LINESII- Into the Darkness

The Lengend of Awesomeness​

The gates Dathan had opened finally, the Rowanthi’Orti had finally decided to trust the Yath al’Shanaal and Qual’lean Jal and open up trade with them. Great merchants, such as Dularthi and Marti. Dathan was a vital part of the Gorin nation, the strategic location of it made it a booming trade center, being located on, not only both the Yath al’Shanaal and Qual’lean Jal, but a river, making trade and innovation part of the new and growing culture of Gorin. Many had come to the city, enginners ventured their to construct bridges and great theatres (which were growing in populary in Gorin). Even more splendid was that the river ran straight through the Qual’lean Jal’s capital, making a direct trade route possible and communication easy. All of this caused an increase in what was known as metal working.

This new form of art began in Bathar, started by the sculptor Belzar. Belzar used the stone of the Cystal mountains to make his sculptures, they were small delicate things and were rather frustrating, since the little ones would constantly break them. Belzar knew of the harder ores in the mountain but to use them was considered dangerous because of their extremely hard nature. Belzar of course was not one to take orders so he began to mine the mountain, creating the first, albeit small, mine in Gorin. Belzar used the ovens normally used for baking breads to melt his first ore, which he then shaped into a twig and chucked at the little ones who pestered him. It was disastrous, the child died and Belzar was arrested. News of the incident came to the Rowanthi’Orti of the incident. What could be harder than stone? Hard enough to kill! brilliant, absolutely brilliant, they declared Belzar a national hero and records of the child were whipped out completely. The metal, as Belzar called it, was as hard, if not harder, that stone, and could be shaped into anything! With molds made of hardened clay mixed with gravel, production of weapons as well as Belzar’s small sculptures were being mass produced. The great mountains were finally nothing to be feared. Belzar’s invention of casting had revolutionized Gorin and many other sculptors moved to Bathar to begin training and using the metals to cast multiple busts of their finger, eye, and rocks they thought were awesome. Gorin was finally opening up, instead of focusing on internal growth they now focused on expansion and making lands awesome like themselves. But who knows, maybe evil penguins will devour their hopes and steal their cookies.
 
Lovely. :lol: Does that mean trade for me? :)

EDIT: X-post!

EDIT2: Yeah, a defensive pact would be great, Kal.
 
Orders have been sent.........
 
Excerpts from the Annual Speech of Eldan to the Chosen People of Eldos (Veritasian Calendar 762)​

...and as Eldos has favored us, the demons are being pushed back and destroyed, despite their weapons.

It is to these weapons that I turn next. Some may argue that they are abominations, and must be destroyed. But is it not true that all the demons have is but a pale, twisted reflection of the true creations of Eldos? The Children of Eldos, therefore, must be destined to create superior weapons out of this metal, weapons more pleasing to Eldos, that will smite the demons with His divine wrath. We have observed the process of making these weapons, and as the One True People, we shall improve upon this process. In the meantime, we shall use the weapons taken from the cowardly, fleeing demons, after they have first been purified by the blood of their former owners...

... so speaks the Avatar of Eldos, his High Priest Eldan, ruler of the One True People, the Children of Eldos, who is the Omnipotent Ruler of All.

More stories shall follow, when and if I have time.
 
To Republic of Veritas:
Greetings to you once more. We are happy to report, we have established Ourselves Soundly in the Lands to the South, and are doing Quite Well. Lord Emrus Died upon complition of the Voyage. but his memory will be rembered. I, Lord Aramus the Third, now Rule the land, though these days, I have to do very little to rule. as far as we have explored and settled, we have found nobody. it.. is disturbing.
anyways, I'm rambling now. as Promised, we now Return to you the three ships. the Adamant remains Intact, It's mighty Hull restored to the state it was when we left. however, we had to rebuild the Intrepid and the Triumphant. they regretibly did not survive the Voyage. we have built new ships to carry their great names. they have served us well. we can only pray that they serve you just as well.
We hope trade will florrish between us, and the Church of one Prospers across the World.
Signed, Lord Aramus III
 
From: Veritas
To: Emor


This is good. But we fear...oh no, yes...no! Things are happening in the capital...we may have to postpone our congratulations. In fact...this message must be sent now if we are to have any hope.

We need aid! Strategius is coming...he's going to kill us all!

*message scrawls off in trails of ink and blood*

OOC: Don't be worried, I'm just doing things. It'll become clear soon.
 
OOC: well, that would be, out OC of me if I didn't act quickly. but on the upside, I'm a Long, Long ways away. it will take months for my ships to return with the message, and even more months befor the help arrives. they will just arrive... after the fact.

and now, onto my Own Story, a little Exposition on the outlook of Emor toward Tactics, combat, and a unique Little sheild/weapon.
 
It is time...for things to happen!

Inspiration was really falling apart on me for Veritas. I knew that I had to do something, and fast. Especially to keep interest, and also to keep Veritas from stagnating. So...here we go.

