End of Empires - N3S III

A Brother's Letter
Comparing the Opulensi and Ilfolk musical societies


Dear sister,

I hope you are well. The tides have carried me pleasantly away to the southernmost of the Ilfolk colonies; my travelsman took some serious pay of course, to ensure the Barbar threat was compensated for splendidly. Do you still play the dakrilsa? I miss the beauty of our music up north and I hope the vile invaders you mention have not destroyed all of our secrets with their fire. Opulensi music is that of beauty, the music here strange and primitive. However, my paygiver was sombre in mind as he sent me; I am sure this is my last journey, and he knows that, having no further funding to pay my expeditions with the ongoing war. I am to return home just after having sent this last letter, but do not know if I'll make it in time to see our dear mother alive. Tell her a warm hello and that I wish for her to find Iehor in death, in case her illnesses bring her away.

Regardless, along with this, I send you my last letter of my studies of the Ilfolk musics. Make sure they make it to the college library where our priests can properly catalogue and interpret it. If this letter is missed, my studies may be lost forever.

The Ilfolk seemingly have a very distinct number of harmonic phrases they're interpreting as calling to different spirits of this world. The spirit of love, "Kavraka", makes ground for a number of musical structures centered around two mellow-sounding harmonies utilizing a middle harmony to bridge both, as far as I've heard in my listenings. But the melody has been impossible to notate with certainty. Variations of the melody is plentiful and the musicians don't even play it in one tempo or structure, often giving room to improvized melodies or rhythms, and it seems they select instrumentation for the melody at impulse, beating rocks, logs or even their stomachs to supply the vocals (That are lyricless, mind you.) This is a baffling difference from the enlightened musics, but I assume the Ilfolk race is still searching for the enlightened core in their melodies, the path of Arasos in it and its natural order, making the playwrights naïve searchers of truth, like children putting their hands into fire.

Searching for the essential melody behind Kavraka, the first composed piece that they vary over, I asked a number of tribesmen. They all pointed to Slangtempl, so I traveled there. As you know, Slangtempl is the central administrative unit of these islands (if there ever was one; it is currently the military quarters of our colonial administration, and it's a marvellous place with plenty of imagery and carvings in its walls contrary to the rest of this barbaric island) so I was quite surprised to be told that the first composition was there. I had been there plenty of times; where could it be? I had found no records of anything beyond simple lineage-keeping and mythological writings (boresome ones at that). Where was this treasured composition?

When going back to Slangtempl, I asked the master priest there of the supposed origins of Kavraka. He answered with some spiritual mumblejumble about the supposed spirits that were everywhere, but when I asked him more concretely about the melody's whereabouts, he lightened up in understanding and told me to follow him, which I of course did. He then brought me through a number of the many empty rooms and tunnels of Slangtempl until we, again, were in an empty room. Here, he stopped, telling me that we were there. I thought he was either jesting (or again refer to his superstition) but he did point out towards the right wall. I looked in the direction of his hand, but saw nothing; only the wall stood there. I asked him whether he had been taking soul-eaters, and laughing, he told me to look closer. So I investigated the wall; and then I realized what he meant. It was the carvings; I had always known they were there, these small symbols, but had only believed them to be beautifying mosaics. But in between the carved imagery of demons and deities, the patterns, lines and symbols must have been akin to our notation. And they were everywhere - that must have been the reason for so many empty rooms of this structure: The structure needed walls - sheets - on which the priests carved their tribes' melodies. Slangtempl must contain thousands of pieces, but our administration has not cared for the carvings at all. Infact, I believe a few walls have already been torn down to easen entry and exit of the structure. Lucky we are not dealing with enlightened music, of course. It's only Ilfolk music.

But while overwhelmed, I can not read the notation. That is the primary reason I send you this letter; I hired a burglar to enter the temple at night and break the Kavraka melody out of the wall. The below is what he tore out of the wall according to the directions I gave him. I can not interpret this - it is important that you bring this stone staff to the scholars so they can decipher these strange symbols.

Hurry, dear sister.

With love,
Uras

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(Yes the above is a notation system I made for the Ilfolk. Enjoy!)
 
Inserted the first clause for obvious reasons. Would you like to name the treaty after some island in the Acayan Sea NK, or wherever the Forum is located presently?

1.) Hostilities between the alliance of Leunan Republic, Parthe, Lesa, and Cayola and the alliance of Iolha, Gadia, and Cayan will cease.
2.) Iolha will be allowed annex Arana (in its entirety) and Cayola (in its entirety) which the Leunan Republic will recognize.
3.) Leun will be allowed to annex Gadia (in its entirety) which Iolha will recognize.
4.) Any persons displaced by the war or by its resolution (this treaty) will be allowed to migrate and resettle as they wish without interference by any of the signatories. This explicitly includes the Gadian monarcy, nobility, and merchantry and also any Leunans in Arana.
5.) The Lesans will withdraw from northern Iolha and in all other regions affected by the war but not mentioned, things will return to the way they were before the war, status quo ante bellum.



Ratified and Signed by (representatives of) the Assembly of the Leunan Republic.
 
Signed, Princeling Harca Thewen, General of the Partheca Forces in Gadia
Signed, King Dawentar Thewen of the Kingdom of Parthe
 
Once again did Ayasi Fifth-Frei seclude himself in his chambers, abstaining from fine food and wine and not touching his wife or any of his concubines for five days. Out of the mortals, he spoke only to the humblest of the palace servants, who brought him what food and water he was willing to accept, and told him news of the outside world. But for the most part, the young ruler devoted his time to prayer and meditation, and the reading of the holy texts, seeking guidance from Opporia and his Prophet.

He complained to Him: “I have been wronged, my Lord and Guide. My brother Tarci was telling the truth. The malice I have been warned of but did not believe in took hold of my Empire in my absence, or perhaps it was there all along and simply came out of the hiding.”

The prince spoke: “When I returned to my high city, they greeted me with flowers and with dances, with music and with pennants. The joy of celebration was in the streets, but it turned out to be a comedy mask, hiding unease and bad rumours and envy behind smiles and laughter and colour. As soon as I reached the palace, the illusion dissipated in the air like smoke. All hurried to buy my favour, seeking to use me as a tool against their opponents. Gifts and petitions were forced on me before I could dismount.”

Thus the Ayasi went on, sitting in his praying chair, his head to the ceiling: “Those things are not unheard of: for a councilor to be disliked by the nobility, for the local bigmen to ignore the orders from the capital, for theologists to accuse each other of heresy in the heat of a fine argument. But all of that and worse happened in my Empire at once, and I do not know whether to blame myself or the Empire.”

Also, he said: “Horse Family-Chief Firost and Councillor Arfari are bitter foes made even more so by their old age, and Verti the Patriarch regards Sokar the Priest’s teachings as a personal insult. Such personal rivalries are the stuff of stories, and while they can be hazardous in times of peril, if my Empire was strong then I would not be worried by them overmuch. Likewise, if the Pig Family is offended by Councillor Arfari’s appointments, that would be something that I could resolve by making the Pig Family-Chief speak with Councillor Arfari, or by fighting their champion. Honour and shame would leave them with no choice but to accept things as they are.”

“But that is not what I have been confronted with, my God! This struggle is not with people or families, but with court factions that pretend to not exist, hiding from shame without honour, and working with pure reason and deceit rather than passion and defiance. They make their allegiance known by their clothes, yet never quite put in words so as not to be forced to answer for them. The Silver Capes tell me of the abuses and treasons of the Godlike office-holders and the Iralliam priesthood, while the Leather Hats insist that our bureaucrats have lost all faith and have become atheists at best or Aitahists at worst, and now seek to drain the Holy Moti Empire with their taxes. The Sapphire Rings would never deign to complain about me or my land grants directly, but there is not a friend that I rewarded that they would not attempt to ruin in my eyes. The Orange Sashes hear this and tell me that my southern subjects should be punished with new taxes; even though the current ones are hated as it is!”

