SymNES II - Ash Like Snow

peace loving? Woman control does NOT mean peace loving. You will see in my history when it comes...

Technically, "woman control" means lack of realism; matrilineality is not matriarchy, and matriarchy (at least as it is all too often misunderstood, i.e. as "reverse patriarchy") most probably never really existed, with good reason. That said, many great warrior cultures had relatively emancipated women: compare the status of women in Hittite and Babylonian societies, for instance. An even better example would, ofcourse, be the Sarmatians.
 
Sigh, so long I have waited for this, and when it finally shows up I first miss it completely and then must realize that I would do myself a great disservice if I joined. Aaargh! But I will be watching, hoping I'll find a window some time in the future. :sad:
 
Well, Niklas,
Symphony D. said:
the next two updates will mandate a linear increase in active players to function properly.
and I'm pretty sure that this tendency will be maintained for the rest of the alpha phase. So it would actually be good for this NES if more people were to join at some later time, as the advanced societies spread and multiply.
 
I'm currently reading through all this and it might better if I join later, as not to make some stupid nonsense I have the habit of doing.
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
Alright, this is going to take a bit longer than I thought it would, there's a fair bit to process. I'm tentatively going to say Tuesday. If things change again, I'll notify you then.
If it will help, I will gladly write my section for you or even those of my neighbors. :D
 
from MSN messenger said:
symphonic...@...com says:
Barring some sort of spectacular tragedy it should probably be done today.
Email cut out cause I know he doesn't like when his email shows

Well have fun with the info people :)
 
"Ekam Sat Vipra Bahuda Vadanthi."

"Truth is one, the sages speak of it by many names."

-Rig Vedic saying, c. 1500 BC Panjab

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We have wondered
Why the pull
Is not a push

And why the life
Is not a death

And why the world
Is not a sun
Or a moon
Or a star.

We have asked
For the peace
And the land
And the sea

And we have asked
For the others
To go

But they have not.

And our wonderings
Are answered

A pull is a push
A life is a death
The earth is a sun
And a moon
And a star.
 
Bah. Where is the "For I am become death, destroyer of worlds"?
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
Emergence of State

Iho'ranki was an ambitious Alark'tangat who lived in a strategic village, Irin'ieboh, near the border between the Alarkien and Latyran spheres of influence. His village was generally considered important in the conglomerate of which it was a part, Kir'alaen'irboe, which stretched along a good portion of the border and served as an important, regrettably neglected, line of defense for the central Alarkien territories.

Iho'ranki began his rise to power within Kir'alaen'irboe by being the first of the Alark'tangat to lead the Alark'boranae, the soldier Hakamei, to battle against the Latyrans, winning a decisive victory. He soon gained great popularity among the Alark'boranae, the only Hakamei shared between villages, giving him much greater power over trade and the military than other Alark'tangat of Kir'alaen'irboe.

Soon, Iho'ranqi decided that a confederation was not enough to stave off the numerous offensives of the Latyrans, and that a more centralized power was needed. He choose a young man from within his village to become the Alark'tangat in his stead and began to travel, seeking support for his ideas; with him came a large and loyal group of Alark'boranae.

While originally scorned for his ideas, Iho'ranki gained support from several other important border villages near Irin'ieboh after defending them from several raids by the Latyrans. These villages' Alark'tangatae were allowed to keep their near absolute power but were required to pay tribute to Irin'ieboh, the capital of the first true state within Alarkien society: Eiho'abanae'iegohae.

The main purpose of the state was to provide mutual defense without overly damaging the rights of the various Alark'tangat. The Alark'boranae were centralized under the rule of a single village, Irin'ieboh, and no other village was allowed to maintain an independent force of soldiers. The tribute from the various villages was used to enrich Irin'ieboh and equip the Alark'boranae with the best of equipment. All of this meant greater defensive capability of the villages as a whole. Others along the border soon followed, greatly expanding the area and power of Eiho'abanae'iegohae and allowing it to consistently beat back the Latyran horders.

Their was, however, seemingly no solution that would allow for ease of defense at this time, requiring increasingly large numbers of Alark'boranae, of which Iho'ranki was the sole leader. Upon his death, numerous members of the Alark'boranae claimed to be his lieutenants and the nation fractured into smaller parts. The largest part continued the state of Eiho'abanae'iegohae with the young man Iho'ranki had chosen to be the Alark'tangat of Irin'ieboh, Karn'aerahin, who allowed the other successor states to maintain their independence if they paid tribute to Eiho'abanae'iegohae, leading to the tradition of multi-layered, militaristic confederacies within Alarkien society.


OOC: A very good update, Symphony, and a good overview of Alarkien society. :goodjob:
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
Retroactive deletion.
 
OOC: Well, at least I got best stories, even if I thought my expectations were realistic. I'll do my best to keep it up. Also, as I am going to begin using a great number of Alarkien words, here is a pronunciation guide; any letters without pronunciation can be considered the same as in English. My apologies to anyone who does not speak English.

Pronunciation Guide
B
F
D
G
K
P
L
J
M
Z
S
N
R
W
Sd Sh
Pr Trilled R
A Short a
O Short o
I Short i
Ae Long a
Oe Long o
Ie Long e
Ei Yay
' Glottal stop

As you can see, plenty of missing and a single added sound from English. Hopefully it makes my last story more understandable. And this next one, of course.

