LINESII- Into the Darkness
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As Khemri expanded, it often proved that information was needed to quickly traverse the nation. Or indeed if a whim of the King needed to be carried out.
Along the Roads of Khemri at even intervals, every 5 miles or so. There lay a simple resupply point. At this supply point, there was also 6-10 fast runners, carrying messages throughout the land. Running from one supply point to the other. Giving their message to the next runner, until the message reached the intended recipient.
For instance, The King Alexander, demanded that he have a suitable Obsidian gift for one of his wives. The messangers had to run to Said, no easy feat in the mountains, and deliver this message. They then had to collect a gift the govener thought suitable. And run back to Khadon. With this system in place, it was said that such a feat could be managed in a day.
However The Roads of Khemri were at best, dirt paths. This was porblematic as in a heavy rain, it could become very muddy, and this slowed the whole messenger system down. King Alexander is currently looking into a way to improve this system, some have suggested the laying down of stone. However at this moment in time, the King is unwilling to invest money into such a project.
Along the Roads of Khemri at even intervals, every 5 miles or so. There lay a simple resupply point. At this supply point, there was also 6-10 fast runners, carrying messages throughout the land. Running from one supply point to the other. Giving their message to the next runner, until the message reached the intended recipient.
For instance, The King Alexander, demanded that he have a suitable Obsidian gift for one of his wives. The messangers had to run to Said, no easy feat in the mountains, and deliver this message. They then had to collect a gift the govener thought suitable. And run back to Khadon. With this system in place, it was said that such a feat could be managed in a day.
However The Roads of Khemri were at best, dirt paths. This was porblematic as in a heavy rain, it could become very muddy, and this slowed the whole messenger system down. King Alexander is currently looking into a way to improve this system, some have suggested the laying down of stone. However at this moment in time, the King is unwilling to invest money into such a project.
erez87
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ANTIGOTICA
At the beginning the was only dark. There was no light, there was no living, there was only nothing, nothing and dark. Yet this darkness gave birth to light in the end, a bright light that killed everything that looked at it, luckily nothing existed to look at it. So the light understood he can't really do anything while being all alone, it was also getting bored, and so it lowered it's light a bit and used the extra energy to create something else, it have created a ball of fire and called it Yian – the sun was born. But the sun was boring, what could light do with a ball of fire? So it again lowered it's light and created another ball, this time the ball was made of other things and became dark, the light created Maoy – and the moon was born. So light had the sun and the moon and again he was getting bored.. what could he do with two useless balls? So light had to do another thing, but this one needed a lot more energy from light, this time light had to give up nearly all it's light, it became even less bright the Yian in the process but in the end light succeeded. He made the two balls alive.
Maoy woke up first. Suddenly hands grew from the ball with some of the ball being shrunk. As the ball of the moon continued to Shrink Maoy became shaped like a man. Maoy was happy with his shape, but rather bored as all he had to do was look at light.
Yian woke up second. In the same way as Maoy she changed, but unlike Maoy she changed into a woman and because she wasn't near Maoy and from the other side of light she was also bored and all she could have done was look at light.
And light? Oh he noticed they couldn't see each other, and this amused him, and for a thousand years all that existed was a man and a woman who looked at a single light without seeing each other.
Suddenly light had a thought. He will make Maoy and Yian meet! And so he did. He moved a bit to the side while asking them both to continue looking at where he was. As the two saw each other the instantly ran towards each other and for the first time in time a man and a woman came together. And from this hundreds and thousands of little lights were born. Light was afraid he's supremacy would be taken over by all of this and so he made Maoy and Yian into balls of fire and rock again and instantly returned into standing between them. All their children were spread across the skies while they themselves went around light, never to see each other again, at least not for now.
Now light was bored again. So he made himself change. And than in a blink of an eye the world was made. But the world was still barren rock at the beginning to light – now called Terra – created water on himself, and from this water he made creatures and nature that filled all his body and this made him happy. Than he remembered Yian and Maoy and finally allowed them to me from time to time changing their spin around him so sometimes they would meet, but not too many times. Than he send a hand to sky and took half of their children and turned them into human beings both males and females and sent them into the world. He liked the most a group of people who were as bright as him, the white Aneyans, and commanded them to live in one city with a roof so Yian will never try to kill them for trying to be as bright as her, and he also commanded them to kill their short ones so one day they may reach the sky and could take more of Yian and Maoy children and turn them into Aneyans as well. And than Terra Light was happy and went to sleep and he sleeps until today...
