NES2 VI - Last Semblance of Order.

no point now wubba saw it already, but seriously dude going to war is no way to change my gov't, what the hell do you care anyway? just less competition for you to rule africa, why not get more powerful and THEN attack me, i would be more happy if you did that cause then i would be completely dead :p

not complaining, i just hate it when people bs me, if you attack me fine, but tell me the real bloody reason
 
The men stood around the camp. Gathered around eating supper. They were chuckling. Many were enjoying the time. The standing officer, Captain Badome, stood looking at his men.

Less than a year ago most of these men were poor farmers. Men with little hope of glory. Now they were trained warriors. Descimating the tyrranical Sennarese.

This war would decide the fate of Africa. If Abyssania won Christianity would bless the plains. If Sennar won Islam would run over these lands engulfing them in blackness.

Abyssania was of course now the monument of African society. No other African nation had such greatness as Abyssania. Now they had had proven themselves once more on the battlefield. Decimating the seemingly leaderless forces of Sennar.

For years the rivalry between Sennar and Abyssania had been growing more and more tense. The first Sennarese-Abyssanian War was still fresh in the minds of the people. They still remembered being turned back.

But that war was merely a test, and Sennar had failed. They had proven ineffective. So they had drawn back regrouped and waited. But now the Christian inhabitants called out for aid and the Generals, now Warlords, cried for an end to the tyrranical and incompetent rein of the King.

It would all end now. In this war all the quarrels of the past would be finished and put to rest. Everyone here would remember this as one of the Great Stepping Stones of Abyssanian history.

No one here was afraid to die.


It is better to die for the Emperor than live for yourself, he thought.

If they did not give their lives for Christianity then what point would it mean to live. This is what they were here to do. They were here to preserve Christianity for all the world. It was not fear that kept pushing them forward. It was faith.

Fear denies Faith. No one would even consider being taken alive by these imgrates. Death before dishonour was what went through the mind of every soldier who went to battle. Blood purifies the soul and soothes the body. This would be the end of this barbaricy.

The captain hungered for battle. The true warrior embodied in the soul of one man. Many men often questioned why he was not of higher rank. But of course he was only 18 and already a genious in battle.

One of the corpoarals looked at the Captains leg. A bullet wound! Blood dripped down the Captain's leg. The Captain began to laugh and smile. He looked at the corporal.


"Sir your leg, how long has it been since..."

"It has not been long enough! It is a searing pain. A pain of war, a pain of battle. A pain of Christ. It is great pain, a good pain. It flows through my blood and allows my mind to think. I have had far worse Corporal, do not fret. Go, we move out at sunset. Maybe we can still catch those dirty bastards."

The corporal ran off to get the men. The general of the camp rarely objected to the captains orders and it was no different this time.
 
nice story wubba

edit HOLY CRAP YEA YEA 2000 POSTS BABY YOOOU GOT PWNED EVERYONE YEA!!!! :D :D :D :D :D

ps thanks for reminding me dach :p
 
Good story, Wubba, but...no peaceful solution? EDIT: Congrats on post 2000 Kentharu.

To: Ottomans
From: Byzantium

We would like to inquire as to whether you will be assisting Sennar in the war on Abyssinia or not, since the diplomatic option has apparently failed. (OOC: The best-laid plans of mice and men...)
 
Very nice story Wubba:goodjob:
 
"This seems like a nice spot. Good rocks, the gorge is relatively deep and has several strata of rock," noted the Professor.

"That's all well and good, sir, but won't it be difficult to get down there? It looks steep, and this is quite a bit of equipment," groaned one of the hired porters.

"Well, I certainly don't care. It's not as though I've got to carry anything, you know." Turning around, the academic noted the shocked and furious expression of the man behind him, struggling under his immense weight. Quickly, he added, "Of course, I didn't mean that in earnest. I'll help. In fact, we can set down for an hour or so, there's plenty of daylight left. Pass it down the line, and you can have drinks or food or something." He was rewarded as the porter's face noticeably softened, and he yelled in provincial Greek back towards the end of the column of pack-bearers in the hills. Almost simultaneously, the porters sighed and dropped the packs, anxious to get such a load off.

"Well, what do you think, Athanasios? Look like a good spot?" The professor's students were along for the ride, and he asked their opinions frequently to gauge their interest and knowledge, as well as to help them gain field experience. Of course, no one had ever done anything even remotely like this in the history of the world. Looking for bones deep in the ground, hot on the trail of creatures long since moved away...This was hot stuff!

Eagerly, the student clambered down the slope of the ravine with his fellows and called up. "Wow! This is a really deep ravine! It ought to be a great starting point!"

Young, idealistic, full of energy, optimistic...all of these things the Professor lacked. Once again, he thanked God that the university had seen fit to allow his students to come with him into the few remaining wilds of Moesia, once called Bulgaria. "It doesn't look bad at all, does it? Let's rest for awhile, though: these old bones can't take all of this running around!"

A few hours later, a large camp sat in the bottom of the gorge. Fires blazed next to lean-tos and shelters that the porters and students had set up. Night began to fall, and the professor could be found with a torch and a few students, examining the rock wall. "We'll need shovels for all of this. It looks like it hasn't been explored in ages! Nobody really went here before."

