End of Empires - N3S III

IC:

Metexares declares that Talephas's declaration makes about as much sense as a Zyesh bard - who has lived in one of those ancient treehouses in the Haunted Forests - trying to write a Satar lay.

We entirely withdraw all support for any form of Ayasi appointed by the engineering of Talephas, since Talephas has, by barring the Ayasi's long-standing allies from defending the Ayasi's empire when he himself is in occupation of half of it, demonstrated his intention to relegate the whole Moti Empire to nothing but a puppet state. We hope that all who consider themselves a friend to the Ayasi or his subject, and all who might wish any trace to be left of our ancient and righteous faith and of the truth of Opporia, and all who consider themselves an ally to the Redeemer and High Prince of the Star, especially the Farubaida, will likewise stand up to prevent this. For the Prince Talephas has attacked the Ayasi's land and the Ayasi's bound ally whom the Ayasi called on to defend him. We urge all Godlikes, Chiefs, and Nobles, and even the least man of the meanest of the great lands of the Empire, to stand against such a thing, and defend all civilisation against the barbarians.

Alas! Gone are the hopes of the Moti Empire arising swiftly and in peace from the ashes! By Talephas's decree, long shall the war proceed, and many a man from Bisria to Asandar shall die, or under his unilateral yoke the Moti shall proceed until the end of these days.

OOC:

I must say I'm a bit disappointed with this. I said explicitly weeks ago that I was going to do what I said I was going to do, and this more or less amounts to a post-deadline DOW by the Karapeshai. I distinctly disapprove. Talephas said he would communicate with us regarding strategy; this he did not do, owing more, I think, to OOC than IC factors. Thus, owing more to OOC than IC factors, I equally have had no opportunity either to concede the point to Talephas or to prepare for war with the Karapeshai, and presumably Iggy also has had no opportunity to react appropriately. In short, I'm probably stuck fighting a war that I quite possibly might never have embarked on, just because certain people couldn't be arsed to consult with me about war plans or to issue me ultimatums prior to the sending of orders. Not a single PM have I received at any point vis-a-vis war plans, and I'm not just complaining about Thlayli here. I always maintain that the OOC ought to be managed in such a way as not to affect the IC, and, basically, I feel like the whole situation here has been arranged as it has because people can't be bothered to write proper, functional, diplomacy and to write PMs, and it's not like that can have been remotely unavoidable.

Also, I've been on holiday several days, as you have probably noticed.

North King: Please reverse anything in my orders about supporting the Conference at Moti, and redirect armies towards defence as necessary, although as far as possible not neglecting to carry out the planned actions as ordered.
 
OOC:

I only made the decision to fight you after you withdrew from the peace proposal negotiations, and were (as far as I could hear) opposed to them from the outset. This only made sense in light of your previous demands in order to fight for the Ayasi against the Vithanama.

But there were a long series of slights and insults leading up to this point, including you supporting First-Lerai when Talephas requested your neutrality, your declaration of equality with the Ayasi in contravention of the Peace of Magha, and your demand of territory as the price for aiding the Moti Ayasi in his wars. Opposing the peace with Satores (and failing to contribute your share of the funds) was simply the last straw that made me decide to act against you.

I'm sorry if you didn't see this coming, but you should have.

And furthermore, my orders could be interpreted in such a way as to avoid me attacking you if you didn't move an army across the Kothai. If you did, all bets are off.
 
Of course I moved an army over the Kothai. I said I was going to do so several weeks ago, said so again several days before the deadline, and you made no ultimatum to the contrary as such. You even said that if we weren't willing to pay for the peace you would, and expressed no objection until after the deadline to our attitude to it, despite plentitudinous opportunity to do so. Certainly I would not have been surprised by any declaration or ultimatum against us, but the functional meaning of the way you have chosen to do it amounts to telling us not to cross the Kothai after we had already done it, and not plainly forbidding us to do any such thing before then. In short, you have given us no IC opportunity to concede or immediately react militarily to your declaration, which is all very well if that was what you actually intended to do. Is that what you intended, though?

I find it, IC, surprising that Talephas, despite being given much notice of our planned action, should choose not to send an ultimatum well in advance, despite having good opportunity to do so. If you like, Metexares can criticise Talephas instead of me criticising you - since Metexares could have a lot to object to about this - but I assumed that, in fact, it was Thlayli at fault here. So is this declaration post-update because Talephas felt like relying on us second-guessing his feelings and going to war on the basis of whether Metexares judged him correctly or not - or is it post-update because you were being slow?
 
Of course I moved an army over the Kothai. I said I was going to do so several weeks ago, said so again several days before the deadline, and you made no ultimatum to the contrary as such. You even said that if we weren't willing to pay for the peace you would, and expressed no objection until after the deadline to our attitude to it, despite plentitudinous opportunity to do so. Certainly I would not have been surprised by any declaration or ultimatum against us, but the functional meaning of the way you have chosen to do it amounts to telling us not to cross the Kothai after we had already done it, and not plainly forbidding us to do any such thing before then. In short, you have given us no IC opportunity to concede or immediately react militarily to your declaration, which is all very well if that was what you actually intended to do. Is that what you intended, though?

I find it, IC, surprising that Talephas, despite being given much notice of our planned action, should choose not to send an ultimatum well in advance, despite having good opportunity to do so. If you like, Metexares can criticise Talephas instead of me criticising you - since Metexares could have a lot to object to about this - but I assumed that, in fact, it was Thlayli at fault here. So is this declaration post-update because Talephas felt like relying on us second-guessing his feelings and going to war on the basis of whether Metexares judged him correctly or not - or is it post-update because you were being slow?

Allow me to explain these events in a way that satisfies your accusations.

During the initial round of post-update diplomacy, Talephas (despite being annoyed with the Kothari for previously stated reasons) believed you were acting in good faith. Over the course of the inter-update period, that opinion changed. One key question was nagging at his mind: Why would the Kothari need to move an army across the Kothai if the peace with Satores is secured? Is Sianai, the remaining major military threat, on the southern side of the Kothai? No, he's on the northern side.

So does Metexares believe that the combined military forces of the Karapeshai Exatai and the Holy Moti Empire (along with the now-reconciled Godlikes) are insufficient to deal with the utterly insignificant rabble of brigands that remains? That defies both reason and logic. So the Kothari decision to still send an army across the Kothai makes absolutely no sense, unless you have ulterior motives, which I already know you do when you demanded land and titular concessions as your price for crossing the Kothai.

Both IC and OOC, I don't think you're just ordering an army off for a useless endeavor. This is where your opposition to the peace-treaty made more sense to Talephas. You wanted to send that army across the Kothai, as it wasn't just an instrument of aiding the Moti, but extracting the concessions you needed from them and carving out your sphere of influence in the post-imperial heartland.

Cue Jehoshua's declaration, made by a Kothari Grandpatriarch, that Triad should independently secure its protection with no reference to the Moti, its sovereign lord, and that the Church should "no longer be bound" to the Moti Empire. The very same Triad to which you were marching your forces, and had demanded from the Moti previously. At this point, what was previously looked to Talephas like acting in good faith began to look a lot like a conspiracy against the Moti. So, your initial decision to send troops across the Kothai did not perturb me. That you maintained it even after the major hostilities on the southern side of the Kothai were concluded was what led to possible war between us.

And my knowledge, OOC, of all this information came very close to the deadline, me having a busy OOC schedule and all and being unable to write orders until just about the last night, but also Jehoshua's IC declaration and my understanding of your continued opposition to the peace treaty came very close to the OOC deadline. So I wasn't just "being slow," since all the information wasn't on the table yet.

Had these events come earlier, the rift and ultimatum might too have come earlier. I don't particularly want or need any sort of element of surprise. And to back this up for the record, my orders include that the Kothari should be presented with an ultimatum, IC, to withdraw back over the Kothai before hostilities commence.

So, if you turn your troops around and march right back the way you came to deal with Sianai like you should be doing, rather than marching around the Empire's heartland trying to look big in order to extract concessions from the Moti, we won't have any problems whatsoever.

And as for lack of coordination, I coordinated fully with Iggy on tactics against Sianai, coordination which I adhered to in good faith in my orders. It's not my fault that you didn't reach out to me as he did or make yourself available, and I'm not beholden to your OOC schedule, no personal offense intended of course.

Spoiler :
Spoiler alert.

