stERZNES - Atleast it's last at last!
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Rome
Leader: Lucius Tarquinius Superbus/Dachspmg
Government: Chiefdom
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: Bwahahahahaha. Rome. Enough said. Includes at inception the cities of Praeneste and Ostia, built on 7 hills.
Leader: Lucius Tarquinius Superbus/Dachspmg
Government: Chiefdom
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: Bwahahahahaha. Rome. Enough said. Includes at inception the cities of Praeneste and Ostia, built on 7 hills.
Nation: Oenotria
Leader: King Phoron\Xen
Government: Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: Start me in Malta (technically, Oenotria is the name for the second nation in italy, then known by the name Ausonia after the people whom inhabited the area of the north, but all this is long and involved information; its acool name, so i decided to take it, as malta is by most means an extention of the Italics)
Leader: King Phoron\Xen
Government: Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: Start me in Malta (technically, Oenotria is the name for the second nation in italy, then known by the name Ausonia after the people whom inhabited the area of the north, but all this is long and involved information; its acool name, so i decided to take it, as malta is by most means an extention of the Italics)
Persia
Leader: King Objin\Kejixu
Government: Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: These blood thirsty warriors will kill anybody that stands in their way to conquest.
Leader: King Objin\Kejixu
Government: Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU:
Notes: These blood thirsty warriors will kill anybody that stands in their way to conquest.
erez87
Lord of Random
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4000BC, 1st update
Several kingdoms and tribes rise across the planet earth.
In Andes mountains far far in south america the Inca people rise (quite early to their time), Weakened by the harsh enviement stone age seems to not be the best times for this people...
In Asia close to the mesopotamian areas rise the force of the Persians. This people are grand wariars that expand quickly but rumors are that many other civilization, some much greater, lie close to the west in Mesopotamia...
In northern europe next to the Brtionic tribes rise another tribe... the Angles a quick rise of the tribe into power brought many lands under it's control, but the Britons does not like it...
Next to the black sea, on an area called Crimea rise the kingdom of Cherson. It was ones lands of horsemen and horse-archers and great barbarians but with this new civilization maybe the lands could be civilized?
On the tiny island of Malta rise Oenotria. Based around their main village. They have no ships and are quickly stuck.... Where would they go in stone ages?
On the Italian penisola the city of Rome rise quickly with a mighty force of miliatry and as it's seems if the Etruscan tribes won't join togheter to fight them... Rome would soon rule them all.
Not far, in northern greece Epirus is founded. The Illyrian tribes settled down in there and are now looking south into more civilized Greece for lands...
OOC:
Dark gray barbarians are much much stronger than light gray. They are the best places for civilization and you will get from there many strong NPC's...
Stone age, no navy or hard places to live in like the freaking high mountains of Andes). Well you can be there just don't expect me to be so nice
I know this update is bad... but I didn't realy had anything to write about...
Several kingdoms and tribes rise across the planet earth.
In Andes mountains far far in south america the Inca people rise (quite early to their time), Weakened by the harsh enviement stone age seems to not be the best times for this people...
In Asia close to the mesopotamian areas rise the force of the Persians. This people are grand wariars that expand quickly but rumors are that many other civilization, some much greater, lie close to the west in Mesopotamia...
In northern europe next to the Brtionic tribes rise another tribe... the Angles a quick rise of the tribe into power brought many lands under it's control, but the Britons does not like it...
Next to the black sea, on an area called Crimea rise the kingdom of Cherson. It was ones lands of horsemen and horse-archers and great barbarians but with this new civilization maybe the lands could be civilized?
On the tiny island of Malta rise Oenotria. Based around their main village. They have no ships and are quickly stuck.... Where would they go in stone ages?
On the Italian penisola the city of Rome rise quickly with a mighty force of miliatry and as it's seems if the Etruscan tribes won't join togheter to fight them... Rome would soon rule them all.
Not far, in northern greece Epirus is founded. The Illyrian tribes settled down in there and are now looking south into more civilized Greece for lands...
OOC:
Dark gray barbarians are much much stronger than light gray. They are the best places for civilization and you will get from there many strong NPC's...
Stone age, no navy or hard places to live in like the freaking high mountains of Andes). Well you can be there just don't expect me to be so nice
I know this update is bad... but I didn't realy had anything to write about...
Jason The King
Deity
The war chiefs and the King sat around the blazing fire in the center of the village. There was no one else here, it was forbiddon for the people to listen in on the discussion of the greats. Five men were seated here, four wore red face paint to distinguish their status as war chiefs, each one in charge of his own army. The other man was the King, who was half naked from the waste up, but wore a robe of deerskin and carried a wooden staff. His eyes were fixed forward, not looking at who ever spoke to him, nor looking at anyone with whom he spoke with.
"Great King, our village is becoming too small and without opportunities. The people want more land to graze their herds and plant their crops. But the Britons seem to impede our progress, and limit the rights of our people," one chief explained. With his red face paint, he was also half naked. His name was Alek, and he was known for his agressive behavior.
