mayor
Heart & Mind
check the website in his sig
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CELTICEMPIRE
Zulu Conqueror
I just finished part 1 and it was epic, hopefully I'll catch up soon.
Bucephalus
Shooting from the lip....
Very creative how you dovetailed this with The Philosopher Kings; I enjoyed them both greatly.
Thank you.
Thank you.
General Awesome
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Wow, all I can say is wow. You are truly a master 
. Thank you so much for being so generous to just post these on here instead of publishing them
. Thank you so much for being so generous to just post these on here instead of publishing them
Princeof Persia
Emperor
Start a new thread!!!
Seconded!!
Princeof Persia
Emperor
Thirded!!! 
Princeof Persia
Emperor
I guess.
Tambien
Theseus, Duke of Athens
Fifthed!
JohannaK
Heroically Clueless
Wow, what a great story. The best I've read out of three or four short ones.
I "Sixth" the motion, this was a true masterpiece, believe me, because I'm an insatiable reader, and this story has kept me in it right from the beginning. Great thought, those about power, amazing and incredibly human contradictions along with with that mad "superbeing" of the main character, above time and space and anything beyond.
I'm going to read now the Philosopher King, this work has left me completely intrigued.
I "Sixth" the motion, this was a true masterpiece, believe me, because I'm an insatiable reader, and this story has kept me in it right from the beginning. Great thought, those about power, amazing and incredibly human contradictions along with with that mad "superbeing" of the main character, above time and space and anything beyond.
I'm going to read now the Philosopher King, this work has left me completely intrigued.
JohannaK
Heroically Clueless
Finished reading The Philosopher King. It ain't great. It's more than that is.. GRAND
Greizer85
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It's a bit discouraging that you can't make a living (purely) with this level of writing in a country of 300 million people. In fact I find it hard to believe. Then again maybe you don't normally start your books by cutting straight to the heart of the matter, so to speak. 
And it's all about marketing in today's world (probably always was). I'll be sure to read some of the stories on your website when I have the time.
Btw, I too started reading the new Philosopher King, then switched over to this one as I thought this more interesting. Guess that says something of my disposition re: love/power. Now that I've finished them both, though, it's only the awesome opening (pardon the pun) that tips the scales towards this one. I doubt this story will ever be topped on this forum, unless of course you'll take us up on the challenge. 
And it's all about marketing in today's world (probably always was). I'll be sure to read some of the stories on your website when I have the time. Btw, I too started reading the new Philosopher King, then switched over to this one as I thought this more interesting. Guess that says something of my disposition re: love/power.
Now that I've finished them both, though, it's only the awesome opening (pardon the pun) that tips the scales towards this one. I doubt this story will ever be topped on this forum, unless of course you'll take us up on the challenge. 
Terrance888
Discord Reigns
If Christopher Paolini can do it, so can you.
Your writing is IMHO better. He might give all the worlds extravagant detail, but extravagancy can lead to decadence and annoyance if overdone.
Your writing is IMHO better. He might give all the worlds extravagant detail, but extravagancy can lead to decadence and annoyance if overdone.
