inthesomeday
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When the people of the forested wilds first laid eyes on us, mysterious shapes cresting the horizon of the hills to their north, they mistook us for half-breeds of a sort. To them, our steeds were alien. More alien than the maleficent and mystical beast-men that were native to their forest, at least, and so, before they could distinguish us from our animals, they assumed we were bonded at the waist. In a way, they are not so mistaken. Children of our Great Tribe learn to ride before they learn to walk; they learn to shoot in motion before they learn to shoot while standing; they ride before they learn to live without the horse, and for this reason we might as well be half-breeds. There is a myth our people tell around campfires, the myth of our Tribe's creation and population. It is said that our native homeland, so far from where we are now, was molded into earth and salt and snow by a great celestial Craftsman. To craft our land, he killed his kinswoman-- it has been lost to legend whether this was his sister, his mother, or his cousin-- and tore out her bones and flesh to hammer out on his forge. His name, and her name, have been lost to the eons, but what happened next will be remembered forever in our tradition.
Tangutar, the Craftsman's younger brother, was a warrior, and a rogue. He sought vengeance on his brother for the kinslaughter he had exercised in the vanity of creation. However, as he was bound by his honor, he had to conceive of a plan to avenge the murder without personally harming the Craftsman. And so he watched his brother, learning his craft, making his plan. One night, after months, or eons (as time moves differently for the Gods) of observation, when the Craftsman was sleeping, Tangutar crept into the world-forge. He lit the furnace and warmed not the material which had been so rudely wrenched from the body of his kin, but the world-hammer itself. And onto his brother's anvil he breathed. First, to create the Eastern Wind (that which blows from east to west). He struck the Eastern Wind once with the world-hammer, and created the bow and arrow, sacred tools of air meant to bring justice to the Craftsman. Second, to create the Western Wind (that which blows from west to east). He struck the Western Wind once with the world-hammer, and created the horse, the animal that most embodies air, more than the camel, or the lizard, or even the hawk. Third, to create the Southern Wind (that which blows from south to north). He struck the Southern Wind once with the world-hammer, and created us: a Tribe of men to serve as the custodians of his vengeance, and to populate his brother's land.
It is said that Tangutar never got a chance to breathe a wind that blows from north to south onto the anvil, for the third strike of the world-hammer woke his jealous brother, and Tangutar was slaughtered at the same hands that slaughtered the earth-woman. It was too late, however, and already a warrior race empowered to fight and kill the Craftsman had been given life, and horse, and bow-and-arrow to achieve the vengeance of their creator. This is why we are called Oshkum, people of vengeance, and this is why we have such affinity for horses; we are, in a sense, their brothers, born from the same creator for the same purpose. We have names for each of Tangutar’s breath-winds, as well: Nodzal, the Southern Wind; Brunzal, the Western Wind; and Zunzal, the Eastern Wind. The Northern Wind, which our Tribe did not experience until the beginning of its long journey south, and thus may as well have not existed, was named Kotzal.
This story was nothing but legend for most of my childhood. It was told over the fire, perhaps as a morality tale, or as a traditional myth, when I was young. I remember when I first heard it from my father, my dreams the next night seemed so much more tangible, vivid and colorful; they replayed the story over and over again. Years later, when I was breaching manhood myself, the stories became real. It was my fault, really.
I am told that I woke the entire camp with my moans that night, and that even when my father shook me awake, I did not truly wake up. Instead, my eyes opened glowing, green and blue and purple in alternating hues, emanating steam like a pot. That night I spoke with the voice of prophecy for the first time, and I shall hope it will be the last time as well. I told my father and his near-kin these words:
In my native tongue, the words made a more beautiful melody, and my father has told me my own voice was layered with at least one more, and that when I started speaking every pit they had put out earlier in the night was suddenly abreast with flame once more. That flame burned until my prophecy was done, and I collapsed into sleep again, calm as a salt field. That night my father rode from camp to camp, village to village, imploring even the Great King of the Oshkum to heed my warning, and to ride south as fast and hard as possible. All but a few faithful men ignored him, and laughed at him, and ridiculed my prophecy. All but a few perished the next month in the fire that swept across our native plain, and soon my father was the Great King of the Oshkum, with I as their prophet-prince, and our southward journey began. I was a boy when I spoke my prophecy, though nearing manhood at the age of 12, and now, when we find ourselves at our southmost point yet, I am 16, ready to join the men in battle should it ever arise again. Since my prophecy, however, there has been no war among the Oshkum, no plotting, no conflict; we ride as one, united, Great Tribe. United in fear of the fire and plague we know follows us.
Our journey has been temporarily slowed by this wretched forest and its inhabitants. We will not abandon our horses, but we cannot ride them through the thick trees, and so we must tow them behind us. We know not where the forest ends, if it ever does, or if this is perhaps our final refuge from Kotzal. There is one ray of hope, however: though our southward ride has been years on, the people of this forest seemed to be under the impression that they live in the northern edge of the world, and though we are still working to decipher their language, it seems they speak of vast fields of earth, and grass, and sand, to their south. Our journey will continue until we are stopped by the elements, or killed, or, as I sense my people wish for more and more as time goes on, another prophecy. I am no hero-prophet. I am a loyal rider, my father’s son, and my people’s prince. I hope only that I will not fail them as Kotzal surely grows nearer.
