This is just a quick drawing I did yesterday. It's the first one I've done since I came back from holiday.
Hi, Chukchi.
What kind of tool are you using in your compositions?
The line quality is not up to par, mostly because:
1. You are going over the same lines multiple times.
2. I can tell you are not committing enough weight as
you lay down your tool against the paper.
Also, the left deltoid (the one facing us), is improperly positioned.
Push it a bit farther from the pectorals, because now, his shoulder looks scrunched.
Don't be afraid to make darker lines. With enough practice, you'll be able to draw
more effectively
and make less mistakes without going over the same area multiple times as well.
You are improving though, I can tell.
From the face, I already know that you have an understanding that,
from the three-quarters view, the eye on the one quarter side should appear smaller
and the one on the three-quarter side appears bigger.
If the all art is equally good bullcrap were true, why bother teach or learn something that's apparently not a skill?
Calm down. I don't think Meteor Man meant it like that.
And oh, I forgot to mention it in my earlier post.
The Clothed Figure Drawing practice was done off a live model.
5-7 min. each pose.