OOC:
haha this went on funny and actualy I like it 
At the beginning the was only dark. There was no light, there was no living, there was only nothing, nothing and dark. Yet this darkness gave birth to light in the end, a bright light that killed everything that looked at it, luckily nothing existed to look at it. So the light understood he can't really do anything while being all alone, it was also getting bored, and so it lowered it's light a bit and used the extra energy to create something else, it have created a ball of fire and called it Yian – the sun was born. But the sun was boring, what could light do with a ball of fire? So it again lowered it's light and created another ball, this time the ball was made of other things and became dark, the light created Maoy – and the moon was born. So light had the sun and the moon and again he was getting bored.. what could he do with two useless balls? So light had to do another thing, but this one needed a lot more energy from light, this time light had to give up nearly all it's light, it became even less bright the Yian in the process but in the end light succeeded. He made the two balls alive.
Maoy woke up first. Suddenly hands grew from the ball with some of the ball being shrunk. As the ball of the moon continued to Shrink Maoy became shaped like a man. Maoy was happy with his shape, but rather bored as all he had to do was look at light.
Yian woke up second. In the same way as Maoy she changed, but unlike Maoy she changed into a woman and because she wasn't near Maoy and from the other side of light she was also bored and all she could have done was look at light.
And light? Oh he noticed they couldn't see each other, and this amused him, and for a thousand years all that existed was a man and a woman who looked at a single light without seeing each other.
Suddenly light had a thought. He will make Maoy and Yian meet! And so he did. He moved a bit to the side while asking them both to continue looking at where he was. As the two saw each other the instantly ran towards each other and for the first time in time a man and a woman came together. And from this hundreds and thousands of little lights were born. Light was afraid he's supremacy would be taken over by all of this and so he made Maoy and Yian into balls of fire and rock again and instantly returned into standing between them. All their children were spread across the skies while they themselves went around light, never to see each other again, at least not for now.
Now light was bored again. So he made himself change. And than in a blink of an eye the world was made. But the world was still barren rock at the beginning to light – now called Terra – created water on himself, and from this water he made creatures and nature that filled all his body and this made him happy. Than he remembered Yian and Maoy and finally allowed them to me from time to time changing their spin around him so sometimes they would meet, but not too many times. Than he send a hand to sky and took half of their children and turned them into human beings both males and females and sent them into the world. He liked the most a group of people who were as bright as him, the white Aneyans, and commanded them to live in one city with a roof so Yian will never try to kill them for trying to be as bright as her, and he also commanded them to kill their short ones so one day they may reach the sky and could take more of Yian and Maoy children and turn them into Aneyans as well. And than Terra Light was happy and went to sleep and he sleeps until today...
OOC:
haha this went on funny and actualy I like it 
Swiss Bezerker
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Lord_Iggy said:Alright! I think I'll hit 3000 posts tomorrow!
100, 1500, 2000, and 2500 went uncelebrated. But I'll remember this one.
You know, posts like this make me wonder just how I got to this height.
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your at 2999 right now, and the day is probably over in yukon
Thlayli
Le Pétit Prince
"Know only this. One might be outnumbered, out supplied, and even outsmarted...but if you, commander, can force the enemy to a battlefield of your choosing, why, it is over before it begins!
-Stratikrator Andros, Tacitus and War, 454 P.D
---
"Damn stones."
"Stop grumbling. You know we have to pile them."
"But why? Ye One, it's stupid enough to even be here."
"Eh, be quiet. We aren't commoners, are we?"
"I suppose not."
"So we don't use the One's name in vain. Stop acting like a child, Edras."
"Oh, but it's all so pointless! We haven't even seen the cursed Zibonese in at least a fortnight."
"You mean...you haven't seen them."
"Wha...?"
"Look, over near the dale."
"That's a tree, Adrellian."
"No, no. To the left. The big, angry mass of dark-skinned warriors. The ones running toward us."
"Oh, I see them now."
"Edras?"
"Yes, Adrellian?"
"I think we should run now."
"That seems like a good idea."
---
"In what text, new or old, was it ever written that we had to be peaceful? Sure, it's a good thing to do between wars...but you can't spread Order peacefully to those who won't take it. There are heretics all across the globe, Councilman...they worship rocks, mountains, spirits and demons. How do you expect those kinds of people to come quietly?"
-Host-Lord Edrillius, The Trial of the Commander, 415 P.D.
---
Zibonians. Ever had the Tellium Host fought them. Decadion* Callis told tales that they were the first manifestations of Chaos on the world. Others said that they were demons. Born of the spawn of Sin himself, their skin turned to that color by their age old curse.
All that Levyman Edras knew was that he didn't want to fight them. The boy was born on a small homestead outside of Salvation. Edras would soon face the first test of his life, one that would define him.
OOC: But I haven't written that yet.