OOC, I really respect your abilities as a player, spry, and I carefully consider everything you say and intend to do. If, in fact, I'm being overly paranoid and seeing shadows where they don't exist, or assuming a level of coordination between you and Jehoshua that also doesn't exist, consider how the appearance of a conspiracy is also useful to me. In fact, Talephas doesn't particularly care if you were trying to conspire against the Moti or not. He simply wants to use the threat of your intervention as a cudgel to force the Godlikes away from the Grandpatriarchate and towards converting to Ardavan. The fact that it looks like a conspiracy is all that matters.

IC, you aren't Talephas' friend, and you aren't his ally, and neither is Iggy. He did not solicit your help when he planned his intervention in the South. You tried to help the Moti and the Farubaida *destroy* him. The Kothari and the Faronun to Talephas are tools of political expediency, to be used and discarded when necessary to accomplish his goals. I apologize if that sounds harsh, because OOC, I like you and Iggy a lot, but that's the way it is.
 
IC:

The Church of Iralliam is aghast and outraged at the transparent bid of Talephas the Redeemer, Lord that same Exatai which in its various incarnations has of old always been the foe of the Empire with this being so through numerous generations of hallowed ancestors, to assert his dominion over the Moti realm and bring it under thrall through crass and obviously absurd slander against the true faith, through the force of his arms, and through secret plots and deceptions. However despite the outrages of Talephas the Redeemer, the Church must oppose the actions of the Kothari Exatai in its turn, for considering irregularities with regards to the raising up of the previous Ayasi upon the death of First-Lerai, a new Ayasi raised by the godlikes free from illicit imposition or influence by the Karapeshai would be a licit and lawful sovereign of the Empire. In this we reaffirm the previous position of the Church with regards to such an election. To make war against a licit Ayasi who is truly sovereign and upright in the faith, would show the Kothari Exatai to possess ulterior motivations other than those which it has stated, and bring war that is unnecessary and destructive to the unity of the sons and daughters of Opporia.

However should it be clear that the Karapeshai have unduly influenced the decision and that the godlikes and rulers of the Empire have become but executors and slaves of the will of Talephas and his Exatai, than so too do we reaffirm that the election would be illicit and invalid, and the religious sanction of the Church by which the Empire is made holy in the light of Opporia will be correspondingly withheld. Should such a sorry circumstance clearly and without question come to pass, than the expulsion of the barbarians occupying the house of the Ayasi for the sole purpose of the Empires restoration in the light of Opporia would become licit. It would likewise be licit to wage war upon the armies of Talephas, if that self-proclaimed "protector" of the Empire, posturing in his hubris as if he were Lord of all the Earth, refuses to withdraw his forces at the command of a rightly elected Ayasi from the Holy Empire back to his own realm in the North.

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OOC: The paranoia part in your spoiler pretty much sums up the ooc part seeing as I haven't talked about anything really with Spryllino. However your pseudo-contextual reasoning regarding the Church's statement on triad is on pretty shaky ground I would think as well. Looking at the section you keep quoting for example.

"We have noted his cities isolation from the remaining lands under imperial control, separated from them as it is by the Kotthorns, and have urged him to endeavour in galvanising the city and its dependant region under the faith and its guidance, and thus secure independently its protection from enemies and order in those lands in its purview"

Its quite clear that there is a reference to its sovereign overlord, in that the Grand-patriarch is stating that precisely due to its isolation from imperial held lands that the Patriarch of the city should do his utmost to secure its protection from enemies and establish order in the surrounding anarchic regions. If anything this call to autonomously secure itself is opposed much more to the Kothari Exatai than to the Moti Empire, seeing as nowhere at all has the Church disavowed Moti sovereignty over the place or called for it to become some sort of city-state or whatever. Talephas' ranting and raving on it (on very little basis as already has been established) thus comes across very much as some sort of absurdly shoddy (particularly seeing as the Church continuously under Etraxes has been a strong supporter of the Ayasi, and has reaffirmed the Empires rights [pertaining to Kilar for example]) rhetorical bid to dominate the Moti Empire and bring it under his control, something he admitted outright when he claimed to be "protector' of the Moti Empire, and which is reinforced in almost all his actions towards the same.

Spoiler :
"Taking heart from this, and acknowledging that no longer can the Church bind itself to the fortunes of the Moti Empire, perceiving also the needs of those faithful far abroad We henceforth have concluded that change in the structure of the hierarchy of the Church is necessary."

With regards to "no longer binding itself to the fortunes of the Moti Empire", its pretty clear from the context of the statement that consequentially it refers to the Church's own structure. Previously all but one of the Patriarchates was in the Empire and the Church was closely linked to the Ayasi, this is obviously problematic when the Empire is in a shambles, with regards to the administration of the Church's far flung reaches.
 
The Farubaida is alarmed by this unforeseen degradation of relations between the two Exatais. Let words be spoken to exhaustion, before our swords are drawn, and let us focus on the destruction of Sianai, who still squats in the Moti heartlands.
 
I like controversy, possibly to an unhealthy degree. But unfortunately, you're all going to have to bottle this up. I don't accept changes this late (or any orders, for that matter), and have already written this part of the update (apologies for my tardiness, BTW, the work week is not my friend). The situation in update hasn't moved so far that this hullabaloo won't make any sense.
 
All OOC:

Allow me to explain these events in a way that satisfies your accusations.

During the initial round of post-update diplomacy, Talephas (despite being annoyed with the Kothari for previously stated reasons) believed you were acting in good faith. Over the course of the inter-update period, that opinion changed. One key question was nagging at his mind: Why would the Kothari need to move an army across the Kothai if the peace with Satores is secured? Is Sianai, the remaining major military threat, on the southern side of the Kothai? No, he's on the northern side.

So does Metexares believe that the combined military forces of the Karapeshai Exatai and the Holy Moti Empire (along with the now-reconciled Godlikes) are insufficient to deal with the utterly insignificant rabble of brigands that remains? That defies both reason and logic. So the Kothari decision to still send an army across the Kothai makes absolutely no sense, unless you have ulterior motives, which I already know you do when you demanded land and titular concessions as your price for crossing the Kothai.

Both IC and OOC, I don't think you're just ordering an army off for a useless endeavor. This is where your opposition to the peace-treaty made more sense to Talephas. You wanted to send that army across the Kothai, as it wasn't just an instrument of aiding the Moti, but extracting the concessions you needed from them and carving out your sphere of influence in the post-imperial heartland.

That is a perfectly valid analysis of the situation. It may or may not be true, as such (and to tell you that would be something of a spoiler), but I do not remotely dispute that this is an IC thing for Talephas to do. I'm only perturbed by the lack of notice.

Cue Jehoshua's declaration, made by a Kothari Grandpatriarch, that Triad should independently secure its protection with no reference to the Moti, its sovereign lord, and that the Church should "no longer be bound" to the Moti Empire. The very same Triad to which you were marching your forces, and had demanded from the Moti previously. At this point, what was previously looked to Talephas like acting in good faith began to look a lot like a conspiracy against the Moti. So, your initial decision to send troops across the Kothai did not perturb me. That you maintained it even after the major hostilities on the southern side of the Kothai were concluded was what led to possible war between us.

And my knowledge, OOC, of all this information came very close to the deadline, me having a busy OOC schedule and all and being unable to write orders until just about the last night, but also Jehoshua's IC declaration and my understanding of your continued opposition to the peace treaty came very close to the OOC deadline. So I wasn't just "being slow," since all the information wasn't on the table yet.

Had these events come earlier, the rift and ultimatum might too have come earlier. I don't particularly want or need any sort of element of surprise. And to back this up for the record, my orders include that the Kothari should be presented with an ultimatum, IC, to withdraw back over the Kothai before hostilities commence.

So, if you turn your troops around and march right back the way you came to deal with Sianai like you should be doing, rather than marching around the Empire's heartland trying to look big in order to extract concessions from the Moti, we won't have any problems whatsoever.

But the fact still remains that I could not have responded to any such ultimatum. Therefore it can not be an IC ultimatum.

And as for lack of coordination, I coordinated fully with Iggy on tactics against Sianai, coordination which I adhered to in good faith in my orders. It's not my fault that you didn't reach out to me as he did or make yourself available, and I'm not beholden to your OOC schedule, no personal offense intended of course.