“The Velvet Robes seemed foolish enough when they charged that the priests intended to fool me into ruining my honour by attacking the Aitahists. But then the Green Gloves hinted that you, my God, would look well on it if I disgraced myself even more by letting the priests put anyone they want on trial for disrespect and sacrilege! As if I have not heard where such proposals as theirs lead, or how such license served to multiply Evil and diminish Good in other lands. Yet it seems that the priests themselves might want to strike out against Sokur’s words with force. They would destroy my family’s hard-earned peace if I would let them. Thank you, oh Luminiscent One, that it is still mine to deny. But I do not even know for how long that will last, for even the Golden Hats are starting to give me their wise advice. Today they offer their services to restore order on the markets. Tomorrow they will be demanding higher salaries. The day after that, they’ll put Tarci on throne instead of me!”

With that last shout, the prince jumped up from the chair, wandering back and forth in a disgruntled and dismayed state. His hands reached for his sword, his brow was furrowed, and unease boiled in his blood.

“I shouldn’t speak evil against Tarci. If offered my throne, he would not accept it, though that is both out of his loyalty to me and because he prefers to stay in the shadow. A shame, that, is it not? His mind is more suited to this task than mine, I feel. Perhaps I should just abdicate and let him rule. Or maybe I should leave him as my Councillor, and leave to conquer the West after the South, as was my plan…”

And again, the Ayasi stopped, rubbing his head. Hunger ate at him, yet he bid himself to be patient and temperate, so as to clear his mind for the Good God’s advice.

“I ask you this, source of my power and all goodness! What should I do? Should I go to the West, or should I stay here? Should I be the Ayasi in name and deed, or should I be a general as I wanted? Shall I confront all those who plot against me while pretending to be in my service, or shall I put myself above them, and seek to spread your word and my law in honest battle instead?!”

“Opporia! Do I stay or do I leave?!”

And through the echo coming from the golden render of his private chamber’s tall ceiling, the pale prince heard an answer.
 
Farubaida o Caroha
Holy Moti Empire
Brunn
Cyve
Karapeshai Exatai (Karal faction)
Seehlt
Sharhi
Dehr
Dulama Empire (Mora faction)?
Haina?
Naran
Trahana
Farea?
Leun
Lesa
Parthe
Rihnit
Dziltocampal

Ilfolk
Laitra Empire

Around 11 hours remaining.

I would prefer to see more orders before updating again.
 
OOC: Basically you want it tonight? I will get it ASAP.

I was going to finish up that Partheca alphabet I was working on, but Orders>Stories any day. :)
 
Song of the Exiles

May they be accompanied by Aitah
may they be made in firm in their religion
may they be removed from evil
and encounter the path of goodness
may they escape from all perils.

The Song of Death and Knowledge

You absolutely must know
the foundation of those who live.
What is wrong with not knowing Faronun
is that you know not the order of life,
the life of the Most-Merciful One.
In the future you will certainly die
for life leads certainly to death.
If you die without having lived
without memories of Her, your
life is fruitless...

What is wrong with not knowing Seshweay
is that your speech is confused and far from good.
You know not the levels of the language,
for a king, a warrior, a poet,
for a relative, for The Lady,
a lord and parents.
The proper manner of speaking
is founded upon Seshweay language.
In the the end, this is the means to know
yourself...

The Love Song of the King

"O, wretched King,
do not grieve so,
for your father will stand by you
in conquering the world.
But you must marry, Your Highness.
Take this child as your wife,
a graceful maiden of beauty
named Ayeetah.
She will come in person,
by means unknown.
She will approach Your Highness
and you shall know her by these signs..."

Now when His Highness heard this
he sat staring before himself in
speechless amazement.
Within his heart
His Highness spoke,
"This is difficult, I think.
Is this the assistance of Ayasay?
For it is a spirit which has come."
His Highness pondered in his heart:

"Whatever this means,
if it the assistance of the Ayasay
then there is nothing which is
forbidden to me
to serve the Ayeetah.
The signs of the Ayasay,
reach as far as the Ancestors."

His Highness spoke softly,
"If you are truly steadfast,
send your child
and I will make her my wife.
And stand by me in war:
let my warriors be victorious in battle"

Ayasay said,
"O, Your Highness, fear not"
Ayasay then disappeared
from before him. It was early
dawn.

The Song of Strife

Whoever holds firm to Her,
for that person, a weapon is She.
If faith in Her,
is taken into battle,
there will be victory in battle.
The citadel will fall and be destroyed,
the enemy shall be cast down,
destroyed, gone.
If they do not submit, the enemy will die.
If you defeat them quickly,
the destruction of the enemy will be easy
through the power of Her, that is,
the reciting of,
how many thousands,
ten thousands, hundred thousands,
millions
are the sayings of She, the Most Merciful.
Therefore hold firm in her.

The Song of Love or The Child's Song

The things She does for love,
for us who are not worthy.
She descends down to us,
out of love, for she is
love, forever and eternal,
love, love, love.

The Song to the Opulensi

"Sir, every nation must stand by
the duties and customs of their religion.
But Opulensi don't concern themselves
with their religion but with profit.
Therefore they are weak in war.

The proof is evident:
when they wish to destroy the Federation,
they fail and the good among them suffer ill.
We against a hundred enemies,
horse, and merchant, dung and spice,
yet we have never been defeated.

We rise, under Her guidance,
remain true to Her.
Indeed we are blessed.
There are many difference among us,
in how we love Her.
But those who honor Her,
are of her, and are all creations of Her,
and this is how we thrive."

Nodding his head, the Opulensi spoke,
"Yes, this is all true"

The Song of Lords

The son of a wheat-cart driver,
if chosen by the Lady,
is not too lowly to be a King
and does no damage to religion.
If there should be an official
who was originally the song of a villager,
who serves and thus receives a princess,
there is no fault remaining.
If he is capable and brave,
this pillar is still an official although
descended from a villager.
 
And with that awesome intro from Masada, the orders of the Farubaida o Caroha are submitted. May all those who have made themselves enemies of the Pentapartite Federation rue their base incaution!
 
Logic

The Opulensi speak of enlightenment but worship gold. Jitanu the great fraud told the Opulensi that this was right and just. But Jitanu would think that the murderer could attain enlightenment through the perfection of his craft! Those who came before said that this was not the case, and that enlightenment could come only to those who were good. In this view: wealth is not worth; gold is not great; merchant is not God. This view is the same as ours. Where Jitanu would speak of wealth leading to enlightenment, we speak of worth, of good, leading to enlightenment and the power of tradition and ancient practice.

Protest

Is it enlightened to beat ones servant? Is it right to visit the prostitute? Is it right to spurn one's own child born of that prostitute? Is it right to whip the poor to work harder? To withhold wages? To starve the reluctant? To steal one's men for the galleys? How is this just? Is that what enlightenment is like? Dare we then question whether it is worth attaining?
 
End of Empires - Update Twenty
To Dream of Ruin

Ten Years
560 - 570 SR by the Seshweay Calendar
449 - 459 RM by the Satar Calendar
275 - 285 IL by the Leunan Calendar
550 - 560 SH by the Sharhi Calendar


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“Of course! Haiaou is giving them happiness, and they are sharing none of it with me! No matter, I’ll take it for myself.” - From the Tale of Graeo

"What would happen...if they won?"

"If the slaves rose up and killed us?"

"Yes."

"Then they would be the Satar, and we would be the slaves." - Satores, later Prince of the Arrow, and his father


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As the sun sets in the east, so it must in the west be high noon. Winter in the north is summer in the south, and the death of one creature oft means abundance for another. So it is with the natural world.

