Fall From Heaven NES

From Kandros Fir of Khazad
To Rodrick Belissam of the Amurites:

I'm afraid we cannot let Kuriotates into our lands, even under the trusted Amurites. Kuriotates have been known to send emissaries trying to subvert our nation, and if you ferried some of them to your lands, some would definitely be Cardith Lorda's spies.
It is unfortunate, but Cardith Lorda's own actions made such an act of mercy too much to ask of us.

Of course, should Cardith Lorda decide to pay us the compensation that he owes us for the treacherous attack of Grindstone plains, we would reconsider this.
 
Nor, we hope, shall any unarmed refugees?

As High Admiral said, let it not be said that we are not chivalrous. Any unarmed man under a white banner of peace or scarlet banner of Sunrise shall not be hurt. This also applies to men villages.


OOC: Lesser chiefs do not really adore Brandon's decision... But Brandon, in contact with Kuritate culture, begun to form a new view of horsemen - a shiny valorous knight with strong moral code of laws..
 
From Kandros Fir of Khazad
To Rodrick Belissam of the Amurites:

I'm afraid we cannot let Kuriotates into our lands, even under the trusted Amurites. Kuriotates have been known to send emissaries trying to subvert our nation, and if you ferried some of them to your lands, some would definitely be Cardith Lorda's spies.
It is unfortunate, but Cardith Lorda's own actions made such an act of mercy too much to ask of us.

Of course, should Cardith Lorda decide to pay us the compensation that he owes us for the treacherous attack of Grindstone plains, we would reconsider this.

The khazad have long been freinds and partners to the amurites and we respect their decision but none-the-less, we are at pains to accept the useless and senseless slaughter of innocents that might occur.

alternatively, we offer a compromise to the khazad... all refugees may be examined by the khazad as they travel with the amurite refugee column. we will lend mind magic to assist their analysis should they wish...

for the sake of mortal life and for the sake of our close and continued friendship, we ask for you to assist us and reach a mutually acceptable compromise.
 
algeroth is pretty quiet lately...
any voice regarding our offer before we try to convince those who may not want to be convinced?
 
"Why do we go there, dad?" Todus 'Toddler' Kuderk kept asking his father Gimros.
"I don't want to go to the Nashol Treasure Building. It's big and ugly. Why do we go there?"
- It's called the National Treasure Protection Facility, son. It's not ugly, it's made of the hardest stone we have around Khazak. And it's even bigger underneath."
- But what's it for? Noone ever goes there. I don't want to go. They say you won't get out if you get in."
- Good dwarves get out. It's only evil people who stay in. The Facility is there to hold those enemies of us who want to ..."
Gimros Kuderk paused for dramatic effect so his son would listen carefully.
"To STEAL our gold."
Toddler stopped short. His father never used rude words. This word. He had said it once in his bed, when noone could hear, because Toddler, like all children, liked to say forbidden words. Now, he gaped and repeated:
"To.. steal?"
"Yes, boy. And there are thieves held there now. Humans from the evil Kuriotate lands, who attacked us in Grindstone plains and sneaked into our country to take our gold away. You must come with me see them judged. It's my duty to educate you."

Toddler didn't speak during the rest of the short trip. He was going to see THIEVES. KURIOTATES. EVIL men. All of a sudden, Khazak dungeon looked both more gloomy and more attractive.
As the Kuderk family moved on, they were joined by a throng of people. Soon, it was a crowd they were walking with, and Toddler wasn't seeing much, but the top of the big building became visible. Toddler walked past a guard who was handling walkers big pebbles.
"Gifts of Kilmorph", he said, handling one to Gimros. "Can I have one?" asked Toddler. The guard cast a glance at Gimros, who nodded, and the guard gave the boy a pebble.