Nor I to yours, of course. But if you wanted Metexares to do anything in particular, then I think it's reasonable for him to suppose that you might have told him so. If you didn't mind what course of action he pursued, it would make sense not to express any particular preference - but you clearly did mind, and I think it's fair to maintain that not to say anything is rather remiss of either you or Talephas.

To put it another way, this whole thing has been running to your timetable. It's been you who has been arranging the peace with the Vithanama as it stands, and you who is presumably coordinating the war against Sianai. If you're going to do something that requires a Kothari response, you need to sort it out a bit earlier than a few days before the deadline, not because of my personal schedule, but because of the NES's. The peace with Satores blatantly did require a Kothari response, but I was not asked to assent to it sufficiently before the deadline. Thus it was me waiting for you, OOC, to sort out diplomacy, and not the other way round - and I thus maintain that this whole situation would not have arisen if the OOC aspect of things had been done more promptly. For this I do not hold you exclusively to blame, but I do think that this is a problem that you could have avoided by issuing all your diplomacy earlier - whereas I could not have reliably avoided it by any course of action other than modifying my IC plans - and thereby you alone had in your hands the consistency of the narrative and of the character action. I think that those two important elements have been substantially affected in an untoward fashion by flurried and tardy nature of diplomacy, and that this is a problem, and as a consequence I have no idea what will happen this turn and probably most of what does happen will be no credit to me. However you look at it, that isn't how NESes are meant to work - and I don't see how I could have avoided it, other than by manipulating my IC diplomacy in an equally untoward fashion, whereas you could have done.

Spoiler :
Spoiler alert.

OOC, I really respect your abilities as a player, spry, and I carefully consider everything you say and intend to do. If, in fact, I'm being overly paranoid and seeing shadows where they don't exist, or assuming a level of coordination between you and Jehoshua that also doesn't exist, consider how the appearance of a conspiracy is also useful to me. In fact, Talephas doesn't particularly care if you were trying to conspire against the Moti or not. He simply wants to use the threat of your intervention as a cudgel to force the Godlikes away from the Grandpatriarchate and towards converting to Ardavan. The fact that it looks like a conspiracy is all that matters.

IC, you aren't Talephas' friend, and you aren't his ally, and neither is Iggy. He did not solicit your help when he planned his intervention in the South. You tried to help the Moti and the Farubaida *destroy* him. The Kothari and the Faronun to Talephas are tools of political expediency, to be used and discarded when necessary to accomplish his goals. I apologize if that sounds harsh, because OOC, I like you and Iggy a lot, but that's the way it is.

Oh, of course. That was exactly my perception of things IC, and OOC I hold your playing in corresponding regard. You may or may not be seeing non-existent conspiracies, and I certainly wouldn't be right to swear to it OOC either way (and, in fact, neither should Jehoshua, who is apparently exhibiting his general tendency to back up his IC diplomacy with his OOC word, which is a very shoddy practice that somewhat invalidates the whole point of the IC/OOC distinction).

Lord Iggy said:
The Farubaida is alarmed by this unforeseen degradation of relations between the two Exatais. Let words be spoken to exhaustion, before our swords are drawn, and let us focus on the destruction of Sianai, who still squats in the Moti heartlands.

Swords are already drawn, I think (although - much to my chagrin as you may have noticed - I don't really have any OOC agency over that at all, and what's happened is now altogether in the hands of NK). And I would disagree, and say that at this point Talephas is whom you ought to attack, but on this you equally don't really have any agency, since the whole thing has been resolved - and so I won't issue any more diplomacy until after the update.

Moreover, Thlayli, this exhibits another point. Certainly I could have anticipated your action and written details contingencies for my own army - but I can't expect other people to react to your thitherto unstated action. If you had given me more notice, I would have done all sorts of stuff that involved interactions with Iggy and with the various NPCs in the HME, but this situation also totally deprives me of the capacity to call on any foreign help for a whole five years of warfare, which is again a very unlikely situation from an IC perspective but which has been made to happen IC because of OOC matters, which, as I say above, you could have avoided and I couldn't, seeing as all along I was, in actual fact, carrying out a policy which was basically reactive to other people's, especially yours.

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I think it's unfair for me to be pressed into a war based on a chain of diplomacy that was running to other people's tardy schedules all along, and consequently with both hands tied behind my back. Surely all action, from an OOC perspective, should have been taken to avoid a likelihood of that. I think this is an indictment more generally of players' inclination to leave everything to the last moment too, but I think I'm justified in not being very pleased by the specific situation, and in thinking it genuinely problematic.
 
I like controversy, possibly to an unhealthy degree. But unfortunately, you're all going to have to bottle this up. I don't accept changes this late (or any orders, for that matter), and have already written this part of the update (apologies for my tardiness, BTW, the work week is not my friend). The situation in update hasn't moved so far that this hullabaloo won't make any sense.

So about two or three days then?
 
I should also say, by the way, that I only bother saying all the above because I know that you, Thlayli, have a high regard for verisimilitude and IC integrity; I shouldn't bother in the case of most NESers.
 
Spryllino said:
and, in fact, neither should Jehoshua, who is apparently exhibiting his general tendency to back up his IC diplomacy with his OOC word, which is a very shoddy practice that somewhat invalidates the whole point of the IC/OOC distinction

ooc: You're right that I shouldn't have categorically denied OOC the existence or non-existence of a conspiracy involving the Kothari Exatai and the Church of Iralliam by asserting Thlayli's paranoia in response to his ooc assertion of such.
 
End of Empires - Update Twenty-eight
Heaven's Pyre

Four Years
630 - 634 SR by the Seshweay Calendar
519 - 523 RM by the Satar Calendar
345 - 349 IL by the Leunan Calendar
1454 - 1458 AR by the Amure Reckoning

Spoiler :
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“He is my body. Now do this. It is my last wish. Take the child now. He is our future.” ~ Elikas-ta-Tisatar, on Talephas

“I shall tell you, then. It is this: I believe in the Faith to my bones. I believe that ruin awaits if we should fall.” ~ Javan Altaro


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Snow drifted in through the chapel windows, settling slowly on the tiled floor. Once or twice, the wind would pick up and shift the piles from here to there, like pale sand dunes in some forgotten desert, but mostly they spun aimlessly, dusting Taleldil's hair with white as if to age him before their eyes.

Seras was used to the snow. The chapel had had real windows once, magnificently sculpted glass shards of a dozen shades, by the finest Moti craftsmen. But a storm had scoured the city three years back, howling down from the Kothai, coating everything with ice – growing the buildings beards. The winds had battered at the windows until each of them popped cleanly from their frames, falling on the floor and smashing into a thousand pieces. Seras still had the glass shards in a chest somewhere, but good glass-workers were harder to find these days.

So the frames stood empty, and the snow sneaked in.

Dressed warmly against the winter air, a quintet of men stood in one corner of the chapel, their voices cutting through the chill air and practically slapping against the back wall. It was one of the young master Avelas' newest compositions, their voices fluttering like the snowflakes around them; the tall men setting a strong chord between them, and the others darting in and out of consonance and dissonance. Supposedly, the composer had dreamed it for horns, but found the instruments lacked the agility he needed. It was plausible, Seras thought – the lines seemed to tax the singers dearly.

“Seras, is it?” a thickly accented voice came in a low tone. He turned, and saw a man bundled close against the cold, drawing his thin robes around him. A lowlander, no doubt, who had found his cotton to be of no avail in the Kothai.

“Yes. And you? Faronun?”

The man nodded. “I am Meraio. And I would dearly like it if I could speak to you somewhere warmer.” Meraio's teeth chattered as he looked intently at Seras.

The priest briefly considered refusing and making the lowlander stand in the cold, but eventually nodded. “I must remain here until they finish,” he said, gesturing at the ensemble.

The Faronun attempted a smile, but his lips seemed to be frozen in place. Seras turned to regard the singers, who moved from chord to chord with increasing tempo, their words growing muddled as they recounted a time before the arrival of the Prophet, their lines fighting more fiercely, as if battling for supremacy. Even the bass moved now, the absence of those roots like a hollow in the middle of the song as they rushed onward to a climax.

And like that, it was done. A final few notes, long and low, looking to the birth of the Prophet Kleos.

