Serutan
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Nobody in this thread would say that the cinematography was bad. The problem was that Kubrick sacrificed pacing and a coherent plot on the altar of creating meaningful, awesome-looking shots. The latter is partly Clarke's fault - the man was always much better at creating the feel of a science fiction novel than at writing an actual story arc - but it's hardly as though Kubrick made things any better.
I've always thought that anyone who saw the movie but had not read the book would have a hard time figuring out the plot. The book fills in the many gaps in the movie, especially given that it was written in parallel with the movie. That said, you're right that Clarke's style (which I rather like) does not lend itself very well to Hollywood.