[RFC-RAND] The People of the Indus Plain

Good job. :thumbsup:

Even better, you username sounds Indian enough that I'll give you a cameo. :) Emperor, or explorer?

Yudishtira is the philosopher-prince 'hero' of the Mahabharata. Also well-known to gamble unwisely. More of an emperor then, although he quested a bit, so either way...
 
Any more updates comin for this?
 
Er... so you are going to rip off the People of the Persian Plain and not even recognize it in the OP?
 
Writing in the same style isn't ripping off. Imitation is the highest form of flattery. And all that.

Personally, I enjoyed reading this.
 
Er... so you are going to rip off the People of the Persian Plain and not even recognize it in the OP?
What part are you talking about?

The history book style?
-Not ripped off, it's all I ever do AARs in.

The chapter headings?
-Not unique to ppl of the Persian Plain.

The title?
-Uhhh... Using a title, especially one that's been changed, isn't ripping off.

Other?
-Do tell.
 
The line between "inspired by" and "ripping off" is incredibly thin and while I would agree with you that this falls under "inspired by" I also agree that, given the similarities, it would only be fair to acknowledge danger bird in the OP.
 
However, it is the definitive RFC-RAND AAR and to claim that you didn't deliberately choose the title to arouse interest would be disingenuous. You are using the reputation of PotPP to attract readers and it is only fair to acknowledge that, especially as your own reputation for storywriting is good enough that you don't really need to attract the attention of regulars.
 
To be honest, I was mislead by the title. Thought it was a continuation of the old series, and danger bird immediately came to mind when I saw it.
 
However, it is the definitive RFC-RAND AAR and to claim that you didn't deliberately choose the title to arouse interest would be disingenuous. You are using the reputation of PotPP to attract readers and it is only fair to acknowledge that, especially as your own reputation for storywriting is good enough that you don't really need to attract the attention of regulars.
I really didn't do it for any reason like that... It was just a good idea for a title so I used it.

I suppose you're right to some extent though.
 
All in all, an uneventful twentysomething turns.

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III. Nirmata the Builder

After Ugra died in his sleep, his appointed successor, Nirmata Himana, was given the title of Sipahasalara.

The new Sipahasalara was focused on continuing the peace that had dominated during his predecessors rule, and developing the countryside around both Dilli and Samarkand.

As part of this program, Nirmata commissioned a great road that would stretch all the way from Dilli to Samarkand. Christened the Imperial Road upon completion, the long path would be a great boon to both cities. It facilitated trade, and allowed for easier transport of goods between the two cities.

The Imperial Road as it would look upon completion
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During the early stages of construction on the Imperial Road, a problem quickly became evident- the lack of workers to use on construction. The traditional one Punjabi working unit was simply not enough to handle all of the jobs that were required by Nirmata's plans. So, he ordered that the undesirables of both Dilli and Samarkand be collected into and organized as two more Punjabi groups. This would not only allow for faster completion of his current projects, but the ability to have more going at once. As such, he ordered the construction of pastures to the northeast of Dilli, where great herds of useful animals roamed free.

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In the early stages of the Pasture Project, news reached Dilli that a great herd of horses had moved in to the northeast. This led to a revival of the skills of Horseback Riding, and a greater incentive to finish the Pasture Project quickly.

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Horseback Riding was not the only archaic art to be revived during this time, however. Sailing became a new, and important, art as well. Recently, coastal farming villages had been built as a part of Nirmata's construction plan. They were able to send ships up and down the coast to trade, leading to a minor economic boom in the area that would help fund some of Nirmata's projects further inland. As of yet, however, no major ships had been built because all of the major cities were inland.

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Nirmata the Builder died quietly in his sleep soon after receiving word that the Road was complete. He was much loved by the people who lived under his rule, and he would live on as a kind and honorable man in the legends of India.

The Indian Empire at the end of Nirmata's Reign
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The 1-tile away from coast for your capital is going to be incredibly crippling in the long run.
1N would have been well worth the first turn move.
Good luck though, the terrain looks easy to defend with four chokepoints in counting.
 
You discovered a source of horse, of course,
And no one will trouble you, now you have force;
Unless of course, your horse resource,
Goes by the name of Mister Ed!

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I don't know if any of yall are old enough to get that one.

Nice update. I'm new here, but thanks to your tribute-slash-public domain-slash-plagiarized title of People of the Indus Plain, I went and looked up the original story. And WOW, what a huge & well wrought story! (though I've only read some of it so far.) You've got a lot to live up to, but thanks for cluing me into the first one.

I guess it's too late to point out that the Indus is a valley and the heart of India is the Deccan Plain.
 
Isn't the Indus civilization supposed to be quite pacific and without much imperialistic state according to some archeological findings? Why is it attacking those poor barbs? :joke:
 
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