Having only read the last paragraph (no mood to read that large slab of text) I quickly deduced it was about Byzantium.
Whenever you and Byzantium are involved you always make sure they come out on top, thats all I really need to know.
I'm surprised you aren't sick of em by now
Sigh...yeah, I figured I'd get that. However, it might make you slightly happier to know that they are but a tool for something else entirely, and will be disposed of at the proper moment.
A map! It will make more pepole to read the history iself.
Why spend effort on a map when the thing ain't done?
Write about the Turks Dachy, they are more interesting.
They are more interesting and will play a major part in the next chapter.
To make Justinian's Conquest last you need him to stop spending money like it was water. Which will mean his reign wont be as cool.
Seeing as this conquest is significantly easier to hold onto, religiously similar, and not a prime target for barbarians for another hundred years or so, it will probably last longer than the Roman hold on Italy did. And, again, this might not entirely be aimed at "Byzantines" (not quite sure what a "Byzantine" is

) surviving and/or making lasting conquests.
Very impressive, I'm glad everyone loves the grand Roman legacy rather than going for pettiness

.
Given the temporal proximity to the fall of the West and the fact that old Athalaric, as part of the second-order effects of the PoD, was schooled as his mother originally intended (in the true Late Roman tradition), it makes a good deal of sense. It also makes sense that the Arian Gothic nobles won't see things his way and will duly launch a grand rebellion.
Dis said:
And a gothic western empire sounds very interesting.
It
ain't new (sort of), but it's significantly better than just having
one Empire.
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As easy as that eh?
That's actually still in OTL events, and part of the overall legal recodification under Tribonian. Since it was a major aim of the early part of Justinian's administration, yeah, it was.