"But your highness, why not reason with the Britons instead of spilling more blood?" asked Charl, a peacekeeping Chief. He had his army of men usually building roads instead of fighting. He did not ask to become a chief, at heart he was a peaceful man, but was instead forced to be one by the King. "The Britons may agree to a confederacy, with you, sire, as the King."
"Hah, do we really want to share power with the barbaric outsiders?! Majesty, you are kind of the Angles, not of the Britons! I say we slaughter them and take the land that is rightfully ours." Alek yelled, standing up, the fire dancing across his face.
"Sit down, bishpe," the King said, using the ancient word for hot head. The king put the wooden pipe of truth to his lips. Supposedly by smoking this, he would give access of his mind to the Gods, and the truth of what should be done would appear.
After a minute or so of the Chiefs just staring at the King smoking his pipe, the King stood. "The Britons are a nuisance, and shall be exterminated." he spoke, and then turned around and left. Three of the chiefs stood up, smiling, and followed the King. The fourth, Charl, took a bit longer to rise, and then followed his companions. The fire continued to burn into the night, until it was finally extinguished by tired villagers in the morning.
ORDERS
-The army shall make war with the Britons, destroy everything and make room for Angle settlement. 900 men will be used for this operation.
-Recruit more people, using an economy, for the war effort.
-Continue to expand the village of Lodinum.
-Rename "men" in my army to Javeliners, and take 200 from it and turn them into archers.
"Great King, our village is becoming too small and without opportunities. The people want more land to graze their herds and plant their crops. But the Britons seem to impede our progress, and limit the rights of our people," one chief explained. With his red face paint, he was also half naked. His name was Alek, and he was known for his agressive behavior.
"But your highness, why not reason with the Britons instead of spilling more blood?" asked Charl, a peacekeeping Chief. He had his army of men usually building roads instead of fighting. He did not ask to become a chief, at heart he was a peaceful man, but was instead forced to be one by the King. "The Britons may agree to a confederacy, with you, sire, as the King."
"Hah, do we really want to share power with the barbaric outsiders?! Majesty, you are kind of the Angles, not of the Britons! I say we slaughter them and take the land that is rightfully ours." Alek yelled, standing up, the fire dancing across his face.
"Sit down, bishpe," the King said, using the ancient word for hot head. The king put the wooden pipe of truth to his lips. Supposedly by smoking this, he would give access of his mind to the Gods, and the truth of what should be done would appear.
After a minute or so of the Chiefs just staring at the King smoking his pipe, the King stood. "The Britons are a nuisance, and shall be exterminated." he spoke, and then turned around and left. Three of the chiefs stood up, smiling, and followed the King. The fourth, Charl, took a bit longer to rise, and then followed his companions. The fire continued to burn into the night, until it was finally extinguished by tired villagers in the morning.
ORDERS
-The army shall make war with the Britons, destroy everything and make room for Angle settlement. 900 men will be used for this operation.
-Recruit more people, using an economy, for the war effort.
-Continue to expand the village of Lodinum.
-Rename "men" in my army to Javeliners, and take 200 from it and turn them into archers.
@erz- if people can get to malta in the stone age (and they did mind you; the people on Malta have the oldest civlization in the world to use stone in construction, and several megalithic temples- these "temple builders" died out however) then they can get off as well
also, can i be changed to a blue color?
also, can i be changed to a blue color?
no, the Phoencias came WAYYYY after the home civlization on Malta was dead for 2000 years; these people were ancient; they were building with 20 ton rocks when the egyptians were still playing with mud- the Phoenicans later came and colonized the island; the origional people were mothgoddess worhsippers; putting them in the same generic culture as the Minoans, and most other europeans at that point
It was Early, the Cold mountain dew was heavy on the Grass, the Night dark with only Coniraya, and Mama Quilla In the Heavens, it was a lonly Night. Known By only his title, The Divine Emperor (Inca), Inti's decendent had a duty to hereld the knew day.
Preperations were made.
Inca sat down and began the ritual, infront of him were the Elders. A fire was lit, and the Ritual began.
"For whom has watched over the night" Inca Started, His voive crisp in the Morning darkness.
"Mama Quilla, The Goddess of the Moon, who guides our steps when Inti Rests. Coniraya, The God of the Stars, who Cries a tear purity for every fallen Incan" The Elders replied, Voices threading through the darkness "May they rest, in peacefull slumber,".
"We ask Chasca to awaken, may her dawn be the beginning of new Hope,"
"Chasca, The Goddess of dawn and dusk, we call upon you"
An orange glow appeared. More Importantly it was streaked with red. It struck the Eldars with awe, momentus times were ahead. Inca new his duty, now he had to appeal to them all.
"Chasca, whom hath wounded you"
"Apo, The God of the Mountains, has his ragged mountains torn your flesh?"
Nothing. The Eldars were Silent, Awaska had begun to tremble, he was the oldest and most respected member, but Inca could not stop.
"Mama Coca, The Goddess of Health and Joy. Has her spitefull tongue bit you?" [1]
Nothing. Inca Noticed a Shadow at the edges of his eyes.
"Illapa, The God of Thunder and Lightning, has his fury blasted you asunder?"
Nothing. The Shadow was also tinged red.
