Fall From Heaven NES

OOC: Nice story, but you know Alexis and Flauros had been humans raised by Os Gabella to begin with? The story of Alexis as counted by Kael is a bit different. The interesting part in his story being this:
(from http://fallfromheaven.wikia.com/wiki/Alexis or in-game)
Over the next few centuries, she shared the secret with her brother and they parted from their immortal mother and began hunting men in a variety of guises. One life could extend their own for 20-30 years so they didn't hunt often but they were a legendary threat to men from creation.
I don't know what you want to do of this, but it's an interesting base, meaning that in a human's lifetime, a vampire actually needs to "eat" only two or maybe three times.
 
Yeah I know I have mostly chucked the official lore out the window :p. This is my version of the Calabim story.

In my version, All vampires are immortal, so if they don't feed they still won't die. The only way they can be killed is through violent means. Vampire's feed to avoid the dark spiral of becoming a Brujah, a heartless, bearly sentinent monster. They also feed to cleanse the sins of the person, who then goes on to Aeron's Vault.

The only way my judical system works is down to the fact that Vampire's don't really need to feed very often, but sometimes the more sadistic or radical ones decide to do a little extra sin-purging, these vampires are generally more alert and powerful because they are always fully fed. The first changes a Vampire has when they do not feed is decreasing reaction times and perception of things going on around them.
 
I know you're ignoring the canon lore, that's fine the stories are still good, but you reversed Alexis and Flauros! Alexis is the brutal aggressive one, and Flauros is kinda like how you're Alexis is. Very odd.
Seems odd the Aeron, God of Rage and Lust would care so much about the Brujah. Though, they seem a bit more in touch with Camulos.
Anyways, lore changes or not, your stories are still amazing reads.
 
Out of my own curiosity, what (if anything) is going on with the Malakim and the orcs at R'Rgorac? Didn't they used to hate each other?

Malakim are bunch of tribes living in poor, sparse, infertile desert that is scarcely populated. Unless someone invests in their agriculture and irrigation system, and then in unifying them, they aren't quick to civilize (not that they won't).

Orcs are gathering powers, and if history teaches us anything, nearby civilizations should be aware.

Orcs do not discriminate, they hate all humans equally, it was just that Malakim were least powerful and easiest prey. After Grindstone massacre, they hate Dwarves even more.
 
I know you're ignoring the canon lore, that's fine the stories are still good, but you reversed Alexis and Flauros! Alexis is the brutal aggressive one, and Flauros is kinda like how you're Alexis is. Very odd.
Seems odd the Aeron, God of Rage and Lust would care so much about the Brujah. Though, they seem a bit more in touch with Camulos.
Anyways, lore changes or not, your stories are still amazing reads.

Yeah, I didn't really plan the whole Alexis-Flauros swap, but I understand the irony of it. I am going to portray Flauros as the Knight in Shining Armour gone wrong, I think. Also, In this version of the Lore, Aeron is good, or at least neutral. I guess that would make him the God of Love or something, the opposite of Hate/rage.

Thanks for the compliments guys.
 
Malakim are bunch of tribes living in poor, sparse, infertile desert that is scarcely populated. Unless someone invests in their agriculture and irrigation system, and then in unifying them, they aren't quick to civilize (not that they won't).

Orcs are gathering powers, and if history teaches us anything, nearby civilizations should be aware.

Orcs do not discriminate, they hate all humans equally, it was just that Malakim were least powerful and easiest prey. After Grindstone massacre, they hate Dwarves even more.

Thanks, Jopa.

It appears that pillaging is not taken well by most people. Huh. Well, to each his own, and the Lanun know that pillaging is a very effective - and profitable.
 
Yeah, I didn't really plan the whole Alexis-Flauros swap, but I understand the irony of it. I am going to portray Flauros as the Knight in Shining Armour gone wrong, I think. Also, In this version of the Lore, Aeron is good, or at least neutral. I guess that would make him the God of Love or something, the opposite of Hate/rage.

Thanks for the compliments guys.

Yeah, I have no problem with straying from the lore as long as it is good, fun and still remains 'our FfH'. In fact it makes game fun, it would be BAD if we knew that X will ally Y to fight Z.