As the worshipers filed out, Seras went ahead of them, taking the Faronun to his own home, the snow crunching under their feet against the cobbles. Here, the air was warmer, a roaring fire blazing in the center of the house, as was his wife's custom in the winter. She was nowhere to be found, however; they mistrusted visitors.

“You are a long way from home.”

The Faronun did not respond for a time, simply standing by the fire and rubbing his hands together. Eventually, he spoke: “Am I? My grandfather's grandfather hailed from Ioppson.”

“I don't count myself a citizen of Magha, or Asihkar.”

“Yes – forgive my little joke.”

“But you have traveled a long way – that is of no doubt. And I am not some high lord, nor a Patriarch, nor a Redeemer. I cannot help but wonder why someone would travel hundreds of miles to find me.”

The Faronun smiled at this. “If it makes you feel better, I have spoken to dozens of priests on my trek.”

“About what?”

The Faronun continued to warm his hands, turning them from palm to back and over again, occasionally pausing to rub the feeling back into his fingertips. “How familiar are you with the fourteenth canon?”

“'In order that the army of light may not be leaderless...?'”

“Then you know of our... ah... dispute?”

“One could hardly be an Iralliamite preacher and not know of your Conclaves' disagreement.”

Meraio looked at him a long time now, studying his face, his hands seemingly forgotten and unmoving. At long last, he relented. “What do you think of it?”

“It is an interesting theological point.”

“'Interesting?' Is that all?”

“I do not claim to be the Grandpatriarch.”

“In this day and age? You could probably get a few supplicants.” The Faronun chuckled, but Seras remained stoic. “Ah – I suppose you'll be something of a hard sell.”

“Even if I were to agree with Reforged Church... I am one preacher in the corner of an Exatai – notably, an Exatai that does not seem to agree. I would be risking life and limb for a cause that, frankly... I don't see much point in.”

“The integrity of our Church doesn't matter to you?”

“It does.”

“And?”

“And I think the reading of Canon XIV is fairly straightforward. The 'successors' of Kleo simply means the line of succession, not that he has many successors.”

“Can one man truly be given to understand the totality of creation?”

“The Grandpatriarch is an exceptional man.”

“Even exceptional men falter.”

“I do not see how the baying of a dozen lesser men is supposed to be more indicative of the light.”

Maraio shifted to his other foot. “How well can we see Athas from your window?”

The sudden change of tack gave Seras pause. “Not well.”

“Could I make a map of the city? From that vantage?”

“Of the street, more like.”

“And what if I stood in one window, and you stood in another. Would we be able to see more of the city?”

“Obviously.”

“And another man? And another? What if we had men stand in every window of the city, and passed a map between them?”

“I suppose you would be able to – ah... Clever.”

“Thank you.”

“I remain unconvinced.”

“If one rhetorical device could convince you, you would not be a priest.”

Seras smiled. “Perhaps you would be willing to come in and sit a while? It seems we have more to discuss than I imagined.”

“I would be honored.”

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In the shadow of the lighthouse, a new building grew. The latest in a series of improvements to the capital Epichirisi, the Exarch Eres had recommended the construction of a grandly proportioned bathhouse cheaply accessible to all of the common people of the city. Cool water would be piped from the hills to the east, and either filled a great pool at the center, or was directed outwards to fill any of a dozen smaller pools, some cold, some steaming. The richly decorated Eresian Baths stood but a short distance from the center of the city, and soon their waters and surrounding ornamental gardens became a frequent haunt of the people of the city, but perhaps the most remarkable fact was that the Daharai had the time to build them at all.

In stark contrast to their immediate neighbors, the Republic – while its foreign concerns did not evaporate – was still not consumed by them. The civil war in Farea barely occupied a half of their field army, and the judicious application of the Orders' military might quickly sent the pretender flying before them. By the end of the year 631 SR, he had either been slain, or simply vanished without a trace, and his strongholds each subdued. The Orders gave the Golden Chamber a quick orientation before inducting them into their number, and as quickly as that, the two countries were inextricably tied.

A bit more ambiguous was the situation in the Hulinui. Javan Altaro's abdication had left the region chaotic at best, and his designation of several successors had only pushed it further. While the Gallatenes in the north did not seem intent on reclaiming the whole of the old empire, the successor states in the south nibbled at one another continuously, and the Republic surely had to feel a little anxious about their coast.

But for the most part, the post-Javani states continued to fight one another. The Nahari struggled to assert their authority over the loosely-affiliated Halarai satrapies, coming to blows with more than a few of them. The Roshate, just to the north, having concluded a peace with the Farubaida on its own terms, turned towards the Nahari instead and tried to take what they could in the borderlands. Neither one, though, ever threatened Daharai assets.

It was Astria, then, that occupied most of their attention, for here, the Exarch of Caon had appealed directly to them in an attempt to save his own city from the pro-Javani regime in Tadon. After a tense series of negotiations between the Satar, Gallatenes, and Carohans, the Opulensi had quietly been agreed upon as mediators. The Republic dispatched their own delegation to the region, and ensured that the civil war ended with minimal fanfare. The lack of other influences in the region simplified things greatly. The cities agreed to Samnar in principle, but with the unofficial approval of the Daharai, they each wrested so much power to themselves that the new king barely had any clout outside his own native city.

The gift of a lovely statue to the Aortai and some impromptu training exercises later, and it looked like the north wouldn't be trouble for the Republic for some time hence.

And so it was to their south that the Daharai turned now, pressing across the Nakalani and into the island chain that they had still only begun to prod at. The Ilfolk, despite their somewhat objectionable religion, had escaped the ire of the Daharai after contact, almost certainly because of the northerners' other concerns. The Opulensi who had come into the region before the civil war had settled in the northern port, simply called “Pulenser” for their presence. They sought to coexist with their new neighbors, running a quiet trade route with the north, but otherwise turning a blind eye to the more bizarre of their native friends' practices.

The Ilfolk, too, had evolved over the years. Led now by an Epichirisi-educated politician, Palafte, they had started to centralize, and began to implement northern ideas of agriculture and production, harnessing the Opulensi merchant class to a growing export economy.

All that ended when the Orders attacked. Decreeing that the Ilfolk religion of the Slaangtempl could not, in good conscience, be allowed to continue, they sailed in full force from the isles of the Baribai, and landed at Pulenser with an army of several thousand. The local Ilfolk warriors could barely put up any resistance, only slaying a scant dozen of the invaders, and the Opulensi in the port raced to welcome the newcomers, insisting that they had long awaited this day. Despite skepticism from the Daharai, they were still happy to use the infrastructure that their compatriots had built up, however minimal.

Proceeding inland, the Daharai made for the Slaangtempl itself. Here, the long years of development worked against the Ilfolk, for what might have otherwise been a difficult journey for the invading force was instead a simple task – they made along the widest and clearest road, and found themselves at the famed temple of blood itself.

The advance had been so swift that the Ilfolk scarcely knew the Daharai were attacking before they had already arrived. In a panic, the temple priests managed to evacuate some of the most holy and important texts from their libraries while the small garrison fought a brave but ultimately futile delaying action. The scant few minutes bought probably saved the heart of Ilfolk culture from utter destruction, but it did not save the Slaangtempl – in an orgy of fire and somewhat older blood than it was used to, the place was put to the torch.

The Orders intended to rebuild the place as an Indagahori temple, and set about their work even as the occupation force tried to root out the rest of the Ilfolk resistance.

But this proved easier said than done.

Emerging from secret crevices in the jungles and hills, the Ilfolk fought a ferocious war of resistance, bleeding at the edges of the Daharai army and causing more casualties in the little engagements across the island than they had in any pitched battle. Finding the tropical clime not at all to their liking, the Orders' occupation force was bogged down in a very nasty little conflict.

Their circumstances quite similar, the Kothari opted for a different approach. With a thousand obligations in the north (most of them some variation on “the Holy Moti Empire is collapsing”), they looked at the war in Parna and concluded that it wasn't worth the investment of soldiers. Instead, they funneled an enormous sum to the king to continue his fight against Irnat, and limited their own involvement in the region to Tsutongmerang and the lands around it.

Here, in conjunction with the Trahana, they constructed – or rather, expanded – the harbor at the city into an enormous edifice, able to handle trade for what would likely be centuries into the future. Indeed, it was too large to be justified solely by Kothari and Trahana users, but – fortunately for its investors – the native Tsutongmerang merchants had begun to expand their own fleets. In any case, the coast exploded with merchant activity, and the arrival of a Farubaidan exploratory fleet crushed a nascent group of pirates in the straits.

