to flood for the year, and the only foods brought in was by the Red sea axis of Cities.

King Thurmani instead had the priests killed, and built himself a great pyramid at Moreic, and from that time forth all were buried there. Thus the old capital reduced in importance, becoming instead a hub of trade on the Nile, that ever troubled trade route, as it had Egyption Gatekeepers, and the King would rather support the Red Sea axis of cities, for they proved able to trade with places most distant.....

In the year 922BC the growing mastery of the Nubites iron working was becoming known to the people of the Red Sea and to some extend the fertile crescent. King Iea undertook at this time to conquor the Erites [4] to the South of him, to gain more control over the resources and trade routes through africa.

[1] BC? I hate using it in stories....well, unless I create a Great Prophet at approx 0BC
[2] I'm thinking of going down a monotheistic path due to the dualistic Egyptions and the Monotheistic isrealites that I have interactions with.
[3] Its intresting; read! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mero%C3%AB never knew about this :p.
[4] Erites; arbitally named peoples to the south of me in the great white void. Apologies das.
 
I've decided to do another story in order to get a story bonus.

The Karrist Gods- Other Deities:
Besides Yarra and Arvak, there was another major god- the god of agriculture. It was to him people prayed that the crops would grow. He was also God of Peasants. His name- Eshar.

Eshar was supposed to live in the river, helping the peasants by taking care of the harvest. Appropriately, the High Priest of Eshar also was, in practice, the one who did the most to stand up for the good of ordinary people. He was still an unelected, autocratic man with a paternalist view, but unlike the others his aim was usually the good of the people, though he believed them too stupid to have a say.

Normally, his potential power (the people would revolt if the High Priest of Eshar asked them too) was restrained- the High Priest of Arvak could threaten to cut off his food supply. But things came almost to disaster when the most formidable High Priest of Eshar even seen to the day emerged- Rezel, posthumously called "The Great".

The issue went to a head when the King, the High Priest of Yarra, and the High Priest of Arvak all supported raising taxes on grain at a time when the harvest had been poor. The common people were suffering, and had but one champion- the High Priest of Eshar. Rezel was the first High Priest of Eshar to stick his head into these things- until now the High Priest of Eshar had been pretty strong, but with greater powers over his head he had done nothing for the common people.

The King, King Pskov III, thought this pathetic, and told the High Priest of Arvak to cut off his food supply. This the High Priest did, and the trio waited out for surrender.

But Rezel had two advantages- he was of hardy stock, and could last on very little food. And, far more importantely, given what was happening, ordinary people were happy to give it to him. He genuinely cared for them, and moved from place to place so as not to be a burden.

His aim was to move throughout the country and rally the common folk into revolt. By the time King Pskov realised this, he had travelled the east of the country, and many captains of the army supported him.

But King Pskov, now he knew what was happening, had a plan. His advantage was the navy- Rezel had none, and he could not cross the Nile. Pskov would play upon his compassion by raising taxes even higher on his side of the Nile until victory was his.

Rezel decided to face King Pskov on the Nile, trusting to Yarra. He thought he was doomed to annilation, but decided to save all of Karung from the taxes or die trying. But in retrospect, he need not have feared.

The King's supporters faced a revolt of the common people, and King Pskov was in trouble. He had one recourse- diplomacy. He lowered his taxes to the rise he had wanted for all Karung, and decided to negotiate with Rezel. In return, Rezel would disband his forces and tell the people to go back to their homes.

It turned into a match of rhethoric, Pskov advocating a theory of Divine Right, while Rezel pointed to the fact that Eshar cared about the ordinary man, and that without his support the kingdom would turn to a standstill. All contenders belived a battle of the Gods was going at the same time- Eshar against Yarra. Yarra was the stronger god, but the common people wanted Eshar to win despite.

With the help of the High Priest of Yarra, Pskov argued Rezel into a corner. He said that if Eshar stood up against Yarra, Yarra would strike him down as he struck down Arvak. Rezel sasid that as Yarra overcame Arvak, Eshar would overcome Yarra- he was now a tyrant, and deserved to fall.

Pskov said that the sound of lightning scatters birds- Yarra's symbol was lightning, and Eshar's the eagle. Rezel said that eagles fly above the clouds. Pskov then said that from above the clouds, an eagle cannot stop lightning raining on the earh.

In pure military terms, Rezel should have won- he had roughly a third of the army on his side, and thousands of common people- they had the moral high ground, and higher morale. But logically Yarra should have Eshar, so Rezel conceded to a humiliating peace.