But I did envision Aeron as remaining God of Hate and vampires as using unholy rites. So vampires could do 'good' things, be morally 'good', but would still be under evil god and use evil rites, so many priests would rightfully consider them 'unholy'.

There is difference in being good or 'good' in FfH sense. The very same difference that makes Basium good, even if he doesn't hesitate to slay innocents and make 'evil' acts.
 
Yeah, I didn't really plan the whole Alexis-Flauros swap, but I understand the irony of it. I am going to portray Flauros as the Knight in Shining Armour gone wrong, I think. Also, In this version of the Lore, Aeron is good, or at least neutral. I guess that would make him the God of Love or something, the opposite of Hate/rage.

Thanks for the compliments guys.


So, in this Lore, Aeron has not fallen... but some of his angels have... that's interesting... (in exchange, maybe you should have one of the Current Neutral Fall...)
 
Well that's up to Jopa, us Calabim would never dream of messing with the business of other nations ;).

But yes I am running a much more neutral then cannon version of the Calabim here, whether that makes Aeron neutral or not I odn't know. I picture him as a kind of jealous lover, affectionate but venegful. This would be perfectly represented in his archangels.

Alexis = affection
Flauros = revenge
 
(ooc: you jsut gave me an interesting idea: Alexis and Flauros are the twin Archangels of Aeron (no Odio in this...) similar to Arawn's twin archangels Basium and Gyra...)
 
Titus Karbhen the younger entered the tent with Varn Ibnel Assar Ben Yusuf.
-Greetings, questor Karbhen, said the Malakim elder. I am happy to meet a Khazad magistrate in my humble encampment. Please sit down, R'laina will be bringing tea soon.
Titus sat as requested, and pitied once again that strange Malakim habit of drinking hot water instead of beer. After years of contact, he was still unable to like the beverage. But he wasn't there for pleasure, and he would just do what the elder asked him in order to be able to talk business.

This was another frustrating Malakim habit. Dwarves tended to be blunt and to the point. Malakim needed all kinds of ceremonies before you could start talking to them. It took some time to understand them and all the subtleties. For instance, at first, Varn would serve tea himself, which looked like a great honor he did his guest. Now, he let his daughter serve. The difference was subtle, and actually ment that the dwarf was now trusted enough to see the (veiled) woman. It was a proof of trust, among the biggest ones Malakim would give.

So it was only after some polite but lengthy chat about the sand, weather, the health of the clan and of the camels that Titus managed to get to the subject he wanted to discuss. And when he had finished talking about the business he had planned to do, he asked a last question.

-Tell me, Varn. Who was this man whose corpse you burnt last night? I confess I was quite surprised, I thought you buried your dead in the sand. Who was he to be treated differently? Excuse my ignorance, but was it for shame or honor that he was burnt?
-It was neither, dear questor. This man was a stranger. This is why we burnt him, so his soul can fly with the smoke and find its way home.
-A stranger? Was he a Balseraph?
-No. He was a white man. He came from the east, the land of the orcs. Maybe you would like to hear his story?
-I would certainly be glad.
-R'laina, please come here and tell our friend about the stranger.

The woman silently arrived, and knelt by her father. She looked at him, then at the dwarf, and started her tale, half speaking, half singing, sometimes interrupting her tale to sing a meaningless song of vowels.

-When the moon was high in the sky, three nights ago, Sami Er Gosaul Ur Q'antar saw the silhouette of a man staggering at the top of a dune. He immediately called other men, and went towards the unexpected silhouette.
-Iiiya uuuruu ualaaaali...
-The man fell down the dune before Sami could reach him. He was unconscious and alone, and the men brought him to our tent, as my father Varn is our healer and wise man.
-Uuealla iiri uainua...
-He was a white man, as you already know, but he was badly burnt by the sun. He hardly wore any clothes, and those few rags he had were torn and blood-soaked. His back was full of scars, as if he had been repeatedly whipped, and the fingers of both his hands had been broken, and the nails plugged out. One of his eyes was an empty socket, and the other remained closed. He breathed with difficulty and had very little life in him.
-Oooooooohh Auhaari oooooohh...
-Father Varn tended him as he could, but it seems his body was even more bruised inside than on the outside. Behind his ear, we saw a still fresh scar of burnt flesh in the shape of an axe, the symbol of Gr'umar the orcish chief who haunts the northern hills of R'rgorak. It was obvious he had been tortured by the orcs.