Toddler looked at it as they walked on. It was a small stone, which fit very well in his hand. But it would hurt if you clenched your fist around it. It had some sharp sides. The boy wondered why the soldier gave them. It was nice to be given something in the name of Kilmorph, but this one looked like a very simple, worthless stone, like so many they were stepping upon at the same time. He was going to ask his father why it was exceptional, when they stopped.
Toddler looked up. He couldn't see very well, being so small, but a big platform had been set up, and there was a tall dwarf there. Someone nearby whispered his name: "Kandros Fir". It was the First Consul himself! Toddler was so happy. He had never seen him, but he knew him: He was one of the richest dwarves in Khazak!

As Kandros started speaking, Toddler forgot about the big dungeon, the pebble, the uncomfortable crowd.
The First Consul talked of treason and betrayal. Toddler didn't follow everything, but it was obvious that SOMEONE had been doing bad things.
When Fir said that Kuriotates had been perverting some priests of Kilmorph, the crowd stirred. Toddler huddled near his father, afraid. He could feel the resentment of the crowd as Kandros Fir enumerated the clans who had lost some of their youth in Grindstone plains.
"They invaded us with weapons, and we drove them away. Now, they realise they can't invade us, so they try to pervert our ways! I have proofs!" thundered the leader.
Kandros Fir turned and raised an arm. The impressive stone doors of the National Treasure Protection Facility opened, and several guards marched out, surrounding two big bleaky figures. Far too tall to be dwarves.
Kuriotates.
"THEY tried to lure us. THEY lied to us, trying to corrupt even our priests!"
As Kandros Fir talked, his strong voice booming, the crowd reacted. Toddler felt the anger now. But he was no longer afraid. The anger of the crowd wasn't directed against him. It was against THEM. The Kuriotates. Toddler felt excited. He started playing with his pebble, expectant of what was to come as Kandros Fir started speaking again. Toddler heard the words, but somehow, it was like his brain didn't understand them. It was more like his body reacted to them directly.
The First Consul revealed that the Kuriotates had corrupted priest Nashin Ki. And the crowd booed "HOOooooo..."
And priests Egos Ryas and Bigus Veren.
"HOOOoooooo..." "HOOOOooooooo..."
As the names were listed, some priests, some small traders and a known beggar, the crowd seethed with anger. When Toddler heard his father mutter "Bastards", he himself was too angered to realise the obscenity the calm, gentle, polite, Gimros Kuderk had just said.

"So these Kuriotate spies will be punsihed! People of Khazak, it's up to you to judge them. Let them know what it means to defy Kilmorph and the Khazad!"
Kandros Fir moved away, out of the platform, and the two prisoners were pushed forward.
They looked big. Dirty. Scary.
Suddenly, one of them flinched.
The guards around them moved away quickly.
The man lifted his hand, touched his cheek and looked at his fingers whose tip was red.
The second man looked around him. Toddler recognised the look in his eyes. It was the same look the boar had when his clan had been hunting. When the boar had charged, impaling himself on the boar-spear of uncle Tobias. It was a look of fear and danger. The man was going to charge. He was going to attack!
The Kuriotate was going to charge them!
Toddler lifted his hand, and around him, many dwarves did the same. And Toddler hurled his pebble at the man. And around him, many dwarves did the same. Soon all the dwarves started sending the convicts gifts of Kilmorph.
"Death!" shouted Toddler's neighbour. "Down with the Kurios" screamed a woman to their right.
When they had thrown their first stone, the dwarves bent and picked up another one. And they hurled them, amidst cries of "Death to the spies! Death to the Kurios! Down with them! Thieves! Murderers! Pay for your crimes! Heretics!".
Most of the pebbles were small. Most of the pebbles missed their targets.
But they were many.

When there was only big rocks left under their feet, the crowd settled down. Slowly, they started moving. A slow, terrible procession, as dwarf after dwarf walked grimly past the two humps of bleeding flesh and protruding bones that had been Kuriotate spies. Toddler kicked one of the corpses when he moved by it. It felt good but his father dragged him. "Enough, it's over now."
On the way home, people didn't speak much. Toddler himself didn't speak. But he was proud. He had killed a spy, he had dispensed justice.
 