"Why not, sir?"

"Well-" he knew he'd have to give a history lesson soon- "no one has really needed to. The Ottomans ignored this part of Bulgaria, because the only reason the Turks would have to go into a heavily forested area was rebellion, or maybe a robber's band. The Bulgar government didn't last long enough to build up the infrastructure necessary to finish settling the forests, and, in a sense, neither have we. During the Krakow War, the soldiers of the Byzantine Army needed to move as fast as they could during the invasion, so they bypassed the large woodland. It's only now, during time of peace, that we can really get into the few unexplored regions of the world and experience the thrill of Discovery."

The students had been dropping off before (one of the Professor's main bones of contention with the university is that no one emphasized history there because it was "boring") the word discovery, but now their faces were bright and shone in the torchlight. "It's late. We had better sleep. In fact, we've got all season to excavate here."

In the next few weeks, they didn't find much of anything. As the Professor would later remark, "Moesia isn't the best place to find dinosaur bones, you know. Too well-traveled: no dinosaur would have gone here for fear of humans." In the third week of the second month, they actually struck gold during the diggings, and the local government was notified. In return, they got a notice that they had two months to dig (if they didn't find any bones, was the governor's concession) before they were forcibly evicted. Apparently, the Byzantine Empire was as gold-hungry as anyone else. The very next day, a very large bone was found in the wall of the gorge just further up from the vein of gold they had struck.

It was the first vertebra ever found. Further excavation revealed more of a skeleton, and it was not at all consistant with the other bone found near Serdica. The professor was transported. Not only had a new species of animal been discovered, but apparently an entire family of species. But, that couldn't be right, either: the two bone sets very quickly diverged. The second, still-incomplete one showed itself to have no sharp claws or teeth, but large teeth, best suited for grinding things down. A difference between herbivore and carnivore, as the first find was supposed to be (especially since the discovery of proportional sharp teeth in the Serdica region near the leg bone) would be enormous, an order-level difference, or even...dare it be suggested...class? (OOC: Okay, so I'm not Disenfranchised, who apparently knows biology. ;)) An entire class...his name would be in history books!

Anyway, after finally assembling what the students could of the skeleton, he sat down to classify it. Notochord...that meant Chordata phylum. Going further down the list, the animal was a vertebrate, and also a jaw: Gnathostomata. This is exciting as hell... Four limbs: Tetrapoda. Then...he supposed Dinosauria would go here, after, naturally, classifying them as Reptilia.

Ah, the stimulation and wonder of paleobiological discovery! :crazyeye:
 
Nice story.

EDIT: MjM has been banned, and will be unable to reply to diplo and etc for the time being.
 
Dachspmg said:
@silver: Yeah...that is scary. Especially noting the person that said it.

@stalin: Aren't you just a little pissed off? It would make me a lot happier if you didn't act so nonchalant about the whole thing...

Silly Dachspmg, trix are for kids. Theres nothing to worry about.
 
OOC:

OOC: If you mean Taiwan, I already occupy it by force, so it's a given I would keep it.

Might not seem to be such a given in Beijing... well, in Jinan anyway. ;)

tell me the real bloody reason

Its pretty obvious to those who have read the update(s) carefully, I suppose...
 
das said:
OOC: Might not seem to be such a given in Beijing... well, in Jinan anyway. ;)
OOC: You know what they say about crowbars, dead hands, and the winter. ;)
 
@Dachs: Curse you! I had already introduced dinosaurs bones and displayed them at the Danish world fair, but das didn't bother mentioning them and I was still working on the story :mad:. Oh well, more credit to you.

Higher level clades than species have no hard and fast rules - its a case of drawing a line on a continum, also its up to das if a Carl Linnaeus-analog has published his taxanomies yet. :lol:@notochords: Vertebrate adults don't have them, and they don't fossilise like bones, you'd only be able to locate them at soft tissue sites.

OCC: In light of the coming destruction of the Byzabtibe empire we at in the EUA are willing to offer sanctury to biologists and geologists who wish to come ;).
 
OOC: Told you I didn't know biology...or did I keep that in the story? No matter.
 
To: Ottomans
From: Byzantium

We would like to inquire as to whether you will be assisting Sennar in the war on Abyssinia or not, since the diplomatic option has apparently failed. (OOC: The best-laid plans of mice and men...)

We do plan to aid our ally Sennar.
 
stalin006 said:
Silly Dachspmg, trix are for kids. Theres nothing to worry about.
No, please, I beg you, do not take out your wrath on me! I lost a trade center too, you know! Now...we're even! Please...this is quite possibly the scariest thing I've been through in my NESing career!
 
An Excerpt from An Analysis of Byzantine Military Technique to 1749, author Giorgio Cadorna, widely published in the Byzantine empire

Examining these case studies in detail will show not only how the Byzantine armed forces have operated, but also will try to give possible better courses of action based on now-current knowledge of the world situation during the majority of the 1740s.