*A Decadion commands a unit of ten Levymen, and has duties similar to a sergeant. He serves under a Tactica, similar to a Captain, who in turn reports to a Septilion, who reports to a Host-Lord. In later periods when the Veritasan Army grew past 10,000 men, several Host-Lords reported to one, (or more, depending on how many ten thousands there were) supreme commander, called a Stratikrator.
EDIT: By the way Iggy, Veritasans can't pronounce Zarz in their language, so rename it Tellium, please.
-Stratikrator Andros, Tacitus and War, 454 P.D
---
"Damn stones."
"Stop grumbling. You know we have to pile them."
"But why? Ye One, it's stupid enough to even be here."
"Eh, be quiet. We aren't commoners, are we?"
"I suppose not."
"So we don't use the One's name in vain. Stop acting like a child, Edras."
"Oh, but it's all so pointless! We haven't even seen the cursed Zibonese in at least a fortnight."
"You mean...you haven't seen them."
"Wha...?"
"Look, over near the dale."
"That's a tree, Adrellian."
"No, no. To the left. The big, angry mass of dark-skinned warriors. The ones running toward us."
"Oh, I see them now."
"Edras?"
"Yes, Adrellian?"
"I think we should run now."
"That seems like a good idea."
---
"In what text, new or old, was it ever written that we had to be peaceful? Sure, it's a good thing to do between wars...but you can't spread Order peacefully to those who won't take it. There are heretics all across the globe, Councilman...they worship rocks, mountains, spirits and demons. How do you expect those kinds of people to come quietly?"
-Host-Lord Edrillius, The Trial of the Commander, 415 P.D.
---
Zibonians. Ever had the Tellium Host fought them. Decadion* Callis told tales that they were the first manifestations of Chaos on the world. Others said that they were demons. Born of the spawn of Sin himself, their skin turned to that color by their age old curse.
All that Levyman Edras knew was that he didn't want to fight them. The boy was born on a small homestead outside of Salvation. Edras would soon face the first test of his life, one that would define him.
OOC: But I haven't written that yet.
*A Decadion commands a unit of ten Levymen, and has duties similar to a sergeant. He serves under a Tactica, similar to a Captain, who in turn reports to a Septilion, who reports to a Host-Lord. In later periods when the Veritasan Army grew past 10,000 men, several Host-Lords reported to one, (or more, depending on how many ten thousands there were) supreme commander, called a Stratikrator.
EDIT: By the way Iggy, Veritasans can't pronounce Zarz in their language, so rename it Tellium, please.
Thlayli
Le Pétit Prince
Thank you, oh great Penguin Deity.
*checks behind himself for Polarbear spies*
*hurries off*
*checks behind himself for Polarbear spies*
*hurries off*
Swiss Bezerker
Emperor
Thyaly is a crazy story writer 
Thlayli
Le Pétit Prince
While that's the most horrible butchering of my name I've seen in a long time, thanks!
Kentharu
Zebra Commander
really? is that so Thlaylisasdlmaskcvmlkasdmf i highly doubt that lol cause i out do everyone... even in stupidity!
erez87
Lord of Random
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Lord Iggy yeah Antigotica is the religion for the Aneyans.. (and anyone else who thinks Aneyans are better).. Thats story was only the beginning
and if my city won't be a trade-cultural-religious center.. how else could I have only 1 city?
and if my city won't be a trade-cultural-religious center.. how else could I have only 1 city?
Silver Steak
The Ghost of SS
Can we have an update soon?
erez87
Lord of Random
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ORDERS
Spend 1 on education.
Spend 1 on wonder.
Spend 1 on Culture. (built Antigotica Temple in Tigot)
Form Antigotica and spread it throught Tigot and to all Aneyans and those who think Aneyans being diffrent makes them cool
Army on high defense.
Expand trade with other countries and built those roads to expand to the mountains and to the barbarians in the north and south of us. Start mining (if I can) in the mountains.
Spend 1 on education.
Spend 1 on wonder.
Spend 1 on Culture. (built Antigotica Temple in Tigot)
Form Antigotica and spread it throught Tigot and to all Aneyans and those who think Aneyans being diffrent makes them cool
Army on high defense.
Expand trade with other countries and built those roads to expand to the mountains and to the barbarians in the north and south of us. Start mining (if I can) in the mountains.
Disenfrancised
Beep Beep
wait, have I sent orders? I can't find any in my sent items folder...
Thlayli
Le Pétit Prince
Oh, darn. Sending orders now.
EDIT: Orders sent!
EDIT: Orders sent!
Silver Steak
The Ghost of SS
Lord_Iggy said:
It's been 23 hours since this post. Any ETA, Iggy?
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