The Second Epoch: Opening

Prologue:

Excerpt from the history text, "Veritas, the Definitive Summary":

The great artistic revival of the 16th century was marked by a renewed intellectual interest in the First Republic...most notably its downfall. The "Glorious Fall" of the Elders was vastly rehabilitated, in part through legend, in the Triumphalist period, most recognizably in the epic oil-painting, "The Ascension of Strategius."

The beautiful and massive work is currently in the seventh year of it's eleven-year restoration, but widespread claims that one of the nation's most glorified, honored, and treasured artifacts is, in fact, an illegitimate portrayal of a bloody and obscure coup sparked a firestorm of debate, scandal, and public brawling, especially between elderly scholars of the Kalmarian and Tellian schools.

Only an official, government-backed historical commission has had the authority, and the access to private and secret documents, that have allowed a final judgement to be rendered for public examination.

This being that modern efforts to reveal the "real" figure known most widely as Autorex Strategius have ended in one conclusion: Despite the disdain of many modern scholars for the Triumphalists somewhat propagandizing accounts, the events of the Fall of the Council were actually portrayed...correctly.


Part One:

The City of Veritas, 777 Postum Diasporum

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Let's be honest about things. This wasn't the Veritas of the First Elder's vision. Sure, there was marble...and it was a great city, not even rivaled by the mudbrick metropoli of the West, or the vast demon-pits of the Eldranian North. But Veritas was no Khemran propaganda poster. And worst of all, the White City was falling into decay.

It was still the greatest city in the world. A half milennia's work of conquest, study, and building had created something great. It could be seen from miles away, the white spires of the Central Quarter. The massive galleys of the Southern Mariners, could see them first. Brave men, the pride of their nation, the Mariners were fishermen, adventurers and naval Captains. They had a culture to themselves. Their sleek biremes would slide in from all directions across snowcapped waves, the Arch of the Exodus rising to greet them.

Any boat had to pass through the Arch, in order to reach the Grand Harbor. It had taken a century to accomplish such a feat, and thousands surely lived and died for its making. It wasn't just a bloody massive arch, it was the Fortress of the Sea. Any ship trying to enter into the harbor would have to pass under it, exposing themselves to a thousand different striking-points from above. And before they passed through, great copper chains could be hauled across the entryway, and boiling oil channeled in rivulets from deep within the tower's forges. And the peak was an impregnable marble keep, rising to the apex that was crowned with the fifty-foot tall statue of the One Himself, a spear of gold and a tree of silver in His massive Hands.

Truly, they were the Sea-Kings. Born from the Ocean, brought out of the waves. That is where their power came from. The One, and the Sea.

The Arch, and the Sea Wall that now encircled the entire island, were but the gateway to the greater treasures within, and the entryway would never be taken by force.

And it never was...Strategius was the triumphant Host-Lord, and the brigands of Kalmar shrieked with terror before his banners of Red and Gold. But as the emblem of the Phoenix Rampant, his personal crest, was raised over castle after castle in the formerly rebellious lands, the Assemblum began to take note. Eyebrows were raised.

He was the son of a general, who in his turn was a soldier's son. His father was slaughtered by an ambush of Odinite brigands, and so Strategius swore the customary life-oath for eternal retribution. His unending training in Salvation was noted by a scribe, who recommended him to a higher officer. The young man was made Seventh Septilion, a title known for it's prestige and great honor, and this raised a few eyebrows at regimental headquarters. But his ideas were sound, especially those for outfitting archers with flaming arrows. The Phoenix Archers were the special terror of the Kalmarian hordes...but they swore to no Assemblum. They swore to Strategius.

The old Third Host-Lord died in the great battle of Copenholm, pierced through the stomach with a poisoned arrow. There was no other man that could possibly take the position than Strategius in the years following the war. And the rebellion was crushed. Interestingly, the greater Kalmarian citizenry became enamored of this light-skinned southerner, and his noble ways. Strategius grew to learn an important lesson: The true war is won and lost in the minds of the conquered, not on the field.

It would serve him well in gaining the support of all around him. And he was handsome, cunning, and charismatic...that helped. The people adored him. They would make him Elder King if they could.



And the Assemblum knew this. This upstart soldier-brat could not be given greater power. Any further promotion from Host-Lord at the age of twenty-five would put him on a pedestal greater than any other man. It would make him a God...he had to be stopped.



And so it was decided that the Host-Lord could not be allowed to become Stratikrator. Despite his brilliance, the army could not be given to him...he could take control of all Veritas with it! What a great mistake the Assemblum made on that fateful day...it doomed them.

The blue banners of the Southern Mariners were not the sight that the Arch Guards saw, not the friendly and comforting biremes of their trader friends. Ships were coming, the whole Kalmarian Armada in fact. But their banners were blood-red, the Phoenix Rampant flying defiantly at their bow.

"Veritas greets us, my lord."

"So it does."

To Be Continued...
 
Great story, Thlayli! Where's the rest? :D
 
:lol: Yeah, I chuckled a bit at that one.
 
OOC I wouldn't mind if Aney Tigot would unite with Veritas but with freedom of religion for the Aneyans...
 
Not happening anyway. Religious freedom under Veritas? Rrrrright. :rolleyes:
 
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