Decided to make an extended backstory for Hakara. Is here the right place to put it?
EDIT: Decided to go ahead anyway. Vertinari, I don't mind if you don't look at it.
Hakara: The Early Years
Hakara was, early in his life, believed by his village to be the son of the King (hidden away, his clever conman father had said, to avoid a challenge to the throne). This claim was not true, but it greatly influenced his life. Theoretically, everybody (even the local lord) had to bow to him.
Hakara, although he no longer remembers, actually had a major influence on the life of Jal Rekin. From early on, he was obnoxious and arrogant, and got away with it because of his noble birth. Nobody at this stage knew he was of Magi powers.
At this time, Hakara became one of the leaders of mischief- Jal would sometimes expose him, sometimes he would fail for some other reason, but even when he was caught he got away with it due to his noble birth. He actually ordered his own foster parents around, and even got away with getting people killed. (though he got more cautious after that incident...)
As he realised the extent of his power, he became practically a dictator. After the Regency Coup (in which the local lord put his foot down, but Jal's charisma and his own lack of it allowed Hakara to make a rival power base), he almost managed to get the man executed. (By this time, Jal had fled for fear of his life)
But things began to fall apart. The villagers almost killed Hakara, who only escaped because a Magus saved him. Hakara knew he couldn't go back, so decided, at the age of twelve, to join the Magi order.
The Magi Order:
Hakara made friends with the Order's highest nobles at first. Takita, the previous head of the group, deferred to him. Perhaps luckily, the Magi teachers (who had divined his real origin) decided to keep it a secret.
At this time, a practice had emerged of various people (generally lesser mages) trying to infilitrate the Order and persuade young members to join them with promises of power. In the end they usually ended up with less power, but a Magus as an ally was useful. Tashinyar, a man who knew his true origins, was among them- and had unwisely spread the rumor amongst his colleagues.
The first attempt to blackmail him failed when the Magus told him they knew already. However, Hakara was kicked out of his social group (and moved into the bastard's quarters, as he was one). There, he would mean Chamia.
Chamia was a plant for one of the infiltrators, a young Magi too smart to fall for their tricks, but who knew that the less rivals he had, the higher his own status would be. Relaying lines suggested by adults from the outside, he told Hakara that nobility was internal, and that the villagers believed he was the son of a King because of his "truely regal stature".
This would fail, but Chamia had other means. Assisted in tactics by adults from the outside, he engaged in a metaphorical battle with Hakara to frame him for crimes to get him expelled- in particular, necromancy. The battle took a while, but Chamia was assisted from the outside (magical infilitration was possible because the Bastard's Unit had the worse defences, and Chamia engaged in a little sabotage from the inside).
Ultimately, Chamia was victorious and Hakara was expelled at age 16. He had already lost his social status through the exposure of his true origins. He thought that his life was over, and his potential cut at the seams...
(Chamia would actually do fairly well in the Magi Civil War, winning notable acclaim as an infiltrator. Ultimately, he would switch sides and join the New Magi when he realised how badly the old Magi were doing)
Towards Independence
Hakara began by joining the Rouge's Guild (it had a few Mages as well), unaware they had framed him. He would participate in some robberies, though his Magi power was still late-developing. However, it was only a matter of time before another group revealed that it was they who had framed him.
Hakara would then escape and join, not the Order of Farnes (a minor group based around a single sorceror, yet to have a single Magi), but the Cult. They already had a Magi, and were led by a rambling fool. His teachings, however, contained a lot of sense. He had asked "Why?" for all things, including morality. As he had found no answer, he taught that morality was irrational. Hakara had enough of a selfish bent to take this teaching to heart.
When the Cult collapsed, it divided into two portions- Hakara's and his fellow ex-Magi, Parka's. Attempting infilitrations of his own, Hakara would have sucess for some years. He would attempt alliances with both sides of the Magi Civil War, but both attempts were failures.
The Collapse
Men-hasar, a brilliant advisor to the Old Magi, began a campaign to stifle stealing from their Order, starting in the aftermath of Tje. The robbers were used to safety in far-away locations, numbers, the protection of Kings, their own magical prowess, the fairly large numbers of Magi, the Magi elitist policies, or some combination of these. However, the Magi Civil War had inflated their saftey, and thus their confidence. Men-hasar, however, would not tolerate these "robbers".
Hakara, being a Magi himself, was let off comparatively lightly. He was one of the Council of Ten (a coalition of "magi-stealers") who attempted a centeralisation of the "Magi-stealers" and a combination of all the factors. Men-hasar, however, was the most brilliant man of his day, and these policies failed.
This was an even worse time, because at this time Dalius was trying to end the war. A Magi with such obvious New Magi sympathies was almost certain to end up dead. Luckily for Hakara, Men-hasar's direct superior, Changtai, was a Magi elitist who only supported the Old Magi because they were traditional. Hakara begged for his life, and swore a false oath to fight for the Old Magi. Changtai believed him, and insisted he be spared.
Changtai was actually quite an intelligent man, but had one critical weakness- he assumed that nobody would ever swear a false oath. Exploiting this, it was simple for Hakara to make up a story and escape. Changtai, by contrast, ended up getting killed in anger by Men-Hasar. Changtai's son, Ryzan, would swear revenge...