But not the world of men. It is itself like a man, whose failing heart means little good for the extremities; likewise, the death of one civilization does not ensure prosperity of its neighbors. Too often, the fall of one will mean only ill for the rest, like the ripples of a pond, disturbed in the center, growing in rings until the whole pond is disturbed, serenity but a memory on the broken surface.

The Opulensi Empire had been in free-fall for nearly a decade, and its enighbors had all pounced. Word had it that the end was nearing ever closer for that ancient empire. The mood in the Farubaida grew more and more jubiliant as time went on – their main trading rival on the Nakalani seemed altogether doomed, and the war with the Kothari had proceeded to satisfaction thus far. Indeed, preparations were being made to bring the Exatai to its knees, hopefully ending the greatest remaining threat to Helsia.

Perhaps it was a little premature.

Though the Carohan military had grown impressively since the last major war, and indeed, they outnumbered the Kothari, they had enemis on multiple fronts. Even with the decline of the Opulensi, they had to commit significant forces to that frontier, and left an army of some seventy thousand encamped near Subal. Against this, the Kothari could commit nearly their entire field army – well over ninety thousand, with nearly a four-to-one cavalry advantage. A pitched battle would surely favor the Kothari.

The Carohans, though, had a card up their sleeve. Their contacts in the Exatai were spread thickly among the enormous slave population, and enacted a clever plan. Knotted cords were passed from slave to slave – innocuous to any overseer, but with a hidden message. Every dawn, they would untie a knot. When the cord was fully undone, it was time to attack. Distributing weapons, especially in a realm waried by war, proved a bit trickier, but still well within the capabilities of the Farubaida.

Simultaneously attacking farms all along the River Had, the slaves presented the Exatai with a frustrating dilemma. If they attacked the Carohans, they might be able to cut off the rebellion's source of weapons and organization, but they would expose themselves to the rebellion; attacking the rebellion would leave them exposed to the Farubaida. But the Exatai had men to spare: it devoted a significant force to suppressing rebel movements along the river valley, and took a somewhat depleted host northward to attend to the Carohans in Subal. Even though the Farubaida now held the numerical advantage, the Satar still had many more cavalry, and the scales were almost evenly balanced now.

Even while the armies approached one another, however, the Farubaida pressed its other advantage – their enormous fleet. Swiftly crushing Kothari resistance on the water in the Battle of the Delta (564), they almost immediately had free reign to attack the entire northern Koathari coast. They were quite happy to use it: amphibious raids inflicted some damage on the cities of Palmyra and Jakauii. More significant was the seaborne infiltration of the Palmyar region of the Exatai – which allowed the Farubaida to foment another, somewhat smaller slave rebellion there as well.

All this was clearly just a distraction, however – if a decisive blow was to be struck early in the war by either side, it would be at Subal.

And suddenly, it seemed like everything went wrong at once. The Kothari had expected some supply problems here, but soon both armies were beset by them; the region was soon denuded of crops. Attacking swiftly, hoping to strike before the rebellion seriously affected them, the Kothari met the Carohans in battle just south of Subal, near a village called Nadramai. The larger Carohan army advanced in a great arc, hoping to stifle any attempts at encirclement by the Kothari, but the Satar army had other plans in mind. Attacking directly into the center of the Carohans, the Satar cataphracts nearly broke their foes with the first charge.

The Carohans fought back viciously, but the army started to bow inwards under the pressure in the middle; soon they seemed in danger of getting cut in two.

The banners of the wolves rampant across the field, the Satar moved to press their advantage, but soon fell prey to a new twist: a sudden storm rolling in from the sea. The clouds slammed into the coast rapidly, and rain fell in sheets, almost a hurricane in its ferocity, and the battlefield turned into a morass of mud and slime. The cataphracts ground almost to a halt, unable to make use of their superb mobility in the combination of confined quarters and awful conditions. The mostly-infantry force of the Carohans pressed their advantage, and the Farubaidan general Paetronau directed his reserves into the mess, hoping to rout the Satar all at once.

The Kothari had little taste for such a struggle, and began to withdraw, the Carohans giving pursuit, but both armies soon almost lost themselves in the driving rain and winds. The battle had to be broken off, and as the storm continued, neither side could fight for nearly a week after.

Finally, though, the skies cleared, and the Carohans readied themselves for battle once more. Only then did they find that the Satar had stolen a march on them, leaving behind much of their heavy cavalry's horses, and fighting as a massed army. The surprise attack caught them off-guard, and even without the advantage in mounted troops, the Kothari had gained the upper hand. Paetronau soon was fighting for his life, and gave the order to retreat – only for the Satar to finally send in their horse archers, who harassed the retreating Carohans mercilessly.

Leaving a strong garrison at Subal, Paetronau took the bulk of his army northward, almost to the border itself. The city itself could not support such a large mass of men, but the presence of so large an army nearby would stop the Kothari from assaulting the city, or even resting easily in a siege.

Neither side, though, had the strength to break the stalemate that had ensued at Subal. Always in danger of losing supplies entirely from the impacts of the slave rebellion, the Kothari had the more perilous position, but their raids into the south of Helsia put the Farubaida on edge as well.

The breaking point, though, came with a much larger Kothari raid. Determined to set the Farubaidans back somehow, the Redeemer sent a surprisingly large force – nearly ten thousand men – on a northward journey. Rounding the westernmost foothills of Helsia, they descended on the city of Dremai, intent on reenacting the Treda: the utter ruin of Helsia by the Satar of old, in the War of the Crimson Elephant some three hundred and fifty years before. Dremai, a city that had escaped destruction that time, burned.

Suddenly, everything had changed. Much-mythologized memories of the burning of Trovin, of Farou flooded back into the Helsian consciousness more strongly than ever; memories of cultural treasures lost, of artists massacred, of cities ruined, their old stone halls now half-collapsed overgrown with weeds.

The Assembly panicked. The Pentapartite Council did not, but they still had been stirred into a towering fury. The Opulensi, they declared, were not half the threat that these Kothari were. Quite nearly the entire Farubaidan force on the eastern frontier was drawn back to the homeland. New levies were raised in the Faerouhaiaou highlands, while fortifications were strengthened in northern towns, and the walls in Trovin redoubled in strength.

And the Carohan army attacked.

Smashing the Kothari at Dremai, they easily drove out the Exatai's raiders. The shattered remnant of that host fled to the southwest, a splinter force briefly threatening Neruss, but never doing much more than burning the outlying farms of that country. The Carohans continued on southwards, reinforcing their army in southern Helsia, and pressing for a decisive confrontation at Subal.

Driving forth, they caught the Satar near the walls of that city. Exhausted and hungry, the Satar could not withstand an attack of this magnitude. Defeated at Subal, they fled southward, pursued by the furious Carohan army, which reached the River Had by the end of the decade, within sight of the camps of one of the largest slave rebellions in the region. Scattering in several directions, the Kothari heavily garrisoned Ioppson, Jahip, and Hiuttu, hunkering down in preparation for what seemed to be a Helsian vengeance fantasy come true.

To make things worse still, rumor had it that not only were the Opulensi vanquished, but now the Kothari subjects in the south were themselves increasingly restless.

And yet, despite all this, hope was not lost for the Exatai. The bulk of their forces had not been eliminated, and they still had well over eighty thousand men at arms. The Carohan army outnumbered them, true, but its cavalry force was pitiful. Momentum and superior logistics had carried them to victory thus far, but even with the Hu'ut rebellion raging all around them, their attack had stalled at the River Had, and they had been forced to shift their attention away from the Opulensi theater – a move which would have significant consequences there.

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Begun in 562 SR, the Great Church of Gaci was a marvelous edifice. The worship-hall extended nearly five hundred feet in length, and rose to more than a hundred and fifty feet in height. Those entering would walk through an arched entranceway, over fifty feet in height, the arch lined with sculptures of hundreds of different animals, real and mythological. Granite of a dozen different hues rose in enormous columns to the vaulted ceiling, broken on either side by a hundred stained glass windows, in abstract patterns mimicking the heavens and the earth, allowing a cascade of variegated light into the hall. The colors played over reliefs and sculptures depicting the life and times of the Prophet Kleos, showing his struggles and his triumphs, a grand narrative of the holiest man in Iralliam.