"Pacha Camac, The God of the Earth, has his weight you beneath him?
Still Nothing. Awaska was now trembling violently.
"Supay, The God of Death, ruler Uca Pacha [2] and the Deamons, has his Malice pierced you?"
Awaska fell, a yelp issued from him.
Inca had his answer, and it frightened him. The only power that could counter Supay was Inti himself. He must concentrate with all his power, to raise the Sun.
"Rise Inti,"
The Shadow Advanced on him, even now Suppay was touching his heart with his ice cold grip. He began to fear his fate.
He relived his life, short but meaningfull, his father had passed down the rituals down to him, he remembered, and practised until he could repeat them.
The could not begin to Understand WHY Inti had not risen. The Ritual was done.
The Eldars had gone white.
The Shadow now stood before him. Hhe felt malice grip him and the ice cold sensation grow.
He tumbled through his memory, searching for the answer, why had it not worked?!?
He found the answer. He was alone with his father, When he told him:
"Remember, you are Inti's Son,"
Inca stood up. The Sun rose blazing gloriously, a shaft of light pierced the shadow and it fled, back to Uca Pacha. Inca stood pale, and fainted.
[1] Mama Coca: She was a promiscuous Women, often called a "whore" by the Gods in the Incan religion, she was spitefull of Chasca's Purity.
[2] Uca Pacha, The lowerworld, similar to hell at the centre of the Earth.
Orders:
Build three roads, hell their free! (ok one down to the river and another towards the lake and around it.)
Expand along the only fertile thing that isn't a mountain of rock and ice. i.e.
The river and the lake.
Preperations were made.
Inca sat down and began the ritual, infront of him were the Elders. A fire was lit, and the Ritual began.
"For whom has watched over the night" Inca Started, His voive crisp in the Morning darkness.
"Mama Quilla, The Goddess of the Moon, who guides our steps when Inti Rests. Coniraya, The God of the Stars, who Cries a tear purity for every fallen Incan" The Elders replied, Voices threading through the darkness "May they rest, in peacefull slumber,".
"We ask Chasca to awaken, may her dawn be the beginning of new Hope,"
"Chasca, The Goddess of dawn and dusk, we call upon you"
An orange glow appeared. More Importantly it was streaked with red. It struck the Eldars with awe, momentus times were ahead. Inca new his duty, now he had to appeal to them all.
"Chasca, whom hath wounded you"
"Apo, The God of the Mountains, has his ragged mountains torn your flesh?"
Nothing. The Eldars were Silent, Awaska had begun to tremble, he was the oldest and most respected member, but Inca could not stop.
"Mama Coca, The Goddess of Health and Joy. Has her spitefull tongue bit you?" [1]
Nothing. Inca Noticed a Shadow at the edges of his eyes.
"Illapa, The God of Thunder and Lightning, has his fury blasted you asunder?"
Nothing. The Shadow was also tinged red.
"Pacha Camac, The God of the Earth, has his weight you beneath him?
Still Nothing. Awaska was now trembling violently.
"Supay, The God of Death, ruler Uca Pacha [2] and the Deamons, has his Malice pierced you?"
Awaska fell, a yelp issued from him.
Inca had his answer, and it frightened him. The only power that could counter Supay was Inti himself. He must concentrate with all his power, to raise the Sun.
"Rise Inti,"
The Shadow Advanced on him, even now Suppay was touching his heart with his ice cold grip. He began to fear his fate.
He relived his life, short but meaningfull, his father had passed down the rituals down to him, he remembered, and practised until he could repeat them.
The could not begin to Understand WHY Inti had not risen. The Ritual was done.
The Eldars had gone white.
The Shadow now stood before him. Hhe felt malice grip him and the ice cold sensation grow.
He tumbled through his memory, searching for the answer, why had it not worked?!?
He found the answer. He was alone with his father, When he told him:
"Remember, you are Inti's Son,"
Inca stood up. The Sun rose blazing gloriously, a shaft of light pierced the shadow and it fled, back to Uca Pacha. Inca stood pale, and fainted.
[1] Mama Coca: She was a promiscuous Women, often called a "whore" by the Gods in the Incan religion, she was spitefull of Chasca's Purity.
[2] Uca Pacha, The lowerworld, similar to hell at the centre of the Earth.
Orders:
Build three roads, hell their free! (ok one down to the river and another towards the lake and around it.)
Expand along the only fertile thing that isn't a mountain of rock and ice. i.e.
The river and the lake.
Silver Steak
The Ghost of SS
Egypt be mine.
Egypt
Leader: Seti I/Silver Steak
Government: Theocratic Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU: None yet
Notes: None yet, must research Alphabet
Egypt
Leader: Seti I/Silver Steak
Government: Theocratic Monarchy
Age: Stone Age
Economy: Stable [0\3]
Army: 1000 men
Navy:
Confidence: Normal
Eduction: Idiotic
UU: None yet
Notes: None yet, must research Alphabet
North King
blech
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Crops were harvested. People feasted. The world seemed good. Alas, writers lacked creativity.
OOC: Orders being worked upon.
OOC: Orders being worked upon.
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