EverNoob
Prince
- Joined
- Jan 26, 2006
- Messages
- 571
Evernoob, the Elohim would make an excellent third story.![]()
I was actually debating between the Elohim and Calabim for my 2nd story

Evernoob, the Elohim would make an excellent third story.![]()
I also think that while life in the Bannor would be tough and spartan that it wouldn't be horrible. If my ancestors had survived a journey through hell, and I was living in a world of petty, warmongering, vindictive gods and some of our enemies had armies of DEMONS, while other wanted to destory creation and bring about the end of the world I certainly would rethink my stance on religious devotion and fanaticism in general. I would take some comfort in living in a highly structured military oriented society in a world full of demons, dragons, zombies, demon worshippers, orcs, ogres, barbarians, magic, angry gods, and otherwise just your run of the mill hostile humans. Especially when my people had been delivered from damnation once.
Valin led Saverous to an old section of the town, set off the docks and buried in a maze of warehouses was a small neighborhood of cramped houses and cobblestone streets. A plaza had been torn up to make way for a statue of a charging knight with a sword blackened from the tip to halfway along the blade. The knight held the sword in both hands, determination set in his face against the undisplayed enemy, or perhaps he was intended to be forever attacking the small fish market he faced.
Who is the knight? Saverous asked. He had been about to ask about eating but the octopi hanging in front of the fish market had ruined his appetite.
You dont know him? Thats the man that freed you, legionnaire Gil-ganthor of the First Light, he killed the Burnt Priest. His sword is supposed to be turned black where it touched the priests blood. He is an advisor to the emperor now, and he holds about as many titles and rewards as the Order can give.
On the other side of the market was a squat building with sign in front of it that read, Fennigrins Tooth. Valin tied his horse to the post in front of the inn.
You know all the nice places. Saverous said, pointing to carriage waiting beside the building. The carriage was well appointed with deep scarlet silk hanging over the windows and obscuring most of the brass frame. Each side of the carriage had the gold symbol of a wavy blade in front of the sun inscribed on it. A guard stood in front of the carriage with pole axe taller than Saverous. He wore a loose shirt tucked in scarlet gloves and tied close with bronze colored cords around his forearms. He had a similar design on his leggings, boots and cords around his calves.
Its a confessor, a relatively new rank in Alexandria. They were priests trained to fight the forces of the Burnt Priest; exorcists, diviners, bloodletters. With the war over most turned to enforcing justice in the empires cities, quite a few came to Alexandria.
They entered the inn. A guard dressed like the one in front of the carriage stood in front of beige brick staircase leading up. A girl washed already clean tables and a portly man with devastatingly bad mustache stood behind the bar absent-mindedly wiping glasses.
Valin walked to the bar and told asked the portly man for a room.
I would be happy to sir but I am afraid our rooms are closed at the moment. Could I offer you and your friend a hot meal while you wait and a tidy room as soon as one becomes available?
Thats fine, there is no hurry. It is easier for a man to eat while tired than sleep while hungry.
Valin smirked at his wit but the innkeeper ignored it, glancing nervously at the guard at the bottom of the stairs as if bad humor was a crime. When the innkeeper didnt respond Valin dropped a few coins on the bar and continued.
Could you have someone tend to my horse as well?
Of course sir, the innkeeper replied, knocked out of his thoughts by the sound of coins Ill have my Annie get to that right away. Have a seat and I will fetch your dinner and even light a fire if you would like.
The innkeeper did as promised and soon Saverous and Valin were seated before a fire, eating stew and fist sized rolls with thick, almost leathery skin and soft centers.
As they ate a call came from upstairs, Pelicus!. The guard immediately charged up the stairs, lowering his pole axe so it could fit up the stairwell. A few minutes later he came down escorting a haggard man wearing a white linen shirt, with long braided hair. His skin was pale and hung in loose waves off of his bones. The back of his neck and his hands were wrapped in bandages and they were soaked with blood. He looked like a man past death but not allowed to die.
He staggered behind the guard, falling into him. The guard grabbed the back of his neck, causing the man to let out a course cry and sob uncontrollably, and forced him out of the inn.
More scarlet came down the stairs, a woman in long embroidered robes with her hair tied back by gold circlets. The bartender and the girl doubled their cleaning efforts as she entered. The woman stopped at Saverous and Valins table considering both of them, Valin didnt look up from his food.