Attached to the worship hall were a dozen different rooms, home to a thousand priests, theologians, and mendicants, all servicing the spiritual needs of the city of Gaci. This was the most triumphant example of the explosion in church building, funding now by generous donations from the Ayasi, and by the Grandpatriarch himself. None of the rest were nearly as beautiful, nor as visually striking as the Great Church, of course, but they still impressed. Fifth-Gaci had not been ruling for very long, but after his Southern March and the Great Church, he already had impressive achievements to his name. This was fortunate, because there were questions as to whether he would last much longer.

The tension between the traditional elite of the Holy Moti Empire and the new(er) bureaucracy, open to Aitahist ideas and dangerous reformism, had been evident for quite some time. So was the rivalry between the Ayasi and the Grandpatriarch, both of whom could claim spiritual leadership over the Empire, even if the former easily had more political power. And the friction between the elite of the church and a more populist movement led by the rogue priest Sokar, while new, had already spread across the country.

All of these things started to come to a head during the reign of Fifth-Frei.

It began with the appointment of a new Councillor, Tarci. The Ayasi's old Councillor Afari had reached such an age that he had to step down – or at least, that was the reason given by the Chief of Chiefs. Others had their suspicions, especially since Tarci just so happened to be the Ayasi's younger brother. A Councillor from the ruling Elephant Family would have been bad enough on its own, but Tarsi had radical reformist ideas, hoping to overhaul not only the bureaucracy, but the whole structure of the upper echelons of Uggor society.

Establishing a series of Orders to oversee various aspects of the bureaucracy, Tarci set up one in particular – the Order of Ranks – to target the excesses and corruption among the Great Families, particularly the lesser ones who could not defend themselves against the Elephant Family. Removing dozens of corrupt officials from power, his sweeping moves caught the Great Families off-guard, who could hardly believe the Ayasi's lapdog would act in such a brazen manner. Over a dozen official petitions were brought before the imperial court, but all of them were turned aside.

Still, the Great Families clamored for the attention of the Ayasi, protesting that his overreach was changing the very fabric of the Empire – an accusation which, it must be said, was rather true. Rumblings could be heard amongst the Great Families, particularly the great estates that stretched on the Motian plain, and while they had not yet come to anything, the threat of rebellion was suddenly a very real one.

Meanwhile, though the Ayasi's patronage of church construction had done something to dampen the flames of religious upheaval in the Empire, he could only distract them for so long. Pressured by the conservatives to deal with Sokar's movement, and by the populists to deal with the excesses of Church officials, he finally summoned Sokar to appear before him in person, probably intending to patiently hear out the grievances and smooth things over in a way that let both factions feel as though they had won.

Unfortunately, Sokar used the opportunity to deliver what would quickly become a famous speech, the Recrimination of the Patriarchs. This was a searing indictment of the centuries of accumulation of Church power, a power that had allowed them to accrue more and more land to their name, living in wealth while the poor continued to live in squalor. He noted the nepotistic nature of Church appointments, how the Grandpatriarchy had been passed between Patriarchs hailing from the same dozen or so areas since its inception, how those areas had appointed Patriarchs with personal connections to one another since their inception. He declared that the Church had lost its way, its original, more egalitarian and populist nature being suppressed by a hierarchy that had grown until it could barely support its own weight, how it existed largely to fill the purses of “holy” men, rather than to support the spiritual needs of the state.

All of these problems had been known before the speech to one degree or another – at the least, the Ayasi himself would have known of them. But never had they been declared in so succinct and so public a manner. The Ayasi was left with no choice but to call a great Church Council, only the third of its kind, the results of which had yet to be seen.

Almost an afterthought in all the religious and political conniving, a strange new disease swept through the ports of Krato, and in a trail all the way north to Gaci-city. The Shaking Sickness, as it was called, seems to have resulted from the Southern March: a jungle fever that followed the invaders home.

Between all of these events, the turmoil in both west and east had started to fray the edges of the Empire, too, and the long-maintained trade links between the Moti and their neighbors started to weaken. For decades, they had been able to remain aloof, unaffected by the problems that had beset the countries on every side, but their concerns had grown larger than the Empire itself.

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With each passing year, the struggle for control of the Dulama Empire only accelerated. The ancient empire was beset by foes on quite literally every side, and even as early as 560 SR, it might have seemed like the whole edifice was doomed to destruction.

Of course, collapse is never quite as simple as doom.

Though no one agreed on who should rule the Empire, few within its boundaries viewed its dissolution as inevitable – and even fewer thought it a good idea. Each of the Dulama factions aimed to reunite their Empire in totality, and to drive out the foreign invaders. Surprisingly, they even cooperated to achieve the latter aim in some places.

The next stage happened in the center, on the great plain of the Taidhe. Irrigated and carefully managed by centuries of slowly advancing Dulama farmers, the plain was rich agricultural land, among the best in the Empire. This was the first target of the Hai Vithana, who had recently acclaimed a new khagan in Amhatr, Avralkha. Avralkha had made peace with the Laitra Empire, and withdrawn totally from their lands, instead throwing his full weight behind the chiefs who had already begun the invasion of the northern Empire.

The Taidhe had long been protected by a series of frontier fortifications. Though impressive, they were also ancient, and not particularly useful against their extraordinarily mobile enemy in the first place – they had been overrun in the first few months of the war. These fortresses in hand, Avralkha attacked with an enormous horde, some twenty thousand horse and a similar number of infantry, striking at the city of Elapo. Emperor Tlara's forces had been almost entirely withdrawn into the north to face his brother, and the city's walls fell easily to the Vithana assault.

Secure behind Elapo's walls, Avralkha's raiders ranged further and further into the Taidhe, meeting little resistance to the east. By 568 SR, they had reached the River Abrea, and clashes with the armies of Tiagho and Dula had begun. Though of course the Dulama were alarmed, they could do little, divided as they were.

That changed a little after Tiagho and the Emperor Cairl XVII of Dula reached a truce, uniting their forces in alliance against the Hai Vithana. A new expedition, led by Avralkha's younger brother, threatened Tiagho itself. Tiagho, a sprawling, truly ancient city, was protected by high walls, newly repaired, and the core of the city by a canal that swept through the center of the city, usually used to control overflow from the Abrea, but now filled to guard against the intruders.

The Hai Vithana attacked in force, deploying siege engines designed by seemingly omnipresent Seshweay engineers, attempting to bridge the canal and attack the walls directly with enormous machines. The city seemed more vulnerable now than ever, and its fall would probably ensure the collapse of the eastern half of the Empire, outside of the Dulama Highlands themselves. Sallying forth repeatedly, the defenders barely kept their city free for more than a week, before Cairl's army arrived triumphantly in the north, bearing aloft the ancient eagle standards of the Empire.

One might imagine the cavalry crashing into the flank of the Hai Vithana, scattering them, and reclaiming the glory of the empire. Certainly, that is what Cairl expected when he led his force south.

He was wrong.

Alerted by superb reconnaissance, the Vithana redeployed to face the northern threat before it had arrived, and offered them pitched battle on fairly even terms. The Dulama force attacked in earnest all across the front, confident in their own numbers and military abilities, but the nobility had not fought a real battle in decades. Streaming forth without much coordination, they quickly bunched in the more difficult spots along the battle-lines.

Though they had the upper hand for much of that day, the Vithana were caught off-guard by yet another sally from the walls of Tiagho. Cairl had sent a small force to reinforce the garrison, and they attacked at the rear of the Vithana army. Recognizing that they were in an inferior position, the Vithana covered their retreat with several cavalry forays, but ultimately withdrew to the west, and the south. The eastern half of the Dulama empire had remained standing.