The elder interrupted his daughter as she started chanting again.
-You must learn, questor Karbhen, that orcs burn their slaves to better claim them. Also they often send prisoners or rebelllious slaves to their death this way: They mutilate them and send them into the desert without protection against the sun. It's exceptional that one of them survives to the night. Now resume your tale, daughter.

-The man remained unconscious for two days before his soul decided to leave. But in the meantime, his body recovered enough and tried to fight the death that waited for him. In his fateful fight, he became delirious, and talked and writhed.
-Ooooooh Pain Pain Pain Pain Eeeeariiii...
-He talked about orcs and a king. He talked about a wife, and all his life seemed to fight its way out of his mouth so that we who heard it would remember some of it. But mostly he kept repeating the same sentences:
-I will serve, milord, in a hushed tone.
-Great Gr'umar, grant me an audience, in an obsequious voice.
-Why, we are your friends, as a frightened child.
-The dwarves are your enemies, not us, alternating terror and anger.
-Kill them, not me, in the despaired voice of the already doomed.

She paused for a moment, and then finished her tale:
-The last words that he uttered were these, in the tone of a child who's been betrayed by his friend or unjustly punished by his master, just beofre his chest would rise for the last time:
-Why did I have to die, o Cardith Lorda?

...

The woman stood up, bowed, and left the tent.
Varn and Titus remained silent for a while, and then the elder offered his guest a last cup of tea. The meeting was over, and Titus would leave now, bringing home one more proof of Kuriotates actions and orcish cruelty. But he kept wondering on the way home, what could it mean for the Malakim to have a tale sung by a woman?
 
Has ANYONE heard from Algeroth since the update? This fellow seems very busy.

i.
 
OOC: Bah engineers, I dislike math. I'm going for a degree in molecular genetics. Trying to become a genetic engineer, complete opposite end of the spectrum as far as you guys in science. Sorry had get my two cents in.


WOOHOO!!! Molecular virologist here!
Sorry to say but theres still some maths in it.
My two cents also.
 
Has ANYONE heard from Algeroth since the update? This fellow seems very busy.

i.

Man, it could be worse. Much worse.

merciary: Ahh....molecular genetic. Are you guys somewhere out there despised as much as here by other biologist?

Also, is there anything important in Kol's stories?
 
Its a good read for the sake of entertainment. Its better then most novels i've read (honestly).
It also provides a background for the changes taking place in Calabim society.
Strictly speaking, you can play without reading it- but if you have 10min, then read it; its honestly very good stuff.

i.
 
'key I will give it a time tomorrow. Cardith Lorda have an difficult decision to make.

Meanwhile continue in squabbling and bickering, it finally seems to look good, only the condition of Kuriotates prevents me from taking part of it.
 
Man, it could be worse. Much worse.

merciary: Ahh....molecular genetic. Are you guys somewhere out there despised as much as here by other biologist?

Also, is there anything important in Kol's stories?

Beats me if we're hated, I'm a freshman and haven't even started taking advance classes yet, just getting all the required stuff out of the way.
 
All right, now we're getting somewhere...

Algeroth, no pressure, but there are at least THREE nations that are WAITING FOR YOU TO DO SOMETHING BEFORE THEY CAN MAKE ANY MEASURABLE PROGRESS. ;)

So when you have time, could you maybe respond to the myriad PM's and other posts? Thanks.

... and by the way, good writing to all.



to arcticnight wolf: I don't speak czech, but it could mean "bubble fizz wallet hammertime car song". I'm not saying it does, but it could.
 
I answered these I know answers on. Well rather vaguely, but I answered.

And if you have nothing to do, you could take a stance on the Amurite-Calabim....disagreement.
 
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