Saverous did, and noticed the woman had brown eyes so light they were almost yellow. She stood staring at Valin and when he didnt say anything she started the conversation:
Returned to ask forgiveness brother Valin?
Brother was a term used for a common layperson, a farmer who attended church on Sunday. In other places it would be a term of familiarity and friendship, but in the highly regimented stations of the Order it was an insult.
I seek the forgiveness of Junil wherever I am, there is no reason to return to Alexandria for it.
She smirked, You still profess a devotion to Junil even though you mock his church. You claim to follow the god of law while you disobey them.
Valin didnt respond.
She turned to Saverous, And you, did you know that the man you eat with is nothing but a humble peasant, a former knight stripped of all standing? Or has he tried to claim some authority with you that he doesnt possess, has he led you to believe that he is a knight in the service of Junil?
Saverous didnt answer, he just stared back at her. Again came her twisted smirk and she placed her hands on the table, leaning in by Saverouss ear where she whispered, Confess.
Saverous felt a welling inside his chest at the word, as if the answer was being pulled up his throat and out of him and he found himself saying, Yes, he told me he was in the service of Junil.
She leaned back, pleased with herself. This is a dangerous game you play rogue knight, you had some friends among the elders but I dont think your lawlessness will go unpunished for long. Do not be surprised if one day you find an oathtaker has come for you. In fact, I might be negligent in my duties if I failed to bring you in for this heresy.
In another world, a world of dust and shadows, Galenna stood over Valin. She was an angel of Junil and heard him silently praying for help, to make this go away, to be able to stay on his task. The inn room was nothing but grey with a few reflections from objects or people of powerful faith or emotion. A knife on one table had been used to kill a man and in this world it lay still with the blood on it. The spirit of a prostitute who had been strangled in one of the rooms sat rocking in the stairwell corner, staring at Galenna and refusing to believe she was dead.
The people in the inn room were represented here, grey and distant. In this world a feathered serpent coiled around the womans neck, whispering into her ear. As she considered turning Valin in the serpent eyed the angel and whispered again, cautioning her against it.
She didnt hear the serpent, not as a person would hear another, but it guided her more than any verbal advice. She leaned away from the table and considered the two, unwilling to leave without making one more attack, uncertain of how to proceed. The serpent provided the answer.
Why do you stay in an inn when you have a home in this very city? Have you visited your wife or son yet?
Valin met the womans yellow gaze. Galenna put her hands on his shoulders, comforting his spirit.
No, I have not seen them.
Ahh.. she continued, arent you worried about how they fare without you?
I trust that Junil will provide for them while I obey his commands.
She smiled. Oh, he has provided for them, provided her a new husband and a bed for them to share. For your son a new father, one who is not a traitor to the church.
Galenna cried the tears that Valin wouldnt show. Valins faith dimmed at the words, his reflection in this spiritual world faded.
Happy with the effect of her words the woman turned and left the inn room, leaving the two companions alone, the bartender and girl had long since fled.
Saverous broke the silence.
And all this time I thought you guys grew flowers, danced and sung songs about sunshine and friendship. That woman would have been at home in the burnt priests army.
That was Maraphene, a confessor of the Order, and a very successful legion-dosen that would have garnered herself a few more ranks if the war had continued. I almost think she was sad to see it end. Her skills arent particularly suited for the domestic life.
Saverous took another mouthful of bread, All the good people I met on the battlefield and somehow I missed her, its a shame.
Valin offered a weak smile at the joke. He was on this quest to find Saverouss salvation and Saverous was trying to comfort him. He wondered how a man who had been the forefront of a demonic army could become good, or how he had gone from being a paladin in high standing to whatever he is now. And for whatever evils Maraphene was capable of, Valin knew she hadnt lied.
*seconds that*
And I got the whiff that Maraphene waws being less deliberately evil and more beurocratic, stiff, and unwilling to place any sort of higher good than the instructions of "He is a traitor to the church, therefore prosecute him (Valin)"
Edit- Whoops, came out after Kael's post. Sowwy.
"The dove believes the choice is between fighting and not fighting, the hawk believes the choice is between fighting now and fighting later, when your enemy is strong enough to defeat you".