The Carohans had sent similar fleets into the east, too, but there they were only resailing old waters. In the south, there lay seas that no known sailor had plied, and they were forced to proceed cautiously. The land of the Stato'i was the focus of their efforts here: the Carohans found that their island, or perhaps continent, extended for hundreds of miles further than they had anticipated. Indeed, the second attempt to round it met with little success – what had seemed to be the last cape turned out to merely be yet another bay, and with supplies running low, they were forced to turn back once more (though not before, the scientists on the expedition noted, they had passed a good five hundred miles south of the equator.

Another tentative feeler was sent out – only half a dozen ships at most – to the west, and found it surprisingly smooth sailing, reaching the Airendhe with almost no trouble, and bringing gifts to the court of the Trahana Emperor themselves before returning in a difficult voyage that battled the currents every step of the way.

A few of these ships might even have stopped in the kingdoms of the Gaarim and Zarian on their route back. Both of these tiny chiefdoms had greatly expanded their militaries in recent years, and began to launch wars of expansion in every direction outwards. The Gaarim had turned to a nascent cavalry force – recruited from the highland horses that had only been introduced to the region with the recent trade ties to the north – and managed to put to flight their overmatched foes. The Zarian, on the other hand, tended to rely on individual heroism and valor to triumph. In all likelihood, their borders would meet before too long – and at that point they would have to deal with their first real neighbor in their respective histories.

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Perhaps frustrated by their own lack of success on the mainland or in Auona, the Leunan Republic turned to the Nakalani. Striking out across the waves, they resettled the old outer islands that had once served as penal colonies and a naval waypoint. Not content with this rather minor scrap of land, they also funded an expedition into the deep unknown of the eastern ocean, perhaps fueled by rumors that the home of the Kitaluk lay across a relatively narrow sea.

If so, the rumors proved to be untrue. With no real clue where they were going, and lacking the naval technology to cover long distances reliably – or, in some cases, at all – the Leunans quickly discovered that the ocean had quite a lot of water and very little else. A very lucky few ships caught a current returning them home to the mainland, and a couple of slightly more lucky (or slightly less, depending on whose perspective you adopted) found a previously undiscovered spit of land in the middle of the ocean.

But several more simply vanished into the deep blue, and if they did in fact reach the home of the Kitaluk, no word of them filtered back through the Kitaluk themselves.

The survivors limped home just in time to greet the arrival of a Farubaidan expedition, and warned them against continuing east; the Carohans, having had no intention of going east at all, instead turned north, where they made port at Tarwa, and sent along a few ambassadors to the Archives at Parta, and even one or two who met with the Parthecan King Genda. Finally, they returned home, bearing holds full of indigo and better maps.

Parthe – as we have already seen – had escaped the eastern wars almost completely unscathed, and had a head start on their neighbors in half a dozen places, most obviously in the north. With the Leunans continuing to try to push across the seemingly endless Nakalani, and the Daharai far more concerned with the southern half of the continent, Parthe alone explored the northern coast. Trade flourished, particularly after they helped the Nakitsa build a new harbor at the mouth of the Lelian, and constructed a fortified depot to go with it. The timber of the Purolin Peninsula was floated to the port, which became a hub of new ship construction, and the route around the peninsula grew safer every year with new maps and increased development.

In Parta itself, Genda, perhaps inspired by the tales brought back from the far west by his most intrepid explorers, expanded the Archives still further, and complemented them with a new Academy. Designed to train its students in myriad subjects, much of its population would hail from the upper classes and the favored nobles. However, a few, too, would come from the common people, if they had the cleverness to get in.

Across the sea, the Acajuren Republic, apparently alarmed at the erosion of the ancient religion, began to enact a series of anti-Aitahist reforms, taxing these adherents heavily and more or less barring them from public office. It was an unsubtle move, and its meaning was doubly underlined when the Republic sent a thoroughly insulting missive to their neighbors in the Qasrai Empire.

The fact that they mistakenly addressed the “Aitah” there as a “he” was possibly the most insulting part of all.

However, the verbal tirade did not have the intended effect. The Qasraists seemed mildly disinterested in the Acajuren forces, even when they built up on the frontier. Only later did the news filter back through other channels as to why – “Qasra”, hoping to take advantage of the collapse of Gallatene authority, launched an enormous assault across the frontier against his rivals in the Savirai Empire, targeting Gurach.

The Qasraist attack took their enemy by surprise, but only barely – used to such attacks, the Savirai closed the gates and managed to weather the initial storm before rallying an army of their own. On the shores of Her Tear, the Qasraist army was utterly routed, the false Qasra slain by the spears of his foes, and his daughter, the “Aitah”, forced to flee into hiding in the desert.

With his army smashed, there was no one to really be angry at anymore. The Acajuren armies advanced on a broad front and captured the city of Mirais, but halted at the edge of the desert. None in their number wanted to enter the Face of the Moon.

Back in Iolha proper, continuing reforms raised discontent from an unexpected quarter – the city itself. The Assembly gave each city in the Republic representation in their body; in particular, they focused on the first few cities conquered by Iolha, which had traditionally remained under the thumb of the main city. Those living in Iolha itself did not take kindly to the erosion of their power, but it stopped short of any sort of armed confrontation after a moderate display of force in the capital.

In any case, by late 634 SR, some had started to worry about the stability of the northern border – rumor had it that in Lesa, the old, semi-divine king Jessen Harare had fallen seriously ill, leading to a bit of a power struggle between the various claimants to the throne.

Far to the south, the Rihniti did what they could to recover from the war that had slashed through their homeland, but in truth there wasn't that much to recover. The Leunan invasion had never reached the productive core of the kingdom, and so long as that remained intact, Rihnit would continue.

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In a remote corner of the world, events passed far from the gaze of the great powers of the center. As the Satar devolved into an alarming civil war that might still consume the entire Karapeshai, the powers to their north and west took advantage of the respite from the threat of an expansionist Sianai to settle their more local quarrels. The Nevathi, despite supplying mercenaries to the south, did not join in the war between the Trahana and Vithanama, but this might have owed more to being pressed back in their own lands by “mysterious” raiders. In truth, everyone knew they were from the Telha Exatai, and the conflict between the two countries seemed likely to lead to open war before too long. The only other powers likely to challenge for dominance of the steppe seemed to collapse, or at least were focused in other directions – the Sharhi nearly evaporated after a disastrous loss to the rebel Kyumai khagan, while the Adanai were picked apart by the three most remote Eshais.

The Telha expanded on another front, too, expanding into the territory of the disorganized Hai Vischa, though they made only a little progress here.

It was in the far north that a quiet people emerged, the Tadagang, who had thus far escaped the notice of anyone hostile. Relying on their community to emerge unscathed from the harsh winters of their land, they had once faced ferocious raids from the southern Lusekt, but that era had long passed with the subjugation of Luskan by Cyve and later the Karapeshai.

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Only a year before, the armies of Gallat had reigned triumphant across the continent. Not that they weren't triumphant now – the country had been saved from the last invasion, and all of its real enemies broken by the lightning campaigns of Javan. But the growing expectation had been for Javan to forge a Gallatene Empire – at least until he died and plunged it into chaos.

Javan spared them the trouble by vanishing into the desert and plunging them into chaos anyway.

For while the Testament had laid out quite clearly what sections of the empire were to go to whom, the squabbling broke out almost immediately. The oddly-shaped borders of the Javani Roshate – and the fact that the Halarai Satraps had barely listened to the world-conqueror, let alone the toadies who had followed him – meant that a three way conflict had embroiled the south, while the Astrians quietly slipped out of the Gallatene orbit.

But in his essential mission, Javan had succeeded. Gallat was safe from southern intrusion, and while the rest of the empire squabbled over the scraps, the Halyrate stood quite aloof under the rule of Cavor. The Sadorishi, a militant order established during the latter part of Javan's reign, was granted a great tract of land in the Occaran Gates, centered around a fortified town at Talad. The hope was that the heavy investment here would beat back any further attacks from the desert, if in the very long term the friendly regime in place at Gurach fell apart.

The newfound safety allowed the Gallatene nobility to restart their political games, but these faltered very quickly as a new problem arose.