Triumph was short-lived. Cairl demanded the submission of Tiagho, which, of course, refused. Going back on the offensive, the Dulama were once again at each other's throats, while barbarians marched in from the southern frontier, new rebellions rose along the southwest of the Abrea, and the Hai Vithana gathered for another strike.

Things in the western half of the empire were, if anything, just as confused.

Emperor Tlara, as the reigning monarch in Mora, seemed the most legitimate of the various contenders for the throne, and therefore had the nominal support of many of the wrlords running about. The most prominent of these was Cain, the former governor-general of the puppet state in Sechm, who had taken his garrison northward to seize the River Thuaitl. Cain took the river valley without too much trouble, and rapidly turned the tables on the invading Theran armies from the north; he struck back and put Ther itself under siege, nearly extinguishing the old Tollanaugh line in a single stroke.

But his allegiance extended only so far – he blatantly refused to help the Emperor attack the pretender Aidren in Aeda. Thus, the Emperor was left to continue his series of indecisive battles, never quite gaining the upper hand, especially as he was forced to divert increasingly large forces to the eastern border against the Hai Vithana.

Indeed, the stalemate only turned through the actions of the Naranue.

Continuing their campaign in the north, Naran took advantage of the increasingly desperate position of Aidren. When he depleted his garrisons even a little bit, the northern Empire attacked in force, entirely seizing the headwaters of the River Thala, along with its vital precious metal deposits. Though Aidren launched a series of campaigns to retake his mines, he ultimately could do little against the assembled northern forces. Without the gold production to cover for the ravaged economy of the region, his forces went almost entirely unpaid, and desertion and rebellion became a serious problem once more. His brother Tlara started to attack upriver, and the northern Dulama faction seemed close to ruin.

At the same time, supposedly secret envoys traveled from Naran to Mora, where they made clear that the Naranue would willingly accept the legitimacy of Tlara – and that they might accept an alliance against Emperor Aidren.

In the south, the Empire's almost nonexistent garrisons allowed in several hordes of barbarians, including the forces of the priest-kings of Sechm. This was to be expected – far worse was the seizure of Saigh.

The estuary at the northern end of the Airendhe had long been a haven for pirates and ruffians of all kinds, its numerous winding channels and hidden sandbanks hiding their fleets from everyone. There, rumor had it, a pirate by the name of Paitlo had declared himself the king of Saigh. The greater part of the Dulama fleet stationed in the city went over to this pretender almost immediately, and he established himself all along the shores of the bay.

Though Paitlo's power was almost entirely maritime, and he posed little threat to the Emperor upriver (or so it seemed at the time), the fall of Saigh had greater consequences. With the Hai Vithana to the north, the riverrine route was the last thing linking the two halves of the Empire together. Even with the civil war, at least the Empire had seemed like a real idea; now the threat of its fracturing seemed more real than ever before.

South of the Dulama, the peninsular kingdoms continued largely on the courses they had already charted. The Haina had sent further expeditions eastward, finally destroying some of the last refuges of the old Suran kingdom, and establishing stronger trading ties with the Kayana. But all that, and even the added revenue from the new trade emerging with the Naranue and Noaunnaha, did little to offset the continuing burden of maintaining their far-flung empire. The merchantry at the center of the empire grew more and more restless, decrying the wastes of money that were the furthest colonies. Even more grew alarmed at the rise of the pirate king in Saigh, pressuring the king to destroy the greatest threat to shipping that the Airendhe had seen in centuries.

In contrast to their stagnating neighbors, the Trahana continued to bloom, to a degree that some had taken to calling the Empire a rebirth of the mythic peninsular empire of ancient times. Retired soldiers settled in the far north, and the old Dehran cities had started to become productive centers of production once more. The lands in between were increasingly cultivated by the numerous monasteries which had arisen there, heavily patronized by the king himself.

Feverish expansion westwards was reinforced by alliances with at least some of the locals, and the foundation of several new towns. Deposits of iron and copper in the foothills spurred their settlement as well, while numerous excellent harbors on the southwestern coast of the peninsula began to be settled by a growing merchant community.

This lattermost development did lead to certain problems – the new merchant class resented the influence of the monasteries that they neighbored – and the rapidly expanding volume of trade brought conflict with the Trahana's neighbors. The Haina, in particular, felt like the Trahana were stepping on what had traditionally been their turf, even if the Trahana merchantry sailed mostly in the far west. On the other side, Naranue ships and Noaunnaha resented the intrusion of a new force into what had been their duopoly for centuries. Compounding all these problems, the lack of central government on the west coast of the peninsula had led to a chaotic situation, with piracy running rampant.

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Despite the expectations of many of the nobility, the Laitra Empire did not join the increasingly messy Dulama conflict. The new Emperor, Piras I, seemed far more concerned with internal affairs – or perhaps he simply recognized that the Empire was not yet ready to take on their western neighbors.

Making peace with the Hai Vithana (as we have seen, Avralkha was only too glad to accept), the Emperor invested heavily into the capital at Ghaon, providing it with, amongst other things, new roads, new sewers, and a great Iralliamite church (funded partially with donations from the Church itself). Investigations into supposed crypto-paganism among the nobility had few results; mostly they were viewed as an attempt by the Emperor to collect more power himself.

Perhaps of more interest to the wider world, the Laitra launched a new expedition to the far south, into the unknown lands along the far southern Yensai. Spectacular in their finery and gifts, they favorably impressed the fairly isolated tribes there, convincing at least one large group to swear fealty to Piras outright. At the end of their trail, they reached the northern outposts of the mysterious Dziltocampal.

The two sides eyed each other warily for some time, neither quite willing to make the first move yet. The Laitra learned that their southern neighbors had been a tribe rising in the deepest reaches of the jungles, almost completely isolated from the outside world for centuries. They followed a pagan religion whose prophet, named Ekna Kambal, supposedly had the power to communicate with numerous divinities.

For their part, Dziltocampal had started to divide the administration of the kingdom between the family of the king, which tightened their grip on some of the furthest reaches of the realm. Moreover, they had been expanding their military recently, especially after contact with the Haina merchants to the west, and now the Laitra to the north. But it was clear that the Laitra represented a power much more impressive than any they had even suspected existed in this world. Worryingly, it was a power that seemed devoted to the foreign faith of Iralliam, a dualistic, evangelist religion – one which apparently did not have a track record of being particularly friendly to the “pagans” it had previously encountered.

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In truth, it was something of a miracle that the Opulensi had held out as long as they did. Their attack on the alliance surrounding them had been well-timed, waiting for the Savirai to be engaged in the far north, the Leunans dealing with Iolha, and the Farubaida to be entangled in their latest war with the Kothari. But as each of these had dealt with their foes in turn, the Empire suddenly looked increasingly alone in the world – alone at a time when it was divided. Alone and divided, it did not have the strength to face the alliance that had been drawn up against it.

Already, the Emperor's forces had lost control of his capital at Epichirisi. The Daharai had taken the majority of Spitos under their control, the entire heartland of the Empire. As the officer corps of the entire Imperial army had been Daharai in one way or another, they met little resistance on land. By 563, all of Spitos except for the recalcitrant and well-fortified city of New Kalos, on a rocky promontory jutting out from the mainland, had fallen under their control.

All that the Daharai lacked was a fleet – the Imperial Fleet alone had remained mostly loyal. But the Carohans had little to worry about from the Kothari fleet, and as Leun signed peace with Iolha, both powers turned their navies on the Opulensi. It was almost overkill: they easily outnumbered the Opulensi when combined, and the Opulensi had to defend on every front, a task which stretched their already thin resources.