[Empire- The Oshkum Tribe.
2 points civilization to an army of horse-archers. 2 more points civilization to make this a horde of horse-archers.
1 point magic towards a prophecy of northern apocalypse.]
Tangutar, the Craftsman's younger brother, was a warrior, and a rogue. He sought vengeance on his brother for the kinslaughter he had exercised in the vanity of creation. However, as he was bound by his honor, he had to conceive of a plan to avenge the murder without personally harming the Craftsman. And so he watched his brother, learning his craft, making his plan. One night, after months, or eons (as time moves differently for the Gods) of observation, when the Craftsman was sleeping, Tangutar crept into the world-forge. He lit the furnace and warmed not the material which had been so rudely wrenched from the body of his kin, but the world-hammer itself. And onto his brother's anvil he breathed. First, to create the Eastern Wind (that which blows from east to west). He struck the Eastern Wind once with the world-hammer, and created the bow and arrow, sacred tools of air meant to bring justice to the Craftsman. Second, to create the Western Wind (that which blows from west to east). He struck the Western Wind once with the world-hammer, and created the horse, the animal that most embodies air, more than the camel, or the lizard, or even the hawk. Third, to create the Southern Wind (that which blows from south to north). He struck the Southern Wind once with the world-hammer, and created us: a Tribe of men to serve as the custodians of his vengeance, and to populate his brother's land.
It is said that Tangutar never got a chance to breathe a wind that blows from north to south onto the anvil, for the third strike of the world-hammer woke his jealous brother, and Tangutar was slaughtered at the same hands that slaughtered the earth-woman. It was too late, however, and already a warrior race empowered to fight and kill the Craftsman had been given life, and horse, and bow-and-arrow to achieve the vengeance of their creator. This is why we are called Oshkum, people of vengeance, and this is why we have such affinity for horses; we are, in a sense, their brothers, born from the same creator for the same purpose. We have names for each of Tangutar’s breath-winds, as well: Nodzal, the Southern Wind; Brunzal, the Western Wind; and Zunzal, the Eastern Wind. The Northern Wind, which our Tribe did not experience until the beginning of its long journey south, and thus may as well have not existed, was named Kotzal.
This story was nothing but legend for most of my childhood. It was told over the fire, perhaps as a morality tale, or as a traditional myth, when I was young. I remember when I first heard it from my father, my dreams the next night seemed so much more tangible, vivid and colorful; they replayed the story over and over again. Years later, when I was breaching manhood myself, the stories became real. It was my fault, really.
I am told that I woke the entire camp with my moans that night, and that even when my father shook me awake, I did not truly wake up. Instead, my eyes opened glowing, green and blue and purple in alternating hues, emanating steam like a pot. That night I spoke with the voice of prophecy for the first time, and I shall hope it will be the last time as well. I told my father and his near-kin these words:
Inhuman and beast-like,
Bearing and bending the weight of ten thousand men,
The end of the world shall come.
It will burn the villages,
And break the spirits,
And turn the rains and rivers red with blood.
On the back of a shadow,
And the brow of a whisper,
The apocalypse will bear the name: Kotzal.
Bearing and bending the weight of ten thousand men,
The end of the world shall come.
It will burn the villages,
And break the spirits,
And turn the rains and rivers red with blood.
On the back of a shadow,
And the brow of a whisper,
The apocalypse will bear the name: Kotzal.
In my native tongue, the words made a more beautiful melody, and my father has told me my own voice was layered with at least one more, and that when I started speaking every pit they had put out earlier in the night was suddenly abreast with flame once more. That flame burned until my prophecy was done, and I collapsed into sleep again, calm as a salt field. That night my father rode from camp to camp, village to village, imploring even the Great King of the Oshkum to heed my warning, and to ride south as fast and hard as possible. All but a few faithful men ignored him, and laughed at him, and ridiculed my prophecy. All but a few perished the next month in the fire that swept across our native plain, and soon my father was the Great King of the Oshkum, with I as their prophet-prince, and our southward journey began. I was a boy when I spoke my prophecy, though nearing manhood at the age of 12, and now, when we find ourselves at our southmost point yet, I am 16, ready to join the men in battle should it ever arise again. Since my prophecy, however, there has been no war among the Oshkum, no plotting, no conflict; we ride as one, united, Great Tribe. United in fear of the fire and plague we know follows us.
Our journey has been temporarily slowed by this wretched forest and its inhabitants. We will not abandon our horses, but we cannot ride them through the thick trees, and so we must tow them behind us. We know not where the forest ends, if it ever does, or if this is perhaps our final refuge from Kotzal. There is one ray of hope, however: though our southward ride has been years on, the people of this forest seemed to be under the impression that they live in the northern edge of the world, and though we are still working to decipher their language, it seems they speak of vast fields of earth, and grass, and sand, to their south. Our journey will continue until we are stopped by the elements, or killed, or, as I sense my people wish for more and more as time goes on, another prophecy. I am no hero-prophet. I am a loyal rider, my father’s son, and my people’s prince. I hope only that I will not fail them as Kotzal surely grows nearer.
[Empire- The Oshkum Tribe.
2 points civilization to an army of horse-archers. 2 more points civilization to make this a horde of horse-archers.
1 point magic towards a prophecy of northern apocalypse.]