Only a year removed from the Ascension of Javan, the Airani Roshate effectively declared its hostility.

The roots of this conflict lay in the decades prior, where the reforms of Risadri had brought Gallatene (and therefore, Orthodox) Maninism more into alignment with what their own populace had already started to practice – the veneration of the Haradim, or saintly and righteous figures as exemplary models of the pursuit of Manin; particularly that of Alon and Talad. The Airani countered that this amounted to something quite close to crypto-Aitahism, and in response elevated the Ward of Almadi, Ahala, to the position of High Ward.

The usurpation of the title from the Gallatenes – not to mention the fact that it disregarded the still very alive and well High Ward in Gallasa – was an insult that could not be ignored. In response, the Gallatenes called the Sirasonan Synod, inviting delegates from across the Maninist world, and receiving them from as far afield as Oltheng, the Karapeshai, and the Brunnekt (and everywhere in between). The mission of the Synod was quite simple – to hammer out exactly what had gone wrong, decide what to do about it, and ensure the Faith remained united.

A first and critical component of the Synod decided that the veneration of the Haradim could not be construed as Aitah-worship. Indeed, aside from both counting Aelona among their number, the two practices could not be more divergent, but getting it down in writing was helpful in and of itself. They rapidly moved onto codifying the practice of choosing the High Ward. What had once been a rather eclectic tradition derived from accumulated ad hoc procedures had to be stripped down and revised – the High Ward had to be chosen by the most senior and experienced Wards (and the representation of several of the more obscure Maninist countries would be secured at this time as well), in a conclave that met in secret among the small and isolated peninsulas and islands that lay to the south of Sirasona. Here, they would remain isolated from any outside influence, ensuring that the opinions of temporal rulers such as the Halyr and Rosh did not impact the decision.

And lastly, they condemned what they termed an obvious power grab by the Airani. The stage seemed set for war.

But at the same time, it seemed that neither side had really anticipated the religious conflict coming to a head so quickly. The Airani had barely mobilized their army, readying it on the frontier but mostly holding it back as they appealed to far-flung sectors of the Faith to declare their support for Ahala. The Gallatenes, though they seemed eager to leap into action, were surprised by this relative inactivity, and did not seem to have an offensive game plan. Instead, they appealed to their own allies to declare their support as well – hoping for some aid from the Javani if nothing else.

The response was lukewarm. Ereithaler, a stalwart ally of the Gallatenes from the start, declared that they would never recognize Ahala. A few more kingdoms followed suit, but none lent significant military aid. Still more hesitant were any allies of the Airani: while a delegation from within the Karapeshai declared tentative support, no independent monarch moved to support them.

As no help seemed to be coming from abroad, the Gallatenes sprang into action alone. Raiding the shipping that entered the Airani ports, they damaged one of the critical income sources for the Roshate, even as they sent agents into the country to attempt to garner support on the ground. All this culminated in an assassination attempt on Ibala's life, and while it would prove unsuccessful, the Roshate was surely on their back foot regardless.

The Gallatenes did not stop here, and the next blow would be rather more devastating. As the Airani guarded their border closely, the Gallantenes boarded their ships and raided the northern coast, assaulting Kardil, Manas, and Bayad from their harbors, storming the latter two before anyone from the Airani army could even react. Kardil hung on by the barest of margins before a relief force from the frontier forced the Gallatenes to withdraw, but the other cities now lay under a foreign flag.

The worst outcome was avoided, however. A Gallatene raiding force led by Cavor himself made for Almadi – but the successor did not prove quite the equal of Javan himself (or, perhaps, his allies in this desert were a little fewer than they'd been in the Savirai) – and the scattered Siran forces remaining in the region were able to repulse him at the last possible second.

They'd been able to avoid the death of the High Ward, and the sack of their capital, but things looked less than rosy for the schismatic Airani.
 
A final, and easily overlooked, segment of the conflict would play out in the Karapeshai Exatai, which was far too wrapped up in its own wars to give much attention to the Maninist conflict over the sea – the near-civil war in the Einan and political maneuverings between the powerful Scroll Tribe and Rutarri families in Accan took up all of their energies not devoted to the south. Thus, the debate among the largely Maninist Taudo over who they might throw their weight behind attracted little to no attention from the Redeemer, nor from his main domestic governor, Arteras. Some of the most devoutly Ardavani families, though, saw a common element in the worship of Taleldil (“Talad”) in the Gallatene Maninist cohort. Soon, funds from some of the richer noble families passed to one side or the other, for ideological and political reasons alike.

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Tiagho. It had been the center of the world, once, long before men had known the name of Dula. The conqueror of the valley, the heart of the valley, serpent city. The ancient palaces, the crumbling temples, the pyramid that soared over the whole – and a canal dug once as an overflow for the oft-flooding river that now seemed to be the only thing standing between it and conquest.

For while Satores had been in the far east, the Trahana had advanced further up the river, and now it seemed that Tiagho was in their sights – the army arrived in force, almost two hundred thousand strong.

Already, the city settled in for a siege. Maize had been stockpiled for almost a year now, dried meats and sweet water procured and squirreled away, and the scholars of the academies had begun to construct bizarre apparatuses for use in warcraft – they only awaited the approach of the Trahana armies. And so they stood on the walls, and watched, and readied.

And nothing happened.

The Trahana simply left a force of their own to cover the city and prevent its garrison from harassing their rear, and moved on, the enormous tail of their army winding into the sunrise, visible from the top of the sacrificial pyramid. While the common people cheered at the thought that their would-be assailants had moved on, cooler heads pointed to the fact that the city was still under siege – and that the movement surely served as a portent of some clever machination by the southerners.

Indeed, the Trahana knew that, one way or another, Satores would surely return to defend his homeland, and had deemed the cities of the valley quite secondary to the objective of stopping him from doing exactly that. Leaving much of the work of subjugating the region unfinished, they intended to block Satores' return before he ever reached the valley. This was easier said than done – intelligence about where his route would take him was sketchy, at best, and so smaller, more mobile forces had to be detached to monitor the routes through the Highlands and from Ndeos to Tiagho.

But the first trouble did not come from Satores – instead, it came from his subordinates and allies. A large Vithanama army skirted the northern edge of the Taidhe and struck deeply into the Thala River Valley. The attack formed one side of a pincer: the other came from the north, as the Narannue, apparently intent on joining the war on the side of the Vithanama, marched south from their main holdings, as well as inland along the River Thuaitl. Hiring a number of Nevathi mercenaries, they made serious gains against a distracted Trahana Empire, one that had left only minimal garrisons in the region to begin with.

The war left another power quite free to act almost unnoticed – the Noaunnaha intervened in the Thera civil war at the behest of their partisans, and smashed the main part of the rebellion, reestablishing their primacy in the country at a stroke. But it was only a side show compared to what would happen in the old Dulama lands.

The armies moved slowly to confront one another: Satores marching slowly up the Scara Yensai, and amassing his new army around Caghin, with more forces arriving from Anraugh. Advancing in a huge column westward, they drew nearer the inevitable collision with the Trahana advancing from their encampment near Tiagho; it was in the road across the ridges here, near a valley named Balam, that the battle would be fought.

Despite Vithanama hubris and Trahana trepidations, the armies were much more equal than anyone could have guessed beforehand. The Vithanama's western force had taken a great number of their infantry, and while the Redeemer expected to make up most of the difference with his mounted soldiers, the Trahana had invested heavily in a new cavalry corps. Indeed, the Trahana outnumbered their enemies, with equal numbers ahorse.

Even so, Satores rightly assumed the Trahana would be stretched to their limit, and hoped to end the war at a stroke here. His infantry advanced in a great line to engage the heart of the Trahana line, but his cavalry wheeled about either flank to try and surround them and take advantage of their immobility to wear them to nothing.

But the Trahana cavalry were not only more numerous than expected, they proved doughty fighters as well, drawn from the elite of the old Dulama Empire. Charging against the advancing Vithanama, they scattered the lighter horse, who held back to harass them from a distance – a stalemate, but the initial attack of the Vithanama had been frustrated. With a shout, the Trahana now began to sally forth in echelon, rows of pike formations beginning to claw at the edges of the Vithanama infantry line.

