^ Too much impersonality in the story, though. There's too much of a "grand-strategy" feel to it, lacking nitty-gritty life details. EDIT: I mean, it was too obviously anti-Communist revolution preemptive striking.
yeah i was initially gonna have it just pretty much end with them giving the communists their short-term strategy before they ultimately strike the government... but then i was afraid of the red can of commie worms that would open up in the upcoming update or two and decided to twist it into them spying on the communists... but then again Shiba's clearly a tough, duplicitous whore with her own mind and plans on what to do... maybe she's a communist after all? i mean she only sabotaged a group of agitators in an insignificant backwater province - she could do much more damage in the capital
(coming up on the next episode of The Tales of Abyssinia: what IS Shiba's plan?) lol
criticism is welcome, though
boy u better update! i didnt join this NES for it to not continue and allow me to achieve my full greatness as the Abyssinian master of the World! oh sh-
ok none of u saw that. it is NOT my master plan!
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