As the allied commanders had expected, the Opulensi attempted to concentrate their forces on one front, to end the battle their quickly, or at least keep their foes at bay. As the Carohans were much closer to their center of power, it was they that they sent the majority of the fleet at. The two forces met near the city of Sivao, at the southern tip of the Hulinui Peninsula.

One of the largest naval battles the world had ever seen, the battle of Sivao was in fact probably too large to be wholly controlled by either side. With over 300 ships fighting under each banner, the admirals lost most of the control over their fleets early in the battle, after the initial moves had been made, and so it bore more resemblance to a brawl than a kalis match. Ship to ship combat raged across the front, and each force was only coordinated in small units – groups of ships small enough for some subordinate to take charge.

Naval combat was a messy business, the ships oars getting clogged in the thick foam of bodies that lay atop the reddening waters, men falling from the decks as they were struck by arrows or bolts, ships listing drunkenly in the water after holes had been punched in either side by rams. Some had caught on fire, the men inside facing the stark choice of being roasted alive or jumping into the water and probably drowning, or being at the mercy of archers on the decks of enemy ships.

When it was all said and done, over a hundred ships had been sunk, tens of thousands of men had died, and neither side had completely extinguished the other. But the Carohans sent the Opulensi reeling; after all, it had been a desperation move on the part of the Opulensi, and their failure here left them battered in enemy waters. They withdrew to the secure harbor of Treha, while the Farubaida easily took the small island of Soui, and then commenced a campaign on land and sea that reached the city of Pisos before stalling in the wake of their Kothari troubles.

But the Opulensi were given no respite. The Dual Empire, still smarting from its defeat at the hands of the Satar, struck south. Relieving the long-lasting siege of Zirais, Emperor Qasaarai continued into what had long ago been the kingdom of Stad Men, easily capturing Xorob and Yu in the face of whatever resistance the Opulensi could provide.

Even here, they did not stop. The Opulensi fleet was far too damaged at this point to fully protect its coasts, and the Nahari privateers who had long patrolled the northern coasts of the Kbrilma launched a series of raids south, soon landing mauraders on the sacred island of Dinyart itself – indeed, many of the oldest shrines of Indagahor were looted in the attacks.

At the same time, the Leunans bore down on the other front. Tiratas and Paulinth had been thorns in the side of the Leunan Sea for some time, but with the fleets at each mostly sent away to the west, and the garrisons somewhat anemic and undersupplied, they were easy prey for the massive Leunan expedition which approached them. Tiratas, with a heavily fortified and relatively inaccessible citadel, held out for two months before finally falling to the Leunan assault. Paulinth lasted barely a week before surrendering.

With Leunan fleets skimming the waves and Daharai skirting the coasts, the Cyntal Sea soon had barely any Imperial resistance left. A Leunan expedition conquered Pulchas, while a brutal, costly assault on the landward walls finally felled the garrison at New Kalos. Pirates seizing control in Erlias only confirmed what was a foregone conclusion – the Opulensi had lost their eastern waters.

The Opulensi civil war had started as an attack by the Emperor on the Daharai who had supported his dynasty for centuries. Now, with the war winding its way to a conclusion, it seemed as though one of the oldest dynasties in the history of the world was ending. Treha, the Chimoai Isles, insignificant Beran, and Dinyart were all that remained loyal to the Emperor, and much of his fleet had evaporated. Spitos was entirely in the hands of the rebels, who seemed to have little sympathy for the Emperor's plight. The sun was setting.

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Quite suddenly, peace had broken out. Almost everyone in the countries involved had expected the war between the alliance and Iolha to continue for a few more years, probably ending with the utter destruction of Iolha, or at the very best (and worst), a cataclysmic defeat for the Leunan expedition leading to a united Acaya. Instead, the Leunans proposed a surprisingly lenient treaty: essentially, peace at current borders.

The Iolhans, who had been expecting to have to grant Carola and Araña independence, might well have laughed in relief. The war, which had come so close to destroying their country on multiple fronts, had ended with short-term strategic gains. True, the complete annexation of Gadia in the south by Leun had removed the most reliable Iolhan ally in the region, and meant the east was now more or less the personal playground of the Leunan Republic. But Iolha remained extant when their greatest rival had seemed on the brink of destroying them.

Not that this meant the end of all worries in Iolha or the Acayan states in general, of course. The Berathi mercenaries, in particular, lingered long in Iolha, demanding greater and greater payments as compensation for the numerous years they had spent outside of their homeland. When the Iolhans finally declined, the Berathi attempted to attack Iolha itself, being turned back only by the city's immense walls; instead, the mercenaries ravaged the countryside for half a year before finally withdrawing across the Corocya.

Meanwhile, the Leunans rapidly implemented a plan to integrate Gadia into their own country, hopefully seamlessly. Naturally, this plan went to the dogs immediately.

While asylum had been granted both ways for peoples of either allegiance who had been caught on the wrong side of the borders at the end of the war, and while a significant number of Gadians did flee north to Iolha, a large number of the old elite stayed exactly where they had been. The Republic ostensibly had no real problems with this – they offered loans to rebuild these central lands to people of any ethnicity. But even after centuries of contact, the two cultures had an uneasy time coexisting. Dissimilar inheritance laws, differing faiths, and the resentment of war mixed with the pure greed that both sides displayed. While most of the clashes were limited to the economic sphere – Gadian nobility attempting to bar their new neighbors from earning a living, or new Leunan nobility attempting to dispossess their neighbors – violence did in fact break out from time to time.

Despite this, the Republic did manage to settle many Leunans in the interior of the peninsula, where once they had been limited almost entirely to the fringe. And in some places – notably the larger cities – the Leunans and Gadians cooperated peacefully, or even flourished. New areas were opened to settlement by the vast lines of credit the Republic could offer, and populations boomed in the newly opened lands. Indeed, the only real losers were the Alar, who found themselves marginalized in both societies, and lost land and influence by the year.

Several new cities were founded by the Leunans, whose domestic development proceeded unhindered by a war that was by now far from the minds of everyone who wasn't directly fighting in it. In its place, increasing friction between the merchant aristocracy who utterly dominated the political sphere and the disenfranchised landed elite (a phenomenon peculiar to Leun) became the dominant issue of the time. Even so, this was almost entirely masked by the sudden expansion of Leun on both land and sea – their commercial sphere had exploded far beyond its previous boundaries, offering almost absurd opportunities for profit, and the landward expansion offering much new wealth for the owners of the plantation system as well.

Even the northern colonies saw new opportunity. Quite aside from the opening of Lesa and the reopening of trade with Iolha, the towns here experienced an enormous boon when the Kitaluk embargo quite suddenly was lifted. Supposedly, negotiations spearheaded by the homesick merchant prince Hinya in Parta allowed the two sides to come closer to an agreement. More likely, the diseases that had plagued the Kitaluk had died down, and the prospect of new profits outweighed the possibility that they would resurge (in fact, there was a resurgence in disease, but nowhere near what had initially ravaged the Kitaluk colonies).

Alongside this gesture of friendship, the first brave Leunans started to cross the Kitaluk Sea in their hosts' vessels, arriving in the faraway homelands of the Kitaluk. They returned full of strange tales of surprisingly small but quite rich coastal cities, with marvelous art and architecture at every corner, as well as markets filled with an enormous variety of trade goods, only the smallest part of which had already cross the ocean to the known world.

Almost unnoticed in these developments, Leun established a tiny puppet state on their northern frontier, a nominal barrier between themselves and their Iolhan rivals. Offering free land to any from Araña who felt threatened by the new regime, the state barely grew, mostly as the land was marginal to begin with, and few wanted to come, even when they faced hardship in their homeland.

The Acayan War had had one unforeseen effect: it had brought Lesa into the sphere of the known world. The little country had attacked Iolha from the rear, taking a slice of that northern country before being bested by the surprisingly feisty urban militias of the Republic, and while they had gained nothing material from the war, they were suddenly the allies of Leun and Parthe. Leunan merchants poured into this new market en masse, flooding the city of Narba in search of low-priced timber and furs, and selling their own goods for high prices in the frontier country.