During the War of Greek Independence, the troops under Venizelos numbered about a hundred thousand fighting men, raised early on and trained as best they could in the Pindus mountains, away from prying Turk eyes. After the Athenian Riots, the troops were ordered south to Athens itself, where as many of them as possible were marshaled and then marched north to try to seize Salonika. Just south of the city, they encountered an enemy Turkish force, better trained than those troops, which numbered about eight divisions, on the river Rhoedius. The Greeks here employed relatively sound tactics, based around the concentration of their firepower at the critical point in the enemy lines. Not only were the Turks outnumbered, but they were also out-tacticed. Venizelos, the “Lion of Crete”, concentrated all of his 15 cannon on the area of the Turkish lines near a ford in the river, then 6 divisions were marched across there, mostly regulars. The Greeks lost about 10,000 men in the battle; the Turks, faced with a crumbling line and a situation in the rear areas that defied imagination, with the Russians flooding into Constantinople with the help of Greek rebels there, were forced to withdraw, and so gave the Greek Resistance their next major port and economic center.

Here, tactics were sound, if not particularly imaginative. The Greek solution was one most well-educated military men would have come up with, especially in 1742. There was no real better alternative to the outcome of the battle of Aegae.

Three years later, the emperor Constantine XII, furious at the discovery of a spy in the Empire, declared war on the Papal States and invaded with a large army. The expedition was basically a disaster. Byzantium's navy performed well, although they were not really faced with an enemy that would have done them much harm. The land forces were the major problem. Papal resistance was not really expected, but the Pope's troops marched south much faster than expected, and the Byzantines were forced to advance in two narrow columns. Having envisioned what would basically be a forced march, the Greek troops were instead subjected to ambuscades and intense cannon fire. The Byzantines penetrated as far north as they could before being forced to turn back. Only the arrival of Venizelos saved the army, which was almost annihilated by stout Papal resistance.

It was unrealistic of the Byzantine Emperor to expect such little resistance. He should have planned for more of a war of maneuver. Overextended and far from the capital, what could the generals do? The invasion made little sense, as well: it was only a spy, after all. The people of the empire really didn't give a rat's left buttock about the invasion. The Pope's troops did most things right, and the Byzantines were the polar opposite. It was really just a case of a failure to think realistically on the part of the Byzantines. This would be rectified by the next war, mainly by the assassination of the emperor, which was seen in many circles as the end of the old revolutionary guard, and their transformation into a real nation-state.

The decision to rapidly train and march large numbers of troops through the hard terrain of the Balkans has been widely criticized by military pundits for the obvious reasons: what if the army had been caught on the march, and utterly destroyed by the better-trained Krakowians? We, however, can safely dismiss that through the original logic of the Byzantine high command, which, in reality, was simply the empress and the generals of the major field armies. They had strategic surprise, one of the most coveted military advantages in the history of warfare. Krakow expected them to attack the Russians, but the Byzantine alliance with Russia prohibited that. Not only this, but extra land was gained, a springboard for invasion. Overwhelming pressure could only be achieved through numbers, not through the small, well-trained army Venizelos had saved in Italy. Rapid marching north to establish a good defensive position would occur, at the sacrifice of protection on the march, which was not even crucial: Krakow barely had any men in that sector of the country. Only sharp resistance before the walls of Sirmium (Belgrade) provided brief pause to the war machine, which was now exerting numbers. They were not particularly well-trained numbers, but they were enough men to overwhelm the defenses of Sirmium and force an entrance. It can be safely said that this campaign, too, was a success, the proper strategic outlook achieved.

The next year saw more of a slaughter on that front. 1747 would not equal the destruction of the Italian campaign, but it would see plenty of death. After a failure by Krakow to break through Russian defenses in the south, a Russian weak point, the Field Marshal of the Guard of the Grand Chancellery turned south towards Byzantium, a soft spot (in his opinion). Crossing the Danube, few casualties were suffered, and the GotGC prepared to disappear and reappear on the other side of Byzantium, where Krakow still controlled territory. Unfortunately, the Byzantines had better ground. Through three days of Krakowian assaults, during which the largest cavalry charge in the history of the world would be seen, met, and utterly destroyed by the Byzantine artillery, the Greek line bent but did not break. After three days of slaughter on the Krakowian side, reinforcements moved in and took the enemy in the rear. It was there that the Byzantines suffered their greatest casualty rate, mainly due to the lack of a unified leadership directing their moves and the illness of Venizelos. The remainder of the GotGC surrendered after the fifth day of the engagement. That engagement was too soon to really be able to pass judgment, but in the author's opinion, the Byzantines did everything correctly here, too. Any further movement north would have been an overextension of their supply and a dangerous way to get caught by the Krakowians. It would also not have been coordinated with any move by the Russians and Swedes, their allies in the War, whose details are still fresh in everyone's minds.

In conclusion...
 
Lord_Iggy said:
Scarier than Sheep and Carthage?
That wasn't scary, that was heroism and a glorious stand against one of the mightiest empires on Earth...and having the knowledge that I might have been able to win had I not moved to America at the time that I did (at the end of IT I and beginning of IT II) is infuriating.

If you intervene militarily, we will have no choice but to do the same to protect our own ally.
 
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