The khazad have long been freinds and partners to the amurites and we respect their decision but none-the-less, we are at pains to accept the useless and senseless slaughter of innocents that might occur.

alternatively, we offer a compromise to the khazad... all refugees may be examined by the khazad as they travel with the amurite refugee column. we will lend mind magic to assist their analysis should they wish...

for the sake of mortal life and for the sake of our close and continued friendship, we ask for you to assist us and reach a mutually acceptable compromise.
We do not want senseless slaughter. If you lend us mind magic to make sure that the people are indeed refugees, and make sure that all spies are executed, then we will let you take refugees safely back to your lands.

As you can see, and contrary to what Cardith Lorda believes, we are not merciless. We just don't want to be deceived again.
 
We know that the Khazad are not merciless; indeed we know the Khazad are GOOD people and our longtem friends and allies.

As you can see, and contrary to what Cardith Lorda believes, we are not merciless. We just don't want to be deceived again.

This is acceptable with us... now we only await the Cardith Lorda's opinion and permission.

And... good story.
 
From: Kandros Fir
To: Amurites, Balseraphs

Your trade routes in Kuriotate lands are currently compromised because of the war Cardith Lorda brought upon himself.
Since Khazads love our eastern and southern neighbours, we would hate to see them lose money because of this infortunate situation in the North.
This is why we suggest a more beneficial destination for your goods. You named it: Khazad. One of my trade route is currently headed towards a friendly country in exchange for some service. This trade route could be redirected elsewhere in case I was to receive a new one in exchange.

(edit: Ooops... bad From first time)
 
OOC: The Calabim applaud an excellent story, but are dissapointed that the Khazad Judical system is so soft on its convicts :p.
 
While the Amurite senate is fully in support of the free movement of goods and trade between nations, we cannot stand idly by as our craftsmen arm every nation of Erebus without an appreciation for the international balance of power and how their weapons affect that.

Previously, any nation had been capable of purchasing Amurite scrolls, amulets, firebows etc to arm a unit for 30 gold (production cost).
This is now illegal.
All purchases of magical arms or armour must now be approved by the senate and we will prevent or tax the sale of these weapons as we see fit.
 
Which nations will be allowed to purchase your weapons? Anyone not at war with the kuriotates? If this is correct I will be seriously disappinted.
 
Just a note that exam is done and I feel that burden is off my shoulders :) regardless of the results (but I'm optimistic :))
I'll be redesigning spreadsheets, streamlining stuff and seek some improvements in following days.
 
Excellent. I will have a long list of calabim-favouring rule changes ready for you ;).
 
I need to hear from the Kuriotates regarding my humanatarian proposal before i can submit orders but otherwise i think i am mostly done.
 
I'm waiting for the Lanun and Hippus to reply back before I send my orders.
 
This is only proposed:


First reform:

All nations that previously had 3 trade routes are now expanded to 4. This reflects latest changes and development of these nations (well svart are a bit overstretch :)) and relative weakening of Kurios and even former powerhouse Balseraph. Amurites do stand out a bit, shadowing even previously strongest Balseraphs, but not so much to have additional trade route.


Change numero duo:

As now everyone has 4 trade routes, I will halve them and make them easier to track.. Now everyone has 2, that bring 10 gpt! Yay!

You do trade with everyone a bit, but with those with trade routes you trade most.

Now please everyone reassign trade routes, to make me start fresh.

It is intentional that ports and foreign trade are now weaker. Foreign trade MIGHT be boosted to +2 gold from trade, if it shows necessary.

Number of ports is limited by number of trade routes you can send. Now pay a bit attention in what you export/import so I can assign a bonus or two if it's proper.

Also, switching trade routes is now harder. It requires one turn to set up a trade route, in addition for possible stability or gold or similar penalty for import/export break.
 
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