DRAW Your Own Story XI: THE HAAAAX!

[GenMarshall]

Holy crap its Master Shake!

 

[Kan' Sharuminar]

I approve

 

[choxorn]

Looks good, though I'd recommend getting a better-looking sheet of paper to write on.

 

[Angst]

Much better comic, funnier and to the point. Rather than make small 1s and 2s, you should attemp at placing the speech bubbles better. But it's a small thing. Some people in here do it too.

 

[Gruekiller]

The paper I drew it on is actually the same as the first one... xD I think something happened when I scanned it.

 

[choxorn]

Much better comic, funnier and to the point. Rather than make small 1s and 2s, you should attemp at placing the speech bubbles better. But it's a small thing. Some people in here do it too.

I'm especially bad with speech bubbles, just read some of my comics and watch as I place bubbles out of order and in strange locations.

 

[Gruekiller]

Here's some more. Had to fit it onto two pages.

Spoiler :

 

[Stylesrj]

You'd think people would be savvy enough not to say such things... right?

Besides, I think they'd rather wait for the hotel to do a good killing

 

[Angst]

Another guy enters! Dun-dun-duuuh!

 

[Stylesrj]

Several hours of work comes to fruition. Plans within plans, secrets are revealed and plots are twisted beyond recognition.

First up, we discover, yes there IS a plot in Narratorspace...

Tanks move faster! Before our opponents think of an actual dialogue! Naha Ne haha ha ha!

Uh-oh... I sense an overly long gag!

Unlike me and CivGeneral, Chuck the Freaking Alien still holds old grudges from DYOS 5...

Stick to your quotes please Kwai...

I'm not endorsing a vote here, but if you feel one of the duo/trio needs to die and which one should, please do tell me, either in PM or in the consul thread
If the explanations are good, then I might change my mind.

As for everything else, it looks like Iran has recreated the Gem Chamber scene...

 

[Gruekiller]

Drama in Narratorspace. :O

 

[choxorn]

Does this mean we can all use the "What's next in this constant parade of interruptions" gag to make ourselves appear at Project Titan?

 

[Thorvald of Lym]

Hey, I have an excuse to finally welcome Gruekiller to the team!

Welcome! I can't get enough of Master Shake!

 

[Stylesrj]

I was waiting for that

 

[Captain2]

 

[e350tb]

Epic Lulz at the ending.

 

[Gruekiller]

I made two more. It seems I actually work the best at 6 AM half asleep. Who knew?

Spoiler :

 

[Thorvald of Lym]

Keep 'em coming!

Epic Lulz at the ending.

That's an understatement. I was hyperventilating.

 

[Angst]

Captain2: I don't get the reference.

Good to see you remain productive Gruekiller! Now I feel bad for not having posted a comic in weeks!

 

[Gruekiller]

I was doing well until I ran out of creative a few minutes ago. :s I know where I want to go, but not how to get there... *ponder*