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An Interlude of Voyage

Alarkiens have a great distaste for other society, whom they consider uncivilized. Their constant movement between communities or even lack of communities disturbed the deepest sentiments of Alarkien culture, which is based upon the community.

Other societies tended to meet only the Alark'boranae, or soldiers, of Alarkien society, as they were the only Hakamei permitted to travel between various communities and, if necessary, into areas controlled mostly by other societies. While trade between other societies picked up, the Alark'boranae were very careful to not allow traders of other societies very far within Alarkien territory, as the influx of new cultural ideas was believed to be harmful by the Alark'tangat.

This is not to say, however, that new ideas pertaining to technology were not shared. Any idea that the Alark'boranae found to be intriguing or useful they brought to a nearby Alark'tangat to judge; if the Alark'tangat found it to be worthy, he would introduce it into his own village as a sort of test case. If it proved to be useful and not damaging to Alarkien culture, he would support its dissemination and the Alark'boranae would begin to carry it to other villages along their normal routes. This allowed for quick and simple dissemination of information that was both beneficial to and not harmful towards Alarkien society.

Anyways, our main topic here is the further expansion of Alarkien society. Because of their distaste towards other societies, their fairly limited sphere of, influence, and a growing population which required additional living space, the Alarkien peoples had two ways through which to expand. The first was internal and the other external.

The internal method involved communities supporting larger populations, which required increased food production, and was used by the great majority of Alarkiens. This proved to be a difficult process, as the Alarkiens followed a hunter-gatherer method of food production. Slash-and-burn agriculture, as well as farms in general, were considered poor treatment of the land, the most important member of the communities upon which Alarkien society was founded.

They did, however, discover ways to produce more food without disrupting the general ecosystem of the area. The discovery of new sources of food was the main method, in which they discovered how to make food out of many things that other societies found distasteful, including insects, tree bark, and even the bones of the animals which they hunted; they also began to hunt many more types of animals.

The other method involved the slow conversion of ecosystems into ones that supported more of the types of food that they preferred. From planting fruit trees when they were required to chop some down for construction to the seeding of hardy and edible shrubs in unused areas of the forest to the breeding and release of animals so as to increase their population. All were used to increase food production without drastically altering the land and ecosystems of the area.

The second method of expansion, that of external expansion, was used by those Alarkien communities which lived near other societies and the coast. Those near other societies inserted a great number of well prepared and well supplied communities into relatively unsettled border regions, displacing those who lived there through force. While this was not a quick expansion of military force, it was a slow expansion that maintained the cultural homogenity of Alarkien society that occurred in virtually every possible direction but towards the north, where the Latyrans were bent on the instant destruction of any Alarkien settlement they could find.

Those near the coast began to experiment with ships and sailing and found new ways of expanding through the foundation of some of the world's earliest colonies. Generally, these consisted of a single community and would hardly ever grow beyond this size. Upon arriving in a number of small ships, the Alarkiens would disembark, build their community, and displace any natives in the area.

The colonies generally constructed a great number of ships to move back and forth between the larger, original Alarkien areas and the colonies to gather supplies and gift them with any new ideas or goods found in the colonized lands. This assistance through supplies from the more established Alarkien communities helped greatly to ensure the stability and continuation of the colonies.

The trade, however, created a problem, one of travel. As travel was generally forbidden the majority of Alarkiens, a new Hakamei was created, one specifically for the operation of sea vessels, be they merchant or military: the Tarie'tangatae, or People of the Sea. An immediate rivalry sprang up between the Tarie'tangatae and the Alark'boranae, as they were the only Hakamei allowed to travel between communities, and this rivalry persists to this day.

Early Alarkien ships were generally canoes, although they were generally lashed together by boards to ensure stability and the ability to carry a great deal of goods. Paddlers would take their positions upon the wing canoes and paddle the entire convoy, sometimes up to twenty canoes. Cargo was stored in the middle canoes, allowing for a great deal more to be shipped than would be with only a single canoe.

Many of these early ships were devastated through storms and other disasters, and often lost their way without navigational tools. Maps of the coast were created by a few of the more successful Alark'boranae, but these were poorly made and did little to assist in navigation. Alarkien colonial expansion was hindered due to this obvious problem, restricting them from long voyages until more complicated and accurate equipment could be devised.
 
First kill! :p

Well worth the wait. That said, I noticed a few errors:

under the pressure of Pegi Rente immigration from the east, and a poorly-documented mass migration from the east

Possibly not an error per se, but isn't that essentially the same event?

Thus, while in the north there emerged loose collections of village-states, in the north there increasingly grew more powerful and independent city-states focused on domination of agricultural land to enrich themselves.

Presumably, the first north is the south?

as it did against the less organized people to the east.

The west, surely.

Also, am rather surprised my orders were apparently this good. They were actually kind of rushed.
 
I'm glad you liked my decay scenarios... though I feel oddly remorseful that none of them were really carried out. ;) Anyway, this update is pretty much everything I could have hoped for, though I'm eager to see the map. I'll begin working on some stories as well. Interactions between Nengal, Kalioko, and Bessariondze should make for some interesting situations.

Also:
First kill! :p
:rotfl: Darn, you had it easy. I'll have to work harder to bring up my count.
 
Excellent update!
 
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