Among other things, Leunan merchant vessels suddenly became highly valued in the far north, as even dilapadated ships could carry more than the traditional Lesan ships. Soon, the passage around the north of Leun became less of a terror, and a reasonably well-traveled shipping route. At the same time, Leunan expertise in the military realm was implemented across the board in the Lesan army, which was soon refitted and retrained in hopes of performing more admirably in the next war.

Rihnit concluded a peace treaty with the broken Alare barbarians to the north, a largely ceremonial activity, as the remaining Alare lands were hardly worth the trouble of conquering. The kingdom continued to plant various types of edible cacti and melons in the desert, and soon found the desert lakes in the central peninsular region to be surprisingly fertile. An effort to build a wall across the northern frontier was underfunded and abandoned after a few years; the wall guarded against a barbarian population that was quite depleted, and in any case probably lacked the will to attack.

In the far south, the collapse of the Opulensi had a curious effect on the Ilfolk. With merchants and sailors fleeing the Empire's destruction, some ended up settling among the remote people, establishing a colony in the north of the isle where before there had been only a trading post. Allying with the Slaangtempl priests, they finally defeated the recalcitrant Ilfolk to the far south, and even drove back the Baribai, taking a few of the northern islands.

Parthe struggled through a period of upheaval around this time. In a single decade, eleven different kings held court, each one dying in more and more absurdly ironic coincidences: dying of a nosebleed on a day which celebrates the bleeding of women and girls, or of a stomach ailment from overindulgence on a day when merchants aim for penitence for their long years of greed. Other than amusing the noble and common Parthecans, the decade had the rather more serious consequence of shuffling around the upper echelon of the government so much that the Kingdom had scarcely any stability or continuity whatsoever. As such, what Parthecan policies were implemented rarely had any followthrough, and long-term projects like the northern campaigns against the Zarcasen stalled.

Fortunately, though, the lesser Parthecans had enough initiative on their own to do what the government could not, and the northern expansion continued quite rapidly, all these considered. King Harca founded the northern city of Zarpe in the middle of the island only after the region had already been settled, and his successor's successor's successor's defeat of the northern barbarians only confirmed what had already been the de facto triumph of Parthe.

The eleven reigns also served to cover up what was an increasingly tense domestic situation in the kingdom. The guilds in Tarwa had been gaining influence, especially abroad, but with the renewed campaigns north against the Zarcasen, the military had started to gain similarly potent influence. The relatively weak central government could scarcely manage the rivalry, and walked a tightrope, trying to offend neither side. Indeed, they covered for their own inadequacies through a series of increasingly amusing measures – enormous festivals thrown in the streets of the capital.

The further integration of the region only helped the spread of Aitahism, which flourished unabated by the death of the Third Aitah. Solidifying its hold on central Auona, it spread via the Leunan shipping lines to the far north. The flood of merchants in Narba soon built a series of little Aitahist temples in the city, and soon many Lesans converted to the foreign faith, a move which worried the more conservative royalty in the capital. Parthe, by contrast, was rather slower to adopt the new ideas, for while King Jorgeh converted to Aitahism and forcibly made his nobility follow him, he followed in the hallowed tradition of dying after only a couple of years. Only a small Aitahist community remained after his death, centered around a temple in Parta; said community conveniently forgot some of the more embarrassing ideas of Jorgeh, including that a Kitaluk medicine-girl consort (and later assassin) of his was the Fifth (or perhaps Sixth) Aitah.

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On the other side of the world, the fourth Aitah was dying.

Aelona CuCyve had narrowly escaped death and disaster more than once in her life, but her flight from the Savirai heartland was surely one of the more harrowing. Dogged at every turn by agents of the Maninists, plagued by visions of a demon-god that threatened her very sanity, she crossed the snowy Haidali to arrive in the southern Stetin states. Some say she rediscovered something of the child that had left for the desert decades before, but no matter what, she never returned to her homeland of Cyve.

Instead, the Fourth Aitah ventured deep into Stetin lands. Skirting the frontiers of Seehlt, being helped along by sympathetic locals, she avoided a confrontation with its king, who had threatened to have her gutted if she dared tread on his lands. Instead, she went to Brunn, the furthest of the Stetin kingdoms, ruled by Vantaist the Boastful. Vantaist was said to have been enormously taken with the faith as preached by Aelona, and immediately ordered his kingdom to convert, conferring upon his wife the title of High Judge, killing a number of Maninist priests for their falsehoods, and setting up the Cult of the Goddess in each of the major cities.

Aelona would remain in Brunn for the rest of the decade, growing increasingly ill and frail as her body failed her slowly, an unseen illness eating at her until she could barely leave her home. There, she worked feverishly on the books of the Fourth Aitah, which soon spanned several volumes, a collection of writings on theology, history, and philosophy, ranging from the not-particularly-insightful to the occasional flash of utter brilliance. Though she hadn't the energy to wander into the countryside herself, the Aitah soon collected a number of evangelists around her, and the conversion of Brunn continued at a rapid pace.

Convinced that she could not return to her proverbial heaven in Cyve, she contented herself with a stream of missives begging the ruling Cuskar to convert to her faith, to accept her as the Aitah and the Intercessor of mankind. Though Cuskar held back for years, likely under concerns that his country would be destabilized by religious conversion, he eventually relented, and proclaimed Aitahism the official faith of the island country, converting the southeast corner of Ederrot itself quickly enough, though the remainder still clung to the Maninist faith of old.

Towards the end of the decade, Aelona would declare her daughter Kintyra the Fifth Aitah, a new Intercessor brought forth by the holy union of herself and the Flamebearer Khatai. Kintyra rapidly became acquainted with the Brunekt, preaching the faith of herself and her mother throughout the realm.

In more mundane spheres, Vantaist followed his conversion with a series of moves meant to modernize the country, including keeping a closer watch on the outlying regions of Brunn, and investing heavily into the port of Kurche, intending to turn it into a great port of call for trades Cyvekt and beyond. Luckily for Vantaist, he happened to invest at the exact moment when the western merchants were pushing further and further into the shroud, bringing back immensely valuable holds of furs and timber. Unluckily for Vantaist, the arrival of Aitahism prompted a major backlash against the slave trade – a feature of the new religion that he had been perhaps unaware of; in any case, shipments of slaves from Kurchen dried up fairly quickly.

Even as all this was going on, Vantaist launched an attack on his southern neighbors in Domen, bringing the tiny kingdom to its knees before a tremendous force of over ten thousand men. The attack easily overran the pitiful Domekt army, but it stalled in the southern parts of the country as Domen's ally Anhalter came to its aid. Where Domen had been an easy conquest, the mountainous, remote kingdom of Anhalter posed a rather bigger challenge, and Vantaist's forces stalled.

To their west, the forces of the king of Seehlt quickly went on the offensive, securing what little land remained under the control of the old Nechekt government, and running into the forces of the Cyvekt. Pausing perhaps briefly enough to consider carefully what they were doing, the Seehltekt attacked in full force, soon laying siege to the port city of Lutan, though they were unable to take the fortified city, especially as the latter was well-supplied by the numerous Cyvekt fleets in the area.

In Cyve itself, with the death of Fulwarc, the kingdom had passed to Cuskar, though the succession was disputed by Fulwarc's faraway grandson, Ephasir, who lived in the Satar Exatai. Cuskar seemed to see little threat in Ephasir, for he mostly focused on consolidating his hold on Cyve itself. Expeditions claimed the northern half of the island from the barbarians there, while his forces expanded their control over parts of coastal Tarena, secure in the knowledge that without Satar support, the Gallasenes who had nominally won control of the region would probably not dispute their claim. The kingdom passed to his son Tydar on his death, who continued his father's policy of raiding Satar ships.