The taxes would remain, and Rezel would step down as High Priest. But the King would promise to help his subjects relieve the drought by devoting a fifth of the taxes to drought relief.

Religion had saved the structure of the country, but the common people were now a semi-legitimate political weapon. And in future, the wielder of the weapon, when he dared, would be the High Priest of Eshar.
 
I'm a monster? Oh, how sweet...I love you, too, Isry. ;) Mine was easier to write, since it's mostly dialogue and is a little formulaic. There are some changes, tho...anyone figure out the ref yet?

OOC: To be honest, I usually skip every one of your stories :p They're usually large HUGE bodies of text which I'm afraid can't hold my attention considering their topic, the whole Romaness of it strikes me as quite unattractive too. There is usually nothing about the condition of the human spirit but the glory of Rome, determination or etc etc ;)

I'm such a hypocrite
 
Oh, the things I miss at Anime Expo!

EDIT2: The above does not include Sardinia and Karung which (despite the name of the second one) appear to be semi-realistic.

Oho, many thanks. We are eccentric, but realistic! An honorary courtesy mask to you!

Humourous speculation: without selection against uggo's, coupled with the genetic problems of small and isolated population, the Sardianians shall develop into monsterious things (creating a nice reinforcing loop with the mask), giving rise to legends of 'Masked giants and Cyclopi' lasting to the far future ;).

Cute. :P At least we'll resonate into the future! KUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Nice stories all, btw. Dachs, that was a monster of a story. ;D
 
They are the only character based stories so far. :p

Well, Dis also wrote a very short character story, technically.

Good stories, everyone (especially Dachs, ofcourse).
 
OOC: Start me in Bourdex, in France.

We are the Caeon. When the great gods of creation formed this world we were their first born. We were given the ruler of this world and it's people. Now our armies will march forward to conquer the world of men, under the words and laws of the gods of creation. Let it be known. The Caeon will not rest until the world is in their grasp and the world knows that the gods of creation are the only truth.


Luak, god of fire is the fifth god of creation. He came from outside our world and burned in his way everything that he wished. He brought the flame of life into this world and made the first small vermin. The rats are his sign and swiftness and carelessness are his ideals. The tribes Caeon-Luak are not thinkers. They are nothing but pure warriors that have gave their lives to fighting in the name of Luak and the gods of creation. Fire of conquest is their tool of living. They bring fear and destruction everywhere to go. They clean the land before the other tribes join to rebuild. The people that they conquer become slaves of Luak until the Luak leaves the area to give it to one of the other tribes.

The great fire god Luak have given his words.
'Destroy in my name, and burn the innocent. Trap the other gods in a cage of fire. I am fire. I am fire of life. I come. I destroy. I bring the lands back to the beginning, for after the destruction of fire life will rise once again. This time under my rule. The fire of Luak shall burn all this world first. And the gods of creation will show their first sign. I will send The Oracle of the sacred Flame to give the people of Caeon the first sign of the coming. Luak fire shall cleans this world.'


The armies of Caeon are made mostly and almost completely from Luak's followers. One may find himself tied to a tree being set on fire if he looses to them and does not beg for mercy. They will stop at nothing but the conquest of all other people and the burning of all lands. When the Caeon conquer new lands they are the first to settle in them. They burn all lands and replenish it with better ground. They destroy all the life that were there and bring what they believe is the Caeon perfected life. Usually agriculture plants and animals that were domesticated. Rats are considered holy to the Luak tribe as they are numerous and destruction. Fast and not thinking. The Luak main ceremony is the creation of large wooden closed houses which they fill with Rats and than set them on fire, opening the doors and letting the rats run freely in the lands bringing fire everywhere. Destroying all that was there before. When rat infestation hits their farmland they do the same ceremony and restart all farming. After 10 years the Luak moves on to newly conquered lands leaving the farmland and houses well built behind them to make room for the other three tribes. They are the armies of Caeon. And builders of the first level of infrastructure. May Luak's fire smoke all that exist now.
 
So, getting back to the topic of earlier deadlines, I think the optimal one in this case would be tommorow (Monday 20:00), usual time. Note that I would have more difficulties with getting late orders than previously, so do try to hurry up. Oh, and for most people with PC neighbours, it is advisable to make some precautions for the event of a major defeat.
 
do I have to send orders? It's kind of obvious what I want to do :p
 
It couldn't hurt, but if you don't then yes, I do get the picture. Basically, send them if you have anything else to add.
 
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