But it was there, in the center of the battle, that the carnage played out most fiercely. Hundreds fell beneath sword and spear, and arrows flew thick and fast from side to side. A few times, one side or the other seemed to rally at long last and verge on victory, but this always proved illusory as the two descended back into chaos. Observing this, Satores rallied his cavalry and ordered them to deliver a great shock to the center of the enemy line, and when a gap opened up, they cantered forward, shouting fierce war cries and flashing their skeletal emblems once more.

This would be the first great test of the Trahana pikes – a test they failed. Wavering in the face of the charge, one of their edges began to shatter under the pressure, and it looked like the Vithanama could roll up the enemy line from within.

But it was not to be.

The Trahana cavalry, seeing this, gathered themselves, and galloped straight into the same gap, halting the Vithanama advance, and sending their cavalry reeling backwards, too. At this point, on the other wing, the Trahana infantry's discipline began to tell, and it pushed the Vithanama back, and soon this turned into a general retreat. But Satores kept his army in good order, and the Trahana chose not to pursue – their enemies could still put up a fight, and moreover, they had succeeded: Satores had not reached the Abrea.

But though the victory had been tactical and strategic both, it also could not last. With threats behind them in many places, forces had to be bled off to simply watch the rear of the Trahana line. A push might have been made to subdue Tiagho, but Satores managed to keep his foes off-balance by seeming to hold the majority of his force near the old battle-site, but in secret moving with another force, more mobile, to try and come down through the Highlands. Here, his army in tow, he made his way to Tiagho, and behind the Trahana battle lines. Fearful of having their supply lines cut, the Trahana withdrew.

But they had bought considerable time – enough to subdue the last of the downriver fortresses, and a great deal of loot. The question of the hour was obvious – would these victories (for both could claim one) be enough to satiate the combatants?

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With the capture of the Ayasi Sixth-Gaci, not only had the Holy Moti Empire been thrown into chaos – nearly everyone agreed that the office-holder ought to be replaced. Sixth-Gaci had proven himself incompetent, if nothing else, and certainly, no one thought the position should remain in the hands of Sianai's pawn. But the question of who should succeed him was a complicated one, not least because the Karapeshai and Kothari both had a large stake in what would happen – and because there were half a dozen factions among the Moti themselves.

Thus, as the allies made peace with the Vithanama – giving him an enormous ransom for the city of Krato – and his forces began to fall back to the west, they began to unknot that problem piece by piece.

The first and most obvious problem was what to do about the various Moti rulers who had already been acclaimed. Sixth-Gaci could not be expected to participate in the council for obvious reasons, but the Godlikes faction in the civil war had already selected a Chief-of-Chiefs in Sixth-Frei, an ineffectual man of mixed popularity. Multiple other candidates waited in the wings as well, and by the time the council was actually convened, the backroom deals consumed them all.

By the time they were through, the vote had gone back and forth between Sixth-Frei and a much more conservative candidate, Second-Lerai. But in the end, Sixth-Frei was confirmed (once again) as Chief-of-Chiefs, and as Ayasi as well, and he set to the task of trying to rebuild the shattered Empire, insofar as that was even possible.

Obviously, Sianai had not gone away, and it was here that the biggest obstacle remained. But this wasn't really Sixth-Frei's fight to pick: the Redeemer Talephas occupied the passes south of Gaci, and the Kothari Redeemer Metaxeras led a force north after securing much of the land between the Kiyaj and the Kothai, ostensibly in the name of the Ayasi. At the same time, the Carohans, after ensuring the withdrawal of the Vithanama, brought most of their forces west along the Had River Valley, while another Satar foce closed in from the north. Sianai, it seemed, would be trapped.

But Sianai had no intention of remaining where he was. Releasing his prisoner at long last, he left Sixth-Gaci in Het with a ceremonial guard and a few commanders to try and create an army of his own. Shortly thereafter, he departed with the rest of his army, some sixty thousand strong.

The alarm traveled far and wide, and all of the allies wondered where he might go next.

Talephas did not wait to see. The Shield Prince led his own army out of the valleys north of Gaci, and brushed aside what meager resistance he met, instead moving to shadow Sianai as he moved north. For his part, the Wind Prince moved as quickly as he dared, hoping to reach the north and spark the low-level civil war in the Karapeshai into a much larger general conflict. Playing into this was Talephas' declining popularity at home, but for the plan to have any hope of success, he would have to reach the north first.

And, as he quickly discovered, standing in his way was an army under the command of Arteras, Prince of the Scroll.

Arteras had gathered an enormous army under his command – fifty thousand – by itself almost as large as Sianai's entire force. Were it to face him on an even field, Sianai would likely have the upper hand, but there were many other factors at play – not least the Sesh River itself, which stood between the two armies, and, with a Karapeshai loyalist fleet in the river, it seemed almost uncrossable.

But Sianai had earned his reputation as a creative warrior well, and he rose to the task admirably. His army halted at Nikros, and began to haul enormous logs down from the foothills of the Kothai, constructing a fleet just south of Arteras' position. Arteras sent his ships to burn the nascent fleet – which they did with ease – and Talephas closed on his position from behind, but it had all been a ruse, with scarcely five hundred Uggor levies being the entirety of the force left there. The rest had wheeled about the upper Sesh valley, skirting the fortified positions, and crossing the river near the cataracts west of Magha.

Indeed, he had almost been caught by the Kothari from the south, but he had given them the slip as well, and now had a straight shot across the Rath Tephas to Siaxis. Or at least, that's what he'd hoped, but Talephas had an easier time crossing the Sesh than he did, and moved to intercept him, with a small Kothari detachment pursuing him from behind. It was only a matter of time before the allies, coming from several angles, caught him. The stage was set for a battle on the ancient plain.

All that said, there was little to be decided at this point. Though Sianai had nearly managed to get back home, and nearly managed to raise the rest of the Princes against Talephas, he now faced overwhelming odds – sixty thousand of his own against nearly two hundred thousand foes, commanded by a general as cunning as he was. The Battle of the Silver Plain – so called because, in a last ditch desperation effort, Sianai decided to attack under the moonlit skies to maximize confusion – lasted only a few hours, and ended with the disintegration of the Wind army as a functioning fighting force as a pincer of pikes closed in from all sides, and Sianai lay slain on the battlefield, killed by the blade of Talephas.

But the death of Sianai did not end the problems for the restoration of the Empire. The south was largely garrisoned by the Kothari now, the Had by the Farubaida, and the chances of Satara returning to Moti rule any time soon looked minimal at best. Perhaps worse than all this, the allies had even come to blows.

Announcing their intention to secure Triad, the Kothari maneuvered through the south and won the tacit approval of the Church as well (who had themselves begun to garrison regions further and further afield in the hopes of securing all the paths to the Kiyaj valley).

Annoyed with their presumptuousness, Talephas sent an army under one of his most skilled Accan lieutenants, Tesecci Atteri, to intercept the Kothari attack on Triad and capture it “for the Ayasi” instead. By the time Tesecci had arrived, of course, the Kothari force had already captured it, but with a much larger force, the Satar were able to surround the city and bring it under siege. Admittedly, the Satar met with considerable difficulty in repulsing Kothari assaults on their positions around the city – it turned out that rugged terrain was no better for pike formations than it was for cavalry – but they held on.

With the nearly constant catastrophe wracking this land for decades now, it was understandable that nearly every religious figure believed the people of the Holy Moti Empire would be ripe for the picking. Not only had the earthly authority of the Ayasi been utterly torn apart – that earthly authority had been bound so closely with the spiritual authority of the Grandpatriarch that it seemed like both had to crumble, particularly when several critics pointed to the mobilization of the Church in the Kiyaj Valley as a sign they had abandoned the Empire.

The truth was a little more complicated.

Initial overtures were made by Aitahist priests and Ardavani alike – both stressing the fact that the Godlikes had never been particularly invested in the Iralliamite Church in the first place. The Ardavani went so far as to create a mildly convincing geneology which linked the Godlikes to Taleldil – thus giving truth to their name – while the Aitahists relied more on the long centuries of cultural influence they had on the Empire. But they gains they made were mostly limited to the areas one might expect – the Aitahists to the Godlike-dominated regions just south of Gaci, which had always been some of the least Iralliamite of the Empire, and the Ardavani to the border regions which had cultural cross-pollination for centuries now.

