I was directing it specifically at Abdul al-Din but that doesn't matter since you haven't chosen the names yourself. It is historically accurate sure but I just thought since you're Iran you'd want to go with more Persian-ish names such as - Ali Khamenei, Hossein Pirnia, Hassan Habibi, Mirza Nasrullah Khan, or Mohammad-Ali Rajai. Not to say that Naser al-Din isn't Persian - he most certainly is, and from how I understand his family its rule over Iran is historically accurate for CI. In the end it doesn't really matter since they are Muslim in the end, and there are Arab influences all over Iran, but more Persian-ish names would have been more interesting imo. I know you can't do this now but just a thought.
"Al-Din" is not a last name. It literally means "of the religion" so when used with a name it literally translates to "Naser of the religion". It is apart of his first name though. If you were to use a last name it would be Qajar seeing as that is his family/dynasty/tribe name. And Shah would of course be King. I hope this helps and anyone with more knowledge on the subject is free to correct me.
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