Ephasir remained in Atracta for much of the decade, a Prince in exile, attempting to secure funding and assistance from the not-quite-secret Accan “queen” Zelarri, who demurred, noting that the Exatai had rather larger problems at the time. She gave Ephasir leave to take what troops he could gather himself on campaign, however, and the young warlord attacked the mainland holdings of the Cyvekt, conquering Talore and decreeing that he would eventually toss Tydar from the throne.

Far from these events, the Sharhi remained relatively insulated from the troubles that shook their immediate neighbors. A number of their trading depots (kotirchim) grew into fully-fledged towns at this time, and the faith of Enguintith continued to spread, helped along by healthy patronage of the tebtai, Bugulu. A temple named the Cagala e-Koseye was raised in the capital – a three-tiered structure, with elaborately carved wood-panel exteriors extolling the beauty of the world surrounding it, and a great skylight to allow in views of the heavens to all levels.

Continued campaigns against the tribes to the far northwest met with limited success; at this point, the Sharhi seemed to have run into the limit of how far their troops could travel in a single season, and though there were still more cities in the fertile valley beyond, the warriors of the kingdom could scarcely reach them.

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Split between the claimants Karal-ta-Asihkar and Tephras-ta-Atracta, the Karapeshai Exatai had been plunged into civil war. Roughly divided by the Nuvn and Rahevat, or more precisely between the Princes who owed large sums to the Accan bankers and those who did not, thw ar began without a real bang – neither side had fully gained its footing.

Karal struck the first blow, leading an army of some thirty thousand into Oscadia, many hardened veterans from his campaign against the Vischa. Marching through one of the largest gaps in the mountains, Karal's forces swept aside what little resistance existed in the region, and descended on the city of Sacossa, taking it after a short siege of several months. Regrouping, they struck north, into the southern hinterland of Acca, threatening the economic heart of the eastern faction.

Tephras and his mother, Zelarri, responded by dispatching numerous reinforcements to the garrisons of Alma and Acca, and sengind a larger field army after them. Another army, composed mostly of veterans recently returned from across the Kern Sea, attacked towards Allusille. The city was among the largest of the north, and its capture could lead to a domino effect that would rapidly send the entire Ming valley into Accan hands – and with it, surely, victory.

Against Tephras' force marched an army led by the Xieni Prince Taexi. Recruited from the steppe of the Xieni, with a huge but raw force of Ming conscripts, it met the Accan pikes just north of Allusille, not far from the battlefield where the decisive blow of the Satar conquest of the Evyni had fallen. Here, however, Taexi's forces were stymied: they had altogether too little experience and not enough men to compensate for that; the fierce hedgehog of the Accan pikes, coupled with a healthy contingent of cavalry recruited from the Tribe of the Shield, pushed back the Ming and the Xieni respecteively.

While Taexi withdrew, attempting to recuperate across the river in Chenghe, the Accans quickly assembled a large battery of siege engines, and stormed the city, bringing it down, though at great cost of lives. At a single stroke, Allusille had fallen, and with it, Karal's entire strategy threatened to unravel at the seams.

Still, one setback was hardly enough to ruin (or indeed, even dismay) Taexi, and the Xieni prince soon assembled a mobile force in the hills near Croalle. A series of raids into the valley of the River Iom soon distracted the Accans, threatening Anyais, Vadathydr, and even Atracta. At the same time, Karal's forces raided the Accan hinterland, destroying crops (including the wealthy wineries), and indeed lay siege to Alma and Acca several times, though he didn't manage to capture either one.

With Karal stymied by the foritfications in Acca, the initiative fell to Tephras, who reinforced the army at Allusille with the intent of conquering the Einan valley. But Taexi's efforts in Croalle harried his supply lines, and the Ming forces remaining in the valley, under the command of Taexi's cousin Eimeret, managed to hold the Accans to their own side of the Einan. The stalemate would hold for some time, neither side gaining the upper hand, while the middle of the Exatai gradually fell into a spiral of wrath and ruin.

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Cities

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Religious

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OOC:

BAM. Didn't expect that, did you? :p

As you can probably tell, the format of this update is a little different. This is how I envision updates going in the future – mostly the kind of pseudo-historybook narrative in the main updates, with the more creative stuff like stories and whatnot coming during other weekends. Please feel free to offer any feedback on what you liked/disliked from this one.

Stats will come soon. I've started to show a few people a more detailed economic breakdown, but I've yet to complete it and refine it to the point where I'm comfortable making it public.

I had some trouble with the Karapeshai section of the update, owing to the fact that I got no orders. Given its importance, I'm willing to address it more fully in one of the additional-content updates over the next few weeks.

I'm working on a satellite map of the world, but I haven't really had the time to complete it.

Aside from those cool things, not much to report – I already have some of the expanded content lined up and it will be posted in the coming week. I think I'll schedule my next update for April 6th, unless I get some serious pushback from you guys.
 
I significantly enjoyed this style of update :)
 
Kings of Parte during the Decade of Eleven Kings.

King Dawentar Thewen (529-553)-Last turn's ruler, seeks a more expansion, modern foreign policy.
King Kansutdo Thewen (553)-Crown Prince, Gored by a Boar after his coronation
King Sarca Thewen (553-554)-Brother of the Dawentar, dies of choking on a fishbone
King Parca Thewen (553-554)-Brother of the Dawentar, dies of falling asleep on the top of the stairs, and breaking his neck on the way down
King Sacmuzak Nuencaswen (554)-Son of Kansutdo, Gains the throne through Hasnuencascan's Wealth. Exiled to Teoras.
King Harca Sarwen (554-556)- Son of Sarca, Coups Sacmuzak with his veterans. Dies of gangrene from a training wound after nearly a year of agony. He dies on a day when the spirits of the soldiers who die in bed are dispersed with mock battle, in the late winter. Founds Zarpe
King Gorgos Sarwen (556)- Son of Harca, Reactionary, orders all ships to be handed over to his new Government-Guild. Dies of panic attack induced by the sight of his blood from a nosebleed. He dies on a day when the people celebrate the girl who became women and fertile by bleeding during the winter, in the early spring.
King Pacraz Sarwen (556)-Son of Harca, “Murders” Gorgos in the streets (by breaking his nose and causing him to spaz himself to death) and rode the popularity onto the Throne. He is a pimp and a fop, and quickly bankrupts the government. He dies of overdrinking and fever. He dies on the day when merchants dress in rags to beg and fast to pay for a year of greed.
King Dasutdan Parwen (556-7)-Grandson of Parca, orders the sons of Harca to all be exiled to Teoras. Famed for his brutal tax collecting strategies (which may have been needed after Pacraz's spending) during the harvest, as well as crushing the Zarcasen north of Zarpe. He dies during a riot on a day when the government opens the granaries to the poor during the non-growing season to placate the gods, which marks the beginning of winter festivities.
King Jorgeh Sarwen (557-559), Son of Gorgos, “The Aitahist”, Converts in 558 and builds a temple, orders compulsory conversion for his government in 559, proclaims a Kitaluk medicine-girl to be Aitah and invites her to his private chambers, where he is killed by her (she thinks he will rape her) via pillow over the mouth while he was napping.
King Condom Rupturwen (559-?) Current King, Dasutdan’s Brother in Law, Quarter Leun and Quarter Kitaluk.
 
To: Kothari Exatai
From: Farubaida o Caroha


Our wrath is now stirred in earnest. Your attempts to emulate history have failed. Our enemies grow ever fewer, and yours multiply.

Of course, the existence of your Exatai has long been predicated upon the mercy of the Helsians. Recognizing this to be the case, perhaps you will deign to entreat with us once more.
 
...for future reference. Who runs the Farubaida now?

I like your new pace. :p
 
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