On the other side of the Empire, a surprising new influence came in the figure of Farubaidan soldiers, who, having arrived in the south to fend off the Vithanama invasion, began to spread their faith in the cities where they recuperated; it was a welcome message to peoples disenchanted with the Grandpatriarch but hardly ready to give up their old beliefs. Altogether, it set up quite an interesting dilemma for the newly enthroned Sixth-Frei.

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A spray of salt cut at her mangled arm, the feeling like a burning knife. She grit her teeth at the pain, but otherwise tied the lines as well as she could. Siskiwik had offered her the chance to stay below-deck, at least until her wound healed, but there were only four experienced sailors on the ship. None of them had ever made the journey to the Horizons' Rim, either – and all they had was a single chart of the ocean between, none too detailed, and all too wide. They could only ride the current, and hope.

“Nimipe! That's enough for now.” She flashed a glare at her captain, but he stared her down sternly. “You're no use to me if you hurt yourself more, and the ship's as ready as it'll be.”

She looked to the south, where the stormclouds gathered. It had looked quite innocent an hour ago, but now the wall of clouds that advanced on them towered higher than the eye could see. Even against the dark, you could see the tell-tale streaked gray of rain.

“Do you think we've done enough?”

Siskiwik had almost certainly never been this far out on the ocean, and it was questionable whether he had ever seen a storm like this. But his face remained stoic as he nodded. “The ship is sturdier than you think. Go below.”

She bit her lip stubbornly. “And what am I supposed to do in the meantime?”

“Take a nap? I'm not your father.”

She shot him another dirty look before finally climbing the rope ladder down to the bottom.

It was an uncrowded hold – they'd eaten their way through most of the food in the last few weeks, and the water, and they'd discarded many of the crates to try and speed their journey. It hadn't worked – or at least, it seemed like it hadn't worked. According to their inquiries in Kwaan, they should have reached the Rim after only a fortnight, but that mark had long since gone and past. She'd wondered idly if Siskiwik had any idea what he was doing, or if they were all sailing to their deaths. Was it any better than what they'd left?

She absentmindedly bumped into a beam, and her arm screamed with pain. With her good arm, she wiped away sudden tears. She swore repeatedly under her breath, and cradled the good arm, making her way down the middle of the ship.

“Is Sis still up there?” came a voice in the semi-darkness.

“Yes,” she said.

“Madman,” the response came. “Don't get me wrong, so were you, to be up there at all. But he's twice as bad as you.”

“You might have helped. At all.”

“Helped what? Did you even look at the storm?”

“Yes.”

“Then you should already know we're dead.”

“Doesn't hurt to try,” she said, ignoring the fact that, in reality, it had hurt her a great deal to try.

“Bah!”

She glared at Taku before gingerly sat down next to him, still shielding her arm against further damage. They sat in silence for a while, the faint light coming from the portal abovedeck growing dimmer and dimmer with the approach of the storm. Eventually, the others came down one by one, all but Siskiwik himself, who had insisted to them that he would just check a few more things. They spoke in low, careful tones, but there was really nothing to say. Either they would survive or they wouldn't.

The air grew warmer, more oppressively humid. A wind started to pick up, catching at the ship even though all the sails had been taken in. It was already louder than their voices; the only thing louder was the outrigger itself slapping against the water again and again as the boat rocked a little ways up and then settled back onto its beam. Had they been outside, they would have been astounded – the winds whipping so fiercely over the ocean surface, the spray so thick, that walking on the deck felt more like swimming.

Minutes passed, then hours, the tempest tearing at their ship, the wood sounding like it might peel apart along the grain and dissolve into nothingness – and still the captain had not come below. A knowing looked passed around them at some point, but no words – the storm was too loud for them to have been said anyway.

The only thing that kept them upright, she knew, was the outrigger. The ship almost flipped anyway – a terrifying feeling when they were on the inside, and the crawled up the opposite wall to try to force it to settle before if finally calmed down. Even so, saltwater seeped into the hold, and half a dozen crates had been spilled on their sides, their contents pouring out to mingle with the water.

By the time it was all over, it was dark.

She was the last to go up – climbing the rope was hard enough with only one arm – and when she surfaced she found them looking at the stars.

“What?”

They pointed.

The sky was not unfamiliar, not totally, but much of the northern constellations had vanished; in the south, a strange new universe had unfolded.

“Where are we?”

None of them knew, not yet. For it would be another two days before the crippled Kitaluk ship met a stray Ilfolk war canoe.

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Maps:

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OOC:

Up to you guys. I feel like the current situation is resolved enough that we can just move into the ET, but I'm willing to do a mini-update for the most entangled parties if absolutely necessary. Once I get a feeler for people's opinions, I'll either set a deadline for the mini-update or post the ET guidelines.

And, obviously, I am so, so sorry that the update was delayed by four days. I literally fell asleep at the computer updating on Sunday, and my work ran late on Monday. I thought I would have a solid chance of getting it out sooner than this, which is why there hasn't been much word from me... So yeah, sorry.

ET guidelines will be posted in a bit.
 
Guidelines for the ET (Extended Time):

The ET (Extended Time) is an update which will cover a couple hundred years, probably on the order of 400. First of all, it's not that I like or dislike any particular time periods – nor that I don't want to play out the current chaos gradually – so much as that I'd like to reach more modern times with the NES before I turn thirty and have to quit NESing out of embarrassment. More seriously, the flip side of the fact that I can do very high-resolution updates (updates which span only ten years, or sometimes as little as five) is that we move through time very slowly, and I do want to keep the sense of moving through history, rather than keeping us in a medieval stasis.

It is also an ideal time for people to start new civilizations from the ground up, because there's a ton of time for them to develop and branch out, which would otherwise take a dozen updates (and a real life year). So tell all your friends!... Actually, just tell the ones who you like. Or, if you were thinking of hopping countries, this is an ideal time as well.

For everyone else, the number one rule is this: This update covers at least 300 years. If you do not change your country, I will.

To put that in perspective, 300 years is somewhere on the order of fifteen generations, so even if your dynasty continued from now to then unbroken, we'd be talking about the great-great-great-great-...-grandchildren of your current ruler(s). Almost everything is fair game. Your people probably won't spontaneously be exterminated, but expect to see a few countries go under or be replaced. The more you adapt, the less likely it is that you'll be the one dying.

So this is what I'd like to see your orders address (you don't have to go down the list and answer them; just address them somewhere):

1. Where is your country/culture now? Unless you have literally only just started out in the last couple of updates, things have changed since the beginning. Give a short summary of what your civilization is like at the start of the ET – even if you think I know it and you know it (both of us probably do), I'd like to have you thinking about it.

2. What happens over the ET? Over those 3-400 years, what happens. The most important facets, I think, are cultural, religious, economic, political, military, but you can include anything else you'd like: technological (within reason; we should end up at what is anywhere from a 500-600 AD Earth equivalent), environmental (did your people royally screw something up?), linguistic (I'm looking at Iggy), etc. It may be helpful to break it down into multiple sections by time period.

3. Who are the important characters? Who are the important people you want to come out of this? Rulers are obvious ones – if you have the time, a full list of your leaders through the ET would be preferable (you might want to be flexible on the dates), but I'd hope for my player base to produce a few philosophers, artists, or explorers. At the bare minimum, tell me who is the ruler by the end of the ET.

All that said, they don't have to be that long, and you can format the orders however you like, as long as somewhere in them, you answer those questions in some way or another. I like creative orders (one of my favorite ordersets in this NES was written entirely as fictive primary source documents).

I'm going to give some extra time for these orders. Ask any questions you have.

Aside:

Name stuff! I hate coming up with names, as anyone can attest. Name any cities that don't have names (almost all of you have one), name any prominent geographic features, and for goodness' sake, name the planets. I'll probably have a star chart soon so you can name stars, too. :p
 
Great update. Now I presume that our technology will advance to something close to the period of the High Middle Ages? In other words, the end of the Classical Era? This only applies, of course, if this world is advancing technologically at the same rhythm as our world.

And about possible wars, we have to think about the fate of our nation with several "what ifs". For example, "if I win this war I will do this thing ... But if I lose, I'll do something else". So I have to work with different future possibilities?
Or should I be vague in whatever relates to conflict and prefer an overview of my culture, politics, etc.. ?
 
Nice update!
 
I enjoyed reading that immensely. Good work mang.
 
Would it be possible for me to join as a city state, north of Kyumai? If so, can someone give me some info on the region?
 
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