The Jade Commandos

Roles of The Jade Commandos.
The Jade Commandos are a Mercinary group that is directly supported by the Military but it has to depend on its own to bring in Weapons, Troops, and supplies. Our aim is to aid anyone in need weather it is during times when the Nation is in war (RPG Stories) or weather it is a Persion vs. Persion kind of thing

Code:

[b][u][size=2]JADIAN ARMY[/size][/u][/b]
Commander: Mara Jade IV
    Corps: I corps ("Jade Province Defenders" )
           II corps ("Jade Assault Corps")

[b]I Corps ("Jade Province Defenders")[/b]
Commander: General Mara Jade IV
    Units: 6 spearman, 1 legion
  Purpose: Protect Jade Province

[b]II Corps (Jade Assault Corps)[/b]
Commander: NPC Lt. Gen.
    Units: [i]II-a Jade Support Squadron
           II-b Jade Reconnaissance/Auxiliary Squadron[/i]
 Contains: [i]II-1 1st Jade Assault Division
           II-2 2nd Jade Assault Division
           II-1a 1st Jade Assault Brigade
           II-1b 2nd Jade Assault Brigade
           II-2a 3rd Jade Assault Brigade
           II-2b 4th Jade Assault Brigade[/i]

[b]II-a Jade Support Squadron[/b]
Commander: NPC Captain
    Units:1 spearman

[b]II-b Jade Recon/Aux Squad[/b]
Commander: NPC Lieutenant Colonel
    Units: 3 horse archers

[b][u]II-1 1st Jade Assault Division[/b][/u]
Commander: NPC Major General
    Units: 7 Legions

[b]II-1a 1st Jade Assault Brigade[/b]
Commander: NPC Brigadier General
    Units: 4 legions

[b]II-1b 2nd Jade Assault Brigade[/b]
Commander: NPC Brigadier General
    Units: 3 legions

[b][u]II-2 2nd Jade Assault Division[/b][/u]
Commander: NPC Major General
    Units: 7 Legions

[b]II-2a 3rd Jade Assault Brigade[/b]
Commander: NPC Brigadier General
    Units: 4 legions

[b]II-2b 4th Jade Assault Brigade[/b]
Commander: NPC Brigadier General
    Units: 3 legions

The Group's Info
Treasury
N/A untill the discovery of Currency

Armory
None

Alliances

Current Employers
(Disorganiser)

Current Objectives

• Create a Battle Flag for the group
• Create a Poster for the first page of this group
• Get some units under our Banner

 

Current Chain of Command

Flag Officers
General
Lt. General
Major General
Brig. General

Sr. Officers
Colonel
Lt. Colonel
Major

Jr. Officers
Captian
1st Lt
2nd Lt

Cadets - Reserved for MA
Cadet 1st Class
Cadet 2nd Class

Enlisted
Seargent
Corporal
Private

 

Count me in, soldier. Zarn and Sky II (if possible) would like to join.

 

Welcome Zarn and Sky II. A 10 Purple Ber... ...err... ...10 Racoon Skinned Beret toss is in order .

 

*Anthony and Nicole walk in.*

Anthony: I will join. I pledge my stealth and tracking abilities.

Nicole: I will also join. I pledge my knowledge of the earth and surroundings, and also my speed on foot.

 

andrew was walking with cara when he notices a hut that has been ercected.

andrew: that was not there last night, i can tell you that.

cara: lets go find out what it is.

*cara and andrew walk in*

andrew: and this?

Zarn: a group trying to bring the concept of "spying" and "diplomacey" into practice, i call "speicel ops".

andrew: is it with goverment backing? *andrew eyes Zarn with disaproving looks*

Zarn: duh! nothing could be without the despot, might makes right, as they say.

andrew: then i am in! *smiles at Zarn*

cara: and so am i! *cara pulls out wood spear and makes a few practice stabs*

Zarn: now don't do that lad, we don't want killing.

 

The despot can been seen outside of the hut with his attendants.

Markus Viviano (to his advisors): Hmm, what is this hut?

Advisor #1: Seems to be some sort of military group. Doesn't look good.

Markus: Come, let's leave before they see us. Our full contingent isn't with us, as they have headed north.

 

Brashin Jade: Hmm

Warlord Noval Gontsky: What do you see

Brashin Jade: Look, over there

Warlord Noval Gontsky: Why its Markus Viviano. I wonder what is he doing in this part.

Ryan: Sir, We are ready to move out.

Warlord Noval Gontsky: Good work. Hopefully we can defend any barbarians that gets in our way.

Brashin Jade: Ohh, and we have two new people, they seem to be reviloutionaries, I think.

Warlord Noval Gontsky: We should be carefull with them.

Brashin Jade: The names are Andrew and Cara. Shall we accept them

Warload Noval Gontsky: Go ahead. But keep an eye on them.

Noval Gontsky looks at the Flint Dager that was handed down to him by his Father and then looks to the sky

 

andrew: what is this thing you speak of?

Brashin Jade: a bit of knowelge about your weapons must be had to join

cara: we can hanble it *cara takes out wood spear*

andrew: yes, we can *andrew pulls short stick from his belt*

 

If you ask me, this group looks far to organized to be pre-Military Tradition. Secondly, the only fighters present are those that are specifically mentioned, unless you get the despot's approval to use his resources from the land to raise an actual contingent of registered troops.
Otherwise, there's no actual conflict, something that I would need to decide the outcome of. Tone down the organizational level a bit, before I need to act.

 

Like I said in the chatroom, you should cut down, if not eliminate mentions of training, and building refined tools. I also tried to hint that the despot might not be too thrilled about this group.

 

it is RPG, if the nation is at war in the DG, we post story threads about the conflict (remember sirjohn's volcano island thread?).

 

The game has yet to begin! Any nation we would have is still in the ancient age! We don't even have a code for warriors to organize along! We don't know foreign nations to fight with!

Also, the point in the reorganization along the lines it has taken was to allow for realism: you will lost conflicts. It is very unrealistic (and unchallanging) to win all the time. There needs to be a third party rolling the die.

 

Which I'm trying to atleast hint at. I guess I'll have to be more thourough. Anyway, that's why we're just dealing with local tribes. Once we settle, we will have banded the tribes together.

 

OOC: I have Reorganised evertything. so that it is apropreate to the RPG.

 

andrew: almost done

cara: these things are just useless

andrew: this made for the warlord himself.

cara: uhhhh

andrew: there, finished!

*andrew inspects a jade arrowhead*

andrew: perfect!

*andrew wraps it in leafs*

andrew: a sign of power is just what the warlord will want

 

Seemingly out of the mists of time, an old man, large in stature and regal in bearing, steps into the shelter occupied by Noval Gontsky, followed by two younger Men. (OOC: I know we can't have characters from the last game in here, but he's only going to appear once.)

Noldodan: Hello. I am Noldodan, and these (gestures to his companions) are my... relatives, Nambanoldo and Poldothar. The small, wiry one, Nambanoldo, is a budding craftsman, very good at designing and building weapons. He has already made a few improvements to the basic spear and axe, and has developed the "sling," a device for hurling rocks great distances. Poldohtar, as you may have noticed, is rather large and muscular. He is a master with the spear, axe and sling. And now, I leave them in your care. I am sure that you will find a use for them.

Noval Gontsky: What? Wait just a second here... Hey?! Where did he go? (Indeed, Noldodan seems to have disappeared from the shelter) Well, that was certainly odd. (Turns to Nambanoldo and Poldohtar) What am I going to due with you two? (He sighs) Well, first off, who are your relatives?

Nambanoldo: Well, my father is Perianoldo, a scholar in the village, and Poldohtar here is my cousin.

Noval: That's it?

Nambanoldo: That's it.

Noval: Then who was that here in the shelter?

Nambanoldo, looking around: What? We just came here on our own. We never saw anybody but you.

Noval, softly: I must be getting too superstituous and seeing things... (Louder) Well, I guess I have to decide what do do with you two. Namba, you go and make one of these "slings." I want to see it. Poldohtar, you go outside and practice your weapons skills.

(Nambanoldo nods, gestures to Poldohtar, and heads outside)

 

John W. Boots reports for training.

 

Welcome John W. Boots to The Jade Commandos .

OOC: Hmm, somehow I am tempted top say John W. Booth :s

 

Having been bested by a girl, SaaM walks into the Jade Commandos Hut
SaaM: I want to join the Jade Commandos
Jenna: That means hes tired of being beaten in all sports by me.

They wait in